KISMAT CONNECTION (SS) pt16(end) pg 28 dec 14 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi friends...first of all thanks for liking my simple story and my simple way of writing..thanksguys...

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pt 2


little introduction about sunil and sharma..here it goes...

sunil and sharma r childhood friends...they studied together...

they both worked together..they did a lot of hardwork and they

became a very good business man...they both bought the house together...

and they lived together as a family...

sunils wife is madhavi...sharmas wife is vidhya...they also became friends...

they too adjusted to the family...they decided if they have a son and

daughter they will get them married ...but unfortunately...

both had sons first...akshay sunils son and sanjay sharmas son...

but fate is there sunil had shaan as a second son and sharma got

khanak as their daughter...they felt really happy...

even madhavi and vidhya agreed to it...shaan went to hostel for

schooling..wat he asked it was done..he wanted to do schooling in hostel..

so he went...and he went to higer studies to usa...he came to house rarely...

whenever he come there will be fight between shaan and khanak...

so mostly they avoided eachother presence...

akshay was married to khusbhoo and sanjay was married to anjali...

they had kids...akshay had twins...tarun and tanvi...

sanjay had a son rishi...kids mostly enjoy with khanak...

kids love khanak so much...she used to play with them like a kid...



shaan and khanak lying in their bed in their rooms...

they closed their eyes and recalled three days back...

in the dinning hall all were sitting and having there breakfast...

sunil : sharma ...lets have this weekend...

sharma : ummm...we can make arrangements...

shaan was busy in his cell and eating...while khanak was

teling to the kids and saying something...

madhavi : we have to say to them na...

vidhya : ha...we must...

akshay : wat ..wat is happening..sanjay do u know anything...

sanjay : no i dont know...ha ma wats going on...

elders looked at shanak but shanak r in their world...

they both took waters and they were drinking...

sunil : shaan and khanaks wedding...want them to get married to eachother..

both shaan and khanak spitted water out and they both caughed...

everyone looked at them...they both looked at eachother...

akshay : wow thats a good news na sanjay...

sanjay : thats a great news...

both shaan and khanak got up to leave...

sunil : beta wait...

they both were standing shaan was looking at his phone...

khanak was looking at kids...

sunil : wats ur...

shanak : not intersted...

they both left the place...shaan went out to office in his car...

while khanak went to her room took her bag and she went to college...

later in the night after finishing dinner...they were sitting in hall...

elders looked at shaan and khanak ...shaan was busy in his lappy...

while khanak was teling story to the kids...

they were sitting as if nothing they heard in the morning...

sunil : we want to talk with u guys...please listen...

khusbhoo and anjali took the kids to the room...

shaan and khanak were just sitting quietly...

sunil : see beta..we have planned this when u guys born...

shaan : dad dont start like filmy thing...listen i am not intersted in marraige...

if u want me to get married it would not be her...pointing at khanak...

khanaks anger raised...

khanak : hey u...i am not waiting for u and i am not asking u to marry me...

papa i am not marrying him...

shaan : please dont force me in this..

khanak : papa leave this..i have to complete my studies first...

both went to their rooms..they closed the door with a bang...

next day morning...after breakfast..shaan was checking his lappy

in the hall...khanak was in her room taking her books...

sunil : madhavi go...

sharma : vidhya go...

madhavi : iam afraid sunil...

vidhya: ha me too..u can talk these na...

sunil : come on go before they go out...

vidhya went to khanaks room...

vidhya : beta...

khanak : mom if u r talking about marriage i am not going to listen...

vidhya : wat..u r talking to me like this...u dont respect me at all...

u have to marry shaan okay its our decision...if not...

khanak : wat if not...looking at her mom...

vidhya : i will die...

meanwhile in hall...

madhavi : beta listen..she is good girl...she is good match for u...

shaan : please stop this..leave me from this...i am not intersted...

madhavi : please listen to me..i want her to be my MIL...if not...

shaan : wat mom ..come on finish it...

madhavi : i will die...

shaan and khanak laughed on hearing that...

shaan : r u kidding mom...

khanak : nice joke mom...joke of the year...

vidhya: i am serious...

madhavi : i am telling u its serious...

shaan : joke is enough..see u mom l am getting late...

khanak : mom i am having seminar..let me hear ur jokes in the evening okay...

their parents were standing still...

sharma : sunil shall we leave them...

sunil : no...lets start our next plan...

madhavi : no...no...i am not doing that...

vidhya: ha..no no i am not going to do it...

madhavi : u guys do it..drink poistion we r not...

sunil : ...if we go u guys will be happy a lot...ha...

madhavi: come on sunil..we will try something else...

sunil : no this one only...

madhavi : no i am not going to drink poison...

sunil : hey just acting only...i have talked with rajiv..we can go to his hospital

and we can start our next act...

they all went to rajivs hospital...as planned they went to the room

two beds were placed with machines around...

madhavi : sunil...i am reallly afraid...lets change the plan...

u both lay down wat say vidhya..

vidhya: ha madhavi..

they both tried sharma and sunil to lay down...

sunil : hey..u both should only do this...

madhavi : i am not really feeling good on seeing thse machines...

i feel like vomiting and i dont like this bed...its not sponge...

vidhya : ha..its not neat..i am like fainting..on smelling this hospital smell...

before sunil and sharma could say thing to them...

madhavi vomited and vidhya fainted down...




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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
LOOOL
they are sooo funnny, what a hilarious family niki loool
hahaha
xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG !!!
these parents r really very dangerous so much biggg plan inhone toh hum baccho ko bhi piche chod diya
WOW i loved this drama becahre madhvi and vidya unhe sirf act karna tha lekin hospital ko dekh ke sach me bemar pad gaye
but we should not force them na but for our shanak everything is possible
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

hilarious update niki!!!!!! god deir parents r too much...🤣

shanak r true enemy...good poor deir mom dey were thniking of acting n bth actually went to hospital beds..🤣

cant ait fr nxt!!!!!!!!!! update soon...

superlike dis ss👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Niki...😊
Another SS Great yaar!!!!! Big hug 2 u🤗

Wow!!!! nice start Shanak Wedding as well as the their hating they r hate each other still they r marrying... Interesting😊
About this Part GOD!!!! ONe family Enough For me but now khanak Family also the Totally MAd family yaar !!!! NIce Idea of Blackmailing...🤣
sunil and sharam uff!!!!! what happen next??? this flashback scene - before three days means shanak merraige happen within 2 days great!!!!!
Looking Forwards to next part update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Gosh !!! this One was seriously hilarious 🤣 Bacche toh bacche Baap rey Baap 😛 They wanted Shanak to get married at any cost ...& they are fully preparied with Plan A & B 😆 this was really filmy they had decided to get their childs married ...This sounds like 'Kyun naa hum dosti mein rishtedaari mein badal de' 😛 Perfect Filmy scene ...& Shaan said it correct to stop the filmygiri. 😆 Shanak dont like each other & here parents are ready to tie then in a life long relationship their Plan B is khatarnaak ...LOl drama 😛 Both the Mum's are scard but hubbys are just too much ,,,,,,,& finally they landed up in hospital for final show down but mum's are in terrible state now

I am sorry but i didnt understand one thing. Shanak are bot matured elders. didnt their parents thought about asking their wish once before starting preps 😕 both are in a stage where liking towards opposite gender is normal. 😊 or they might be in a serious relationship too. I just wonder why their parents didnt thought abt it once. 😕 I just hope they would have at least discussed. 😊

LOved the family intro 😃 Got to know about the familys bonding & relation 😃

Waiting for next ...Continue soon

Love
Pranjal.
Edited by -pranjal- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omgeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what an update 😆
loved it, their parent are really funny omgeee!!!!!!!!!!!!
when they thy will die both said what a joke
sunil n sharma want them to hv poison 🤣 kya plan ha dono ka apni biwi ya ko rastese nikal neh ka 😆 just kidding
both Madhvi and Vidya said u drink poison 😆 lovely yaar
the hospital part was awesome 😆 madhvi vomit and vidya faint poor mummies 😆
kya kya karna parta hai bacho keh khateer
waiting for next and see shanak reaction
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
WOW Niki!!
your back with another story!! Thank you so much!!
Loved both the updates...
OMG!! seriously!! mujhe nahi pata tha, ki maa baap aise bhi kar sakthe hain!! LOL!!
aise ideas sirf aapki dimaag ke liye aa sakthi hain!! kudos!!!
abb kya hogaya, sachi main unn dono ko hospitalize toh nahi karna padega na??
Waiting for next one..
Update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lol azab shanak ki gazab family...😆
they are hilarious with their acts...😆

nice SS niki...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aasma1

LOOOL
they are sooo funnny, what a hilarious family niki loool
hahaha
xx


thanks a lot man...

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