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Gunia

@|Persephone|

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

OMG! You are an amazing writer! The entire thing was written so perfectly from the descriptions to the emotions to the dialogues! Kudos! The entire scene was very believable and something I can actually see play out in the show at some point!

Great job! It was a pleasure to read and I hope you write more!

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aafii

@aafii

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

omg...it is a finnest piece dear...
just love it...

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

beautiful os

loved it

loved the conversation confrontation between paro n rudra

both has pain in their life but they dealt with it differently

pls do write more

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Loved it, S..:)

What stood out for me was Rudra speaking his mind and heart...just a little maybe but he did. And I loved it.. So , I am happy that the hope which flared in Paaro s heart does have a chance. Beautiful.

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Sidda

@Sidda8

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Thanks for this lovely OS on PaRud!

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

It was lovely

Loved the bit where he opened up and Paro closed the distance

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1sarun

@1sarun

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Lovely piece of writing. Loved reading it.

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

It helps that I don't watch the show...It doesnt help that thanks to these wonderful pieces - i feel like watching the show

What a stunning piece - and most because I love that this Rudra (or could he be called the ocean in some other avatar) - acknowledges that he cannot change and that the woman he craves, the one who craves him - is waiting for a change that romantic notions will tell us are plausible, real even

You have always had a way with words but this piece actually strips off some of the civility that I associate with your words and brings purely raw emotion that I think this show is about

I love having such stunning pieces of you to read in the morning, first day of the week!

Keep them coming! (Yes, I guess I am encouraging emotional blackmail :))

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

The best thing about your Os'es or any piece you write is your wisdom before you even start the piece. The little words of wisdom that show how beautiful as a person you are.

As for the OS, its beautiful how strong you have shown Paro, in fact Rudra seems weak in this one for me, from a point of view of vulnerability. He is feeling all those things he cant control, and she already knows what all that is, and so she does what she can to get him out of it, slowly opening him, and thats why she feels like she went somewhere with him today.

Great OS...:)

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shutter

@shutter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

A wonderfully written OS... Paro wants to help and be with Rudra while he is scared of opening up and letting her into his life... But somehow Paro managed to get to him, and voila he did tell her the reason for his fears... Loved the entire progression of thoughts and talks...

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