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Originally posted by: ..SanzLicious..

I'm speechless. This was absolutely beautiful. I can imagine this happening - we have a long way to go before it actually can happen, of course - but the scene you wrote - it speaks to me.

I can see that you haven't lost their characterization and this is PaRud's kind of conversation. It's emotionally stirring and the hug, and the initial fear was felt.

I am absolutely blown away by the way it was so emotionally evocative 😳

Paro and Rudra And no matter what, he is her Rudra, in the very end.

This is FANTASTIC. 😳 I'm so gushing! 😆 But ... you're a PHENOMENAL writer based on this OS. It was realistic, beautiful, and soul-stirring!

Hats off! And your DP 😳 Deepika is flawless too! :P 😳

Originally posted by: Kajol17

Oh my goodness, that was so beautiful! I almost teared up, touched my heart. The emotion, *fans herself* WHEW! 😃

While reading through I thought Rudra was going to be dead and that sort of killed my desire to read but I couldn't stop, I was so good. And how he said Paro should have a record for how many times she faints was ADORABLE! I loved it, great job!👏⭐️ You should write more stories you have HUGE talent!

It's Awesome

Reserved, will comment on the OneShot soon, bookmarking for now :)

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Beautiful os

loved it

loved how u beautifully described paro's tension

first the suspense create then how u united them

loved their interaction

n rudra's description about paro so beautiful serene

loved it

Originally posted by: napstermonster

Excellent, poignant, and not a ALL a cliche or a tired concept--and I'm the world's most nit-picky reader, stingy with my praise! Emotional, wonderful. I'm off to to read your Arhi Fan fiction! Thank you for five minutes of a truly great reading experience!

Beautiful OS. Hope to see something like this on the show after some time.