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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maneesha28889

nice update heer...


hope now they will talk and clear out the misunderstandings...


Thanx Maneesha 😊 they will talk soon after two more updates taab taak enjoy pareshan shaan 😆
and teasing of Khandelwal and for khanak she will clear all misunderstanding in upcoming updates 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nyce heer...lamba wla comment nxt part mein...pucca😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snigdhanagar

very nyce heer...lamba wla comment nxt part mein...pucca😉


Thanx sneha 😊 will wait for lamba comment 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: virika01

superlike dis update!!!!!!!!


Thanx Gia 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
FINALIY I READ ALL THE THAT I MISS IT AND ALL THAE PART WAS ASWOME 😊 AND I LOVE K FAMILY THEY ARE SO FANNY AND KHANAK SO RIYA AND SHAAN AGAIN TOGETHER AND SHE THING SHAAN AND RIYA WAS IN LOVE THAT WHY SHE AVOIDING SHAAN . WEAN SHANAK CONFUSION LOVE ERILY WATING FOR THAT AND WHATING FOR NEXT PART.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry For the Late Replay...😊
WoW Great update!!!!!👏
Again Confusion...Wrong time of khanak...Burthal shaan don't know anything i think he become blind that time...😊
and what say about the K family...now enough... my RLB ko pareshaan kar ke rakh diya hai...
but Love this teasing scene...now the boy Living k house for few days??? whose this Bali ka Bakara ...😆
Love the shaan expression...
NOw waiting for the Kitchen scen...in RBO Shanak One of the Romantic place was the kitchen...hope so this time will be 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kp_yasharan

FINALIY I READ ALL THE THAT I MISS IT AND ALL THAE PART WAS ASWOME 😊 AND I LOVE K FAMILY THEY ARE SO FANNY AND KHANAK SO RIYA AND SHAAN AGAIN TOGETHER AND SHE THING SHAAN AND RIYA WAS IN LOVE THAT WHY SHE AVOIDING SHAAN . WEAN SHANAK CONFUSION LOVE ERILY WATING FOR THAT AND WHATING FOR NEXT PART.


Thanx khushboo 😊 for reading all updates that u missed it , bus more two part then shanak will confess, shan had clear all confusion about romit nw it's time for khanak and that will be soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: janavi07

Sorry For the Late Replay...😊

WoW Great update!!!!!👏
Again Confusion...Wrong time of khanak...Burthal shaan don't know anything i think he become blind that time...😊
and what say about the K family...now enough... my RLB ko pareshaan kar ke rakh diya hai...
but Love this teasing scene...now the boy Living k house for few days??? whose this Bali ka Bakara ...😆
Love the shaan expression...
NOw waiting for the Kitchen scen...in RBO Shanak One of the Romantic place was the kitchen...hope so this time will be 😆


Thanx Janvi for commenting 😊 aww!!!!!!!!! i won't pareshan our RLB's bas only 2 more updates then all will be cleared
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you so much to all who pressed like button 😊

( Aasma, Pranjal , Sneha, diyak , Onaego, Janavi, Maneesha , neethurose, sweetcharvi, Priyani, , saranya, Poo , Gia, Rida, khushboo,Jaisy )

Thanks to all who comment 😊

Here is part 16 enjoy and please ignore any grammatical error

Part 16

Madhvi: acha theek hai and said " khanak woh shaan ko fruit ka bowl nikalke doh mein abhi ati hu

Shaan felt very happy now he will get chance to talk to khanak

Khanak was very angry and tensed after seeing shaan , she started to cut vegetables, shaan moved toward her very slowly and stand behind her

Shaan: khanak woh muje tumse kuch baat karni hai

Khanak was not listening to him and she was cutting vegetables very roughly

Shaan again called her " khanak tum sunh rahiho nah, muje tumse kuch baat karni hai and hold her shoulder from back

Khanak turn to him very angrily

Shaan: Khanak mein tumse...

Khanak cut him off " kya shaan tum mujse kya haa!!!! Bolo na tum mujse kya, tum mujse yahi kehna chahteho na ke tum Riya se pyaar karte ho

Shaan was confused and looked at khanak

Khanak: shaan tumne uss raat joh bhi kaha woh mene suna aur tumne yeh bhi samja ke mein Romit se pyaar karti hu aur hamari shaadi hone wali hai. Tum kya samaj teh ho shaan, tum kuch bhi kahoge aur har bar mein tumari baat sunungi

Shaan saw khanak's eyes become watery. Shaan tried again to say something but khanak interrupt him and continue

Khanak: shaan tumne toh muje Riya ke bareme me bhi nahi bataya ke tum use ." and tear roll down her cheeks " ke tum uhse pyaar karte ho

Shaan was shocked, she saw khanak watery eyes he move to wipe her tears and cupped her face but khanak jerked him and move from him

Khanak back was facing shaan and she said " Jao shaan, Riya tumara intezar karrahihe, jao uske gale lago aur uske saath baatein karo jao...

Shaan moved to khanak " khanak tum..., khanak esa kuch ..., he didn't complete and harilal came in the kitchen

Shaan frustrated move his hand at back of his nape and caresses his hair.

Harilal : woh shaan baba, bare saab ne apko bulaya hai

Shaan looked at khanak and left the place annoyed

Shaan and sunil talked about office work and other things

Sometimes later, shaan was in his room, thought what khanak had said

Shaan to himself " Khanak soch rahihe mein aur Riya ohhh!!!!!!! Shit what rubbish ," then again " mene bhi toh yahi socha khanak aur Romit ke bare mein, muje khanak se baat karni hogi lekin kese... woh toh mujse baat nahi karna nahi chahti,"

Shaan came out of his room and spot khanak on dining table arranging cutlery, he walk to her but no luck, Riya called him " shaan"

Shaan closed him eyes in frustration and khanak turn and saw them

Shaan to himself " pehle muje Riya ka kuch karna hoga ."

Shaan: Riya muje tumse kuch baat karni hai ," and looked at khanak who was staring them with a sad face and lump form in her throat

Shaan moved with Riya to his room

Riya: haa shaan kya baat hai tum mujse kya kehna chahte ho

Shaan took a deep intake and shoot " dekho Riya short and clear labzome suno mein khanak se pyaar karta hu aur khanak yeh samaj rahihe ke hum eek dusre se pyaar karte hai ." and looked at Riya

Riya was shocked and looked at shaan

Riya: lekin shaan, khanak kih toh shaadi hone wali hai toh tum... toh kya woh ladki jise tum pyaar karteho woh khanak hai ... (looked at him )

Shaan: yeah aur dekho Riya, i know woh... and stop " mein yeh shaadi nahi hone dunga. I know you are attracted to me and may be you love me but i am not attracted to you

" Mein bhi nahi shaan ." Riya said looking at shaan

Shaan was shocked and repeat to Riya " you ."

Riya: haa shaan , i was attracted to you but it's not love, mein ne bohut socha ...aur phir realise kiya keh woh just eek attraction tha

Shaan just stare at her couldn't believe what she said

Riya: yaha kuch din rehne ke baad, muje pata chala ke it was just attraction shaan ...actualy i think i love someone else

Shaan: tum kisi aur se pyaar karti ho... aur woh koun hai still looking at Riya for the answer

Riya: woh...

Shaan was waiting her to reveal, then Riya said shaan abhi mein tume kuch nahi bata saakti but m sure he love me too ."

Shaan was shocked but felt happy that Riya love someone else and now he will clear khanak's misunderstanding.

Riya: shaan agar tum kaho toh mein khanak se baat karsakti hu

Shaan: thanx riya but mein kudh useh baat karlunga

Riya: lekin shaan tumare gar wale uski shaadi ki baat kar rahehe

Shaan: mein woh saab dekhlunga pehle muhje khanak se baat karni hai

While they were talking Riya got a call and moved from shaan's room

In sunil's room sometimes after lunch

Madhvi: sunil...woh ladka kitne baje anewala hai

Sunil: raat koh madhvi...shayad bohut raat bhi hojae

Madhvi: apne use saab batadiya hai nah ...keh hum saab

Sunil: madhvi tum fikar maat karo ...

In dadi's room

Dadi: khanak beta baas kar abhi thikh hai...tum jake aram karo

Khanak was giving dadi leg massage

Khanak: dadi... thori der aur ...phir mein chali jaungi

Dadi kept looking at her lovingly the way she took care of her, her medicine, diet and every thing

Shaan: dadi...( Shaan knew khanak is in dadi's room )

Dadi: loo!!!!!! yeh bhi agaya...aur bata kya baat hai

Khanak raised her lashes and looked at shaan

shaan: woh...esehi... kya mein apke pass nahi asakta ...( came near her and sit on the bed beside dadi )

dadi: areh kyu nahi asakta ...( smiled seeing him )

shaan: dadi mein soch rahatha keh mein aaj apko mandir lechalta hu

khanak looked at him and shaan give a smile

dadi: shaan tum thikh ho na beta ...khanak...

khanak: jee dadi...

dadi: zara iske saar par haath rakhee toh dekh ...ise bukhar toh nahi hai

shaan looked at dadi annoyed and said " kyu main apko mandhir nahi lejata kya ..."

dadi: esi baat nahi hai ...lekin tumne achanak se istarase kaha toh muhje laga...shaayad aaj tumari tabiyat kharab hai

shaan: i mean sham ko mein apko aur khanak do madhir drop kardunga ..( he wanted to talk to khanak at least at madhir no one will disturb him)

dadi: khanak tume kya madhir jana hai aaj ...( dadi smiled at him )

khanak: nahi dadi... shaan apko leke jaega...woh aaj sham koh mein jaanu ke saath bahar jarahihu

shaan looked at khanak's excuses in his mind " khanak please yaar ...itni mushkil se yeh idea mila tha muhje aur abh tum..."

dadi: thikh hai shaan tum muhje sham koh mandhir lekejana

shaan looked at dadi with what!!!!!!!!!!! Expression

dadi: kya huwa leke jaega nah

shaan: jee dadi...shaam ko...( looked at khanak )

dadi: khanak abh bohut huwas beta...jao jake aram karo

shaan was happy khanak will leave and he will be able to talk to her

khanak: nahi dadi mein yahi apke pass hi thora aram karletihu

shaan looked at her and thought " khanak yeh tum janpuchke kar rahiho...abh mein kya karu ...taki khanak ko yaha se bahar lejasaku."

Shaan: khanak... woh mein bhulgaya khushboo bhabhi tume bula rahithi...acha dadi mein chalta hu ...aap aram karo

Khanak looked at him leaving

Dadi: jao dekho khushboo koh kya kaam hai

Khanak: Jee dadi...

Khanak left from dadi's room. When she was going in the direction of khushboo's room shaan hold her wrist

Khanak: shaan choro kya kar raheho

Shaan: khanak please muhje tumse kuch baat karni hai, tum jesa samaj rahiho wesa...

Khanak: muje kuch nahi sunna choro abhi koi dekhlega

Shaan: dekhne doh...mein kisise nahi darta

Shaan tried to take khanak from there suddenly khushboo came from her room

Khanak saw her " shaan choro khushboo bhabhi arahihe ."

Shaan: khanak mein abh koi bahana sunna nahi chahta ( he thought khanak is lying )

Khanak panic " shaan choro sachme bhabhi arahihe ."

Shaan just turn to see, and saw khushboo was coming, shaan left her hand

Khushboo came to them

Khanak: bhabhi aap yaha , mein apke paas hi arahithi

Khushboo: kya huwa ...kuch kaam tha

Khanak: bhabhi apine toh muhje...

Shaan cut her off because he lied khushboo was calling her

Shaan: bhabhi ...hiii ...kesi ho aap ( he spoke what he thought at that time )

Khanak just stare at him confused

Khushboo: shaan ... are u ok ( looked at him )

Shaan: yeah... aap yaha

Khushboo: shaan ...kya huwa hai tume tum itni ajeeb si baatein kyu kar raheho

Shaan: nahi ... .mein esehi baas...woh apko aram karna chahiye nah isiliye

Khanak: bhabhi apko kuch chahiye tha kya apne muhje ...

Shaan: areh khanak ...yeah tumari galti hai...tumeh bhabhi ka khayal rakhna chahiye...aur puhch nah chahiye une kuch chahiye toh nahi ( again he cut her off )

Khanak and khushboo looked at his confused

Khushboo: shaan tum useh kyu dath raheho... aur muhje kuch nahi chahiye ...mein thikh hu

Shaan: phir bhi...i mean ...wese aap kaha jarahiho

Khushboo: ha woh mein khanak keh paas hi arahithi...woh jaanu ka phone ayatha...kabse tumeh phone kar rahihe...tum phone nahi utharahi

Khanak: Jaanu ka phone...abh mein gai kaam se...mein dadi keh paas thi aur phone kamreme hai ...mein jati hu ... ( khanak left )

Khushboo: wese shaan tum kya kar raheho abhi

Shaan looked at khushboo

Khushboo: wese ... agar kuch kaam bhi ha nah ...toh use choro aur muhje shopping leke chalo

Shaan in this mind " what !!!! shopping...shaan kaha phas gaye tum ... apne hi per par kulari mardi ."

Khushboo: shaan mein tumse baat kar rahihu...kaha khogae

Shaan: mmm!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bhabhi woh...dadi

Khushboo: kya dadi...( looked at him )

Shaan: mandhir... dadi koh mein mandhir leke jarahahu

Khushboo whisper " mandhir...shaan iswaqt koun mandhir jata hai

Shaan: mera batlab... thori der baad...ihs waqt mein dad ka kuch kaam hai mein use pura karke atahu...( and start to leave )

Khushboo: shaan...

Shaan: bhabhi kaal ...ok ...bye ...bye... ( and left )

After few hours in the evening Khanak was with Jaanu and shaan has to take dadi to mandhir he was cursing himself for his flop idea

Later at night after dinner

Every one retired to their room, khanak was tried after meeting with Jaanu

It was past mid night khanak woke up, she was feeling thirsty, water bottle in her room was empty

Khanak: pani bhi khatam hogaya ...kitchen se lana hoga

khanak went to the kitchen to drink some water and bumped on someone in a hall, she looked at him but didn't know , who that guy was, first she was scared and was about to shout

Guy: khanak right...

Khanak thought how he knows my name and stared at him, in her mind " yeah muje kese janta hai...shayad bhaa keh guest hai ."

Khanak: sorry woh ...

The guy: ohh !!!!!! i am so sorry, muhje dekh kaar chalna chahiya tha

Khanak confused " Aap... still looking at him

The guy: haa woh me Raj, mmmhhh!!!!!!! hum pehle nahi mile ... woh actually muje pyaas lagi thi toh mein kitchen dudh rahatha

Khanak stared him

Raj: tum khanak ho na... ( smiled )

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Please do comment and give ur thought to this tale it encourage me and gain interest to continue with it 😊

Edited by heer_85 - 12 years ago

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