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NaijaLuv88

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Lovely OS👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Just so beautiful and the part that really got me was when he caught her and described her as a doll so beautiful

Why do I feel like several months down the line when these two are actually in love with one another that this will happen? it describes the dynamics or the eventual dynamics of these two relationship

Thanks so much for the OS was really enjoyable to read and not at all cliche.

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Aashi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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For a second I thought Rudra was dead 😳

Phew ...he is not

Lovely OS

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Posted: 11 years ago

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This was beautiful, well explained I guess, you know I don't read fam fiction other than written on Arshi, but this was my first exception and I like it.

Good job 👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Aashi--

For a second I thought Rudra was dead 😳
Phew ...he is not
Lovely OS

Haha I couldn't just kill him off!

Thank you 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: binimoti
This was beautiful, well explained I guess, you know I don't read fam fiction other than written on Arshi, but this was my first exception and I like it.
Good job 👍🏼

Aw thank you so much!

I know this was my first time writing something based on a different couple.

😊

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Skyfall

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: najialuv88
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Lovely OS👏
Just so beautiful and the part that really got me was when he caught her and described her as a doll so beautiful
Why do I feel like several months down the line when these two are actually in love with one another that this will happen? it describes the dynamics or the eventual dynamics of these two relationship
Thanks so much for the OS was really enjoyable to read and not at all cliche.

Awww thank you so much for the lovely comment!

I do hope we get to see a scene something like this 😳

Thank you! 😃😃

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NaijaLuv88

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Posted: 11 years ago

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