Why did I stand still ?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I was all prepared to shoot her,to shoot that traitor who dared to think that she could outwit me. Me,Rudra Pratap Ranawat,who was feared by even the mightiest of them.

With those innocent eyes swimming with tears,with the fake frightened expression she sported,wanting to sway me,I wanted to take her life away then and there. I remembered how my father used to keep saying that beautiful women were not to be trusted and my anger increased proportionally.



And there she was standing defenceless in front of me and with just a pull of a trigger ,I could have ended everything.But why did I get this strange feeling every time I looked at her ? This feeling that I had to protect her. Protect ? Why would I want to protect this girl whom I didn't even know ?

Why was I getting this feeling that the innocence was true ,that she was just as delicate as she looked. Delicate ? Why would I care even if she was ?

Why did I want to remove that fear from her face ? To just have my arms around her,feel her warmth and the intoxicating scent of her.

What was this irrational feeling I had when she was just another one of those traitors I loathed ?

What was this inexplicable emotion I was feeling and why did I stand there motionless ,looking at her,when all I had to do was end her ?

Why ? Why ? Why ? And I realised that I had no answer.
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Tanisha99 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome post.. Loved each and every words you have written..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice post and beautifully written dear .Rudra's emotions are so well written dear . I so wanted some one to write about that scene , breath taking .
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Originally posted by: Tanisha99

Awesome post.. Loved each and every words you have written..😊

Thank you so much dear 😳 That scene,the way his expressions changed as he looked at her,it was a breathtaking scene so I really wanted to write about Rudra's point of view in that one particular scene so I thought of making this post 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jaz1990

Rudra thoughts, bravo

Thank you!! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -sweetgal19-

Thank you so much dear 😳 That scene,the way his expressions changed as he looked at her,it was a breathtaking scene so I really wanted to write about Rudra's point of view in that one particular scene so I thought of making this post 😳

Indeed.. I have already seen that partcular scence for more than 10 times.. I am going crazy..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice post and the way you put out Rudras thoughts was amazing..hope he was thinking like that though😳
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Like your post good and perfect words..keep it up
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Lovely post, Abhi ...
Rudra's thoughts ... beautiful!!! 😳
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Awesome post , very we'll written

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