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Part 23
In Jaanvi 's room
Khanak and Nidhi make Jaanu ready; they did her makeup and hair
Nidhi was very excited about Khanak's shaadi she started to ask her about the
guy and at the same time they were too getting ready.
Nidhi: Khanak !!!!!!! tum toh bari chupi rustam nikli, shaadi karrahihe aur
hame bataya bhi nahi
Khanak: woh Nidhi''''''''''''
She didn't know what to say and Nidhi cut her off
Nidhi: wese Khanak '.. woh dikhne main kesa hai ." she said dreamily
Jaanu was ready watching them she spoke
Jaanu: Nidhi tum Khanak se kyu pooch rahiho, tum khud dekhlena Raj
koh
Jaanu stress the word Raaajjj!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And khanak's heart
beats raised fast
Jaanvi: woh bhi toh sagai meh ayega ''''. Kyu Khanak
Khanak didn't answer and change the topic.
Khanak: wese Jaanu aaj tumari sagai hai toh tu meh Romit keh bareme
soch nah chahiye
Jaanvi: Romit !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! usko tum aaj ane don, chorungi nahi uhse
Nidhi: Hayeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Itna pyaar keh uhse chorna nahi
chahti
Khanak knew what Jaanvi mean by uhse nahi chorungi
Jaanvi started her chatter box again
Jaanvi: uska toh me ajj shalad banadungi
Nidhi: what shalad'''''. Aab kya huwa tumloge keh bhich
Jaanvi told her about the call and both khanak and Nidhi laugh
Evening time
Guests started to arrive
Khanak was very happy at the thought of meeting Shaan, and smile to herself
Nidhi notice her and said hayeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lagta hai aaj love is
in air and hit her shoulder slightly on Khanak
Nidhi: Kya baat hai Khanak unke sapne dekhe jarahehe din mein and
wink at her
Khanak gave her a stern look
At Romit house
As it was decided Khandelwal wil be on Romit side,they decorate his house .
Shaan and Romit became friends after shaan misunderstanding cleared
In Romit room
Romit: so Shaan...mein kesa lagharahu ( ready looking at shaan for
compliment )
Romit wore a nice sherwani and looked at himself in the mirror.
Shaan chuckle " wese waha jakar pata chalega keh tum kese lagoge ."
Romit: kya''''. Tumne kuch kaha kya shaan
Shaan: no dude '''' wese u are looking very nice!!!!!!!!!! Tumari
Jaanvi'. paka tumeh dekhkar dori chaliagi " then to himself in low tone
" chapal le ke."
Romit : hope so dude ''''''''. Kaal joh huwa uske baad''.
And take a sigh of relief
Shaan just spoke without thinking
Shaan: haa yaar tumhe use moti nahi kehna chahitha ''''
and Romit suddenly turn to him and looked at Shaan
Romit: tumeh kese pata mein neh Jaanvi ko esa kaha
Shaan was stuck in his own word
Shaan: woh mene'''.. mene kya kaha ''''.. kuch bhi toh nahi
Romit: tum abhi kaha keh mein neh Jaanvi koh moti kaha...( raised his
eyes brow in question who told u )
At the same time Akshay came there and told them the time to leave is ready
Shaan to himself " aaj bhaiya ki entry correct time peh huwi ." Thank God
Akshay: chaleh tum dono agar tum logo kih batein khatab hogai ho toh
Shaan: yeah come lon ets go ..( to romit )...tumari Jaanvi tumara
intezar kar rahihogi
Romit glance at him and smile
They left the room and head to Jaanvi'd house
Back at Jaanvi's house
Invited guest has arrived, family member were busy in checking last minute
preparation ( sweets and all )
Some of Jaanvi's relatives came in the afternoon
Khanak and Nidhi were with Jaanu in her room
Khandelwal family came after few minutes with Romit few relatives; they
brought some gift with them for dulhan
Sudha, Mr Sharma ( Jaanu's dad ), Reva and other relatives give them a
warm welcome
Sudha did a tilak on Romit's temple and sprinkle little rice grains on his head,
she welcome her son in law, his relatives and Khandelwal family in the house
Sunil and Mr Sharma were having chit chat, Madhvi, Sudha and Reva were
too having a little chat because the sagai muhurat was few minutes later,
dadi was talking to Jaanvi's dadi, other relative among them selves
Shaan, Romit and Akshay were too engrossed in talking but shaan was
desperate waiting to see khanak, his eyes were searching for her sweetheart
Khushboo has moved to girls room, Nidhi came to hall and ask something to
Sudha and her eyes fall on Shaan.
Nidhi came back to room and spoke dreamily
Nidhi:Hayeee!!!!!!!!!! Kya dikhta hai ...( dreamily turn round
round while speaking )
Khushboo, Khanak and Jaanvi looked at her surprised
Khanak: Isse kya huwa hai...( smiled to her dreamy style )
Khushboo and jaanvi: pata lagana parega...( both Hi5 and smile )
Jaanvi: oye''''' Dream land ki Queen tuhme kya huwa hai
Nidhi: Hayeee!!!!! Jaanu''' Jaanu''' kya baatao tuhme'''
woh bahar ''. Ekk ladka kitna handsome hai yaar...( hold Jaanvi and
turn her round round )
Jaanvi: kya kar rahiho...( laughing )
Nidhi: Hai eek ladka...he's so handsome yaar...use dekh kar toh koi
bhi ladki uspe fida hojaegi...
Both trio spoke in union " Koun ." ( looked at Nidhi )
Nidhi: pata nai yaar koun hai ...( sit on couch)
Khanak: toh pata karo koun hai ''.. aur phir shaayad wohi tumara
Rajkumar ho... (and wink at her)
Khushboo, Khanak and Jaanu laugh to see her again in dreamily style
Sudha and Reva came to call the ladies as the time of sagai was ready
Khushboo, Sudha and Reva came first and left trio to come after few minutes
All was set in the hall
Khanak and Nidhi came with Jaanvi
All eyes turn to them when they came to the hall, Shaan was stunned seeing
Khanak , she was looking stunning and elegant in her outfit, he forget that he
was surrounded by many people. He just stared at her and admire her beauty
Khanak saw shaan , he was looking very handsome and both stare each other
for a minute
Romit and Jaanvi take their seats beside each other.
All move near them some takes seat around them, but shaan was still in his
position
Akshay: chote tum haya kya karraheho?... ( looked at shaan who was
lost )
Shaan: hmmm!!!!!!!!!!!! ( reply but lost in someone )
Akshay keep his hand on his shoulder and said " chote''" ( and smile )
Shaan came back to his sense
Shaan: haa '''''. Haa bhaiya... kya huwa ...
Akshay: chale'''''.. ( smiled and shake his head )
Before Akshay brought him to his sense he looked at the direction where
shaan was staring and smiled to himself and said " chote kya kuch bhi nahi
hosakta"
Shaan: haa bhaiya chalo nah...( smiled )
They move where rituals were taking place. Some ritual were did by Madhvi
and other by Sudha, they feed sweets to Romit and Jaanvi
Time to exchange the ring was ready; Shaan and Khanak looked at each
other and smiled, khanak lower her gaze shyly
Both slipped the ring and loud of applause roam the hall
Romit and Jaanvi looked at each and smile
Nidhi: kya yaar yeah sagai kitni boring hai , kuch dance hojai kya
What u said guys .( smiled )
All said yes
Nidhi: lekin ismein saab ko dance karna parega...aapko bhi ..( to sudha )
Sudha: nahi...nahi ...tum logo ho nah ...
Akshay: toh phir shuru kare shaan'''. ( smiled in teasing tone )
Shaan: what dance!!!!!''.. bhaiya muje dance karna nahi atah... aur
mein koi dance nahi karunga... ( try to move from there )
Khusboo : come on shaan '''.. thikh hai agar dance nahi toh phir
guitar bajado...( stop him and smiled to him)
Shaan: No way mein kuch nahi karne wala...
Khanak looked at shaan and gesture him to play guitar " Pleejjj"
Shaan looked at and smiled
Shaan: thikh hai only guitar no dance ...
Khushboo: chalega ...( smiled )
Jaanvi : dorega!!!!!!!!!! ( excitedly )
All looked at her and laugh, usually dulhan is shy but Jaanvi was not
All said " iska kuch nahi hosakta ."
Romit: mein to kahi bhi dorneko tayar hu tumare saath ...( slowly near ..)
Jaanvi looked at her and said " woh mein tumeh zarur doraungi..." smiled
Romit: Sorry Jaanu...woh...
Jaanvi gave him angry stare
Romit to himself " Mamla garasm hai...kuch sochna parega.."
Shaan play the guitar tune from " Hum Aapke hai koun ."
Dholak played, Nidhi on centre
Nidhi to Sudha
Maye Ni Maye Munder Pe Teri
Bol Raha Hai Kaaga
Jogan Ho Gai Teri Dulaari
Man Jogi Sung Laaga..!
( Shaan played quitar, Nidhi dance on tune )
Maye Ni Maye Munder Pe Teri
Bol Raha Hai Kaaga
Jogan Ho Gai Teri Dulaari
Man Jogi Sung Laaga..!
Chan Mahiya...Chan Mahiya
Mere Dhol Sipahiya...
( Nidhi to sudha and Reva ) and then pulled Khanak, both dance on tune
Khanak sang looked at Shaan
Chand Ki Tarah Chamak Rahi Thi
Us Jogi Ki Kaaya...
Mere Dware Aakar Usne
Pyar Ka Alakh Jagaaya...
Apne Tun Pe Bhasm Rama Ke
Sari Rain Wo Jaaga...
Khanak to Madhvi
Jogan Ho Gai Teri Dulaari
Man Jogi Sung Laaga..!
( Guys to ladies Sunil to Madhvi, Mr Sharma to Sudha and Akshay to Boo)
Sun Hiriye...Nach Hiriye
Nach Ke Rung Jama...
Sun Hiriye...Nach Hiriye
Nach Ke Dhoom Macha...
( Khanak to Madhvi hugging her from back and then turn to her slowly)
Mannat Maangi Thi Tu Ne Ek Roz
Main Jaun Bihai...
Us Jogi Ke Sung Meri Tu
Kar De Ab Kudmai...
( Khanak showing her palm to Madhvi, when Madhvi moved she hold her pallu )
In Haatho Mein Laga De Mehndi
Baandh Shagun Ka Dhaaga...
Jogan Ho Gai Teri Dulaari
Man Jogi Sung Laaga..
Nidhi and Khanak pulled Jaanvi on the dance floor and trio dance and sang
Maye Ni Maye Munder Pe Teri
Bol Raha Hai Kaaga
Jogan Ho Gai Teri Dulaari
Man Jogi Sung Laaga..!
On tune all make a circle and dance
They was a loud applause after the song end
Madhvi hug khanak, sudha hug Jaanvi hug Reva to Nidhi
Madhvi peack Khanak lovingly on her temple, khanak smiled and happy tear
slid her eyes.
Shaan looked at them with a broad smile
Elder felt them alone as rituals were finished after dance, Khanak was beside
Jaanu and Romit, she congratulate them
Romit: Jaanu u looking very beautiful in pink...( try to butter him with his
charming smile )
Jaanvi: " yeah moti ." and give him a stern look
Khanak: kya yaar aaj tum dono ki sagai hui hai '.. thora romantic feel
karo aur romantic baate karo...( smiled at them )
Both Romit and Jaanvi give her a stunned look of " Khanak and romantic
talks."
Jaanvi : Khanak '''. Tum aur romantic talks '''' kya baat hai ." in
a teasing tone
Khanak: nahi meto baas ''''''
Romit: meto baas kya mhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! ''''' ( teasing her )
Jaanvi: yeah phir missing someone...mmm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Khanak: kya yaar tum dono''''. Wese mein tum dono ki baat
karrahithi
Shaan was with Akki, Romit left Duo to chat, Nidhi came to them
Nidhi: hiii Jiju!!!!!! congratulation ...( smiling )
Romit: thank u Sali sahib..( smiling )
Akshay too talked to Nidhi, shaan was trying to move from there so he can
meet khanak but Akshay stop him
Akshay: Nidhi ise milo " shaan mera chota bhai."
Shaan was there for minute said Hii to Nidhi and excuse himself
Nidhi: wese mein ne aapko pehle nahi dekha ...i mean khandelwal house
par
Shaan: haa woh mein India meh nahi htha ...( dis interest, his eyes
search for khanak )
Shaan in his mind " Khanak kaho ho tum...kaal raat ko bhi thinkse baat
nahi hui abh yeh pata nahi koun hai ."
Akshay and Romit move from there leaving Shaan and nidhi
Nidhi before she say something shaan spoke
Shaan: woh muje eek call karni hai...( excused from there )
Nidhi too move to Khanak and jaanvi
Nidhi again in her dreams
Jaanvi: Abh ise kya huwa!!!!!!!!!!...( looked at khanak and then Nidhi )
Both khanak and Jaanu smile
Khanak: mila kya tumara handsome ''''''' (and wink at her )
Khanak and Jaanu gave Hi5 to each other
Jaani: wese tumara sapno ke raja''.. ka kuch naam hai ke nahi
Nidhi: wohi handsome...( smiled )
Khanak: ihs handsome kah koi naam toh hoga ...( hit her shoulder to
her shoulder in teasingly )
Nidhi: shaan... (Without wasting any time and smile )
Khanak was drinking a cold drink, she split it and started to cough
Jaanvi : kya'''!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( she looked at khanak )
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Edited by heer_85 - 12 years ago
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