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Here is part 15 enjoy and please ignore any grammatical error

Part 15

Shaan: to himself " bhaiya toh gai aab mein bhi khanak se milne jatahu and

smile aaj muje khanak se milne se koih nahi rokhsakta ."

Riya: shaan tum kya soch rareho chalo na hum kuch baateh karteh hai

wese bhi muje needh nahi arahihe

Shaan was annoyed " are yaar yeah sub..."

Khanak in her room she too wanted to meet shaan, sleep was far way for her

Khanak to herself " abhi sub soh rare honge mein shaan seh milne jaa sakti

hu aur sub bata dungi, haa yehi acha moka hai ." n she left her room

Shaan: Riya mujeh lagtahai hame sone jahna chahiye raat bohut hogai hai

Shaan: good night

Riya: shaan woh muje neendh nahi arahihe aur muje tumse kuch baat bhi

karni hai toh lets talk

Shaan: tumein jobhi kehna kaal kehna ok

Riya: lekin shaan ..." but shaan didn't listen to her

Riya turn to leave but her leg slip and she hold shaan's hand, pull him and he bump on

Riya , she miss her steps again and shaan hold her from her waist

Shaan hold Riya before she fell n hit the floor ,Riya holded him tight on his shoulder,

at the same time khanak came there, she saw Riya and shaan

She looked at them, shaan raised him head and notice khanak was standing there

looking at them, Riya was still in his arm ,holding her waist, Riya didn't notice

khanak, shaan after seeing khanak he loose his grip on Riya

Riya saw she was slipping from his arm n hold him tight

Riya: shaan kya karraheho, abhi muje gira diya hotah, tum bhi nah

Khanak looked at them n become shocked

Shaan: woh khanak

Riya: shaan kya khanak and turn to see khanak

Shaan n Riya were still on that position

Khanak: woh sorry mene aap logo ko disturb kiya and her eyes become water

and looked at them

Shaan move a part from Riya and said " woh khanak nahi woh tum". he was

saying without completing his statement

Khanak: " muhje lagta hai mein galat waqt paar agaiyi " n start to move to her

room

Shaan saw she is leaving and followed her

Shaan : khanak woh ... ruko toh sahi meri baat suno khanak n run to her

room

Khanak get in her room n shut the door tears slid down her cheeks, shaan was

knocking at the door

Shaan: khanak darwaza kholo aur meri baat suno khanak tum sunrahiho

nah

He was calling khanak but no respond from other side. Shaan left there frustated, and

rub his hair at nape of his neck .

Khanak in her room slid on a door and tears didn't stop rolling down her cheeks. She

kept saying shaan mujse pyar nahi karta

Woh aur Riya... n all scene of shaan and Riya flash to her

Shaan in his room " ohhh shit !!!!!!!!!, kahi khanak neh muje... nahi

use baat kari baregi , aur sub clear karna parega lekin use pehle muje Riya

se baat karni hogi.

Khanak in her room she kept sobbing n then control herself and wiped her tears

Khanak: to herself " khanak tum kyu rahiho aur woh bhi shaan ke liye woh

toh tumse pyaar bhi nahi karta, aur tum Adda ko batane chalithi ,

woh log tumse kitna pyaar karte hai, tumein apni beti banaya aur tum

She again wiped her tears, nahi mein unlogo kuch nai bataungi, woh mere

liye joh bhi fesla lenge muje manzur hoga, main uss ladke se milungi aur

... and tears roll her eyes

The whole night khanak was thinking about Riya and shaan

Shaan was in the same state, how to talk to khanak

Next morning

It was Sunday

Shaan woke up early; he wanted to talk to khanak as soon as possible,

At breakfast table all were present except Akshay, khushboo didn't let her sleep at

night so he was still sleeping

Sunil was reading a news paper

Madhvi: sunil kya karraheho ?

Sunil looked at her wife, he was in teasing mood

Sunil: mein Olympic race mein dorhahahu...

Madhvi give him a stem look and said Sunilll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All at breakfast table share a smile and control their laughter

Sunil: kya Madhvi tum bhi na, tum dekhrahiho mein news paper par

rahahu aur phir bhi tum...

Madhvi in a low tone, " sunil ." and gesture toward shaan. Sunil understood and

shoot

Khanak and shaan were sitting opposite, shaan looked at khanak but khanak didn't

glare at him

Dadi, Sunil and madhvi saw them

Sunil: maa, woh joh khanak koh dekhne mere dost ka beta arahahe woh

aaj raat hi aega, uska koi kaam hai haya to usne aapni arrival date change

kardi

Shaan was shocked so as khanak and looked at sunil

Dadi: areh yeh to bohut acha hai, khanak aur us ladke ko thora aur zyada

waqt milega baat karneko , Kyu madhvi

Madhvi: ha mummy jee, mene dusra wala karmara saaf karwadiya hai toh

jab woh aega toh koi problem nai hongi

Khushboo thought why she should leave the play and joined trio

Khushboo: haa mom, agar hamare gar me rahega toh khanak se milna

hoga aur yeah dono apni pasad aur na pasad bhi jaan lenge kyu shaan

tumara kya khayal hai

All were having a great time in their game

Shaan was drinking water and cough when khushboo address him

All looked at him and khanak felt nervous and worried for shaan

Madhvi passed him water and said shaan!!! Beta theekse khao, aramse beta

All exchange the look and hide their smile

Sunil: khanak beta tum khush ho nah iss shaadi se

Khanak looked at shaan

Dadi: koi baat nahi tum sochna phir hame batana ...

Khushboo: dadi aap na tension maat loh shaan hai nah...khanak use

batadengi ... dono dost hai nah ...yaha khanak hume nahi kahengi


Shaan in his mind " bhabhi aap kya kar rahiho...mein apka eek lota dever

hu...aur aap meri khanak muhjse chihna chahtihai ."

Sunil: thikh hai beta tum shaan se dehdena...

Madhvi: wese woh ladka yaha pehli baar arahahe...toh khanak use kya

chahiye ...uski zimedari tumpe...

Akshay: dad unlogo ka yaha India meh business hai nah...

Sunil: haa woh khanak ko dekhne arahahe ..aur apna kaam yaha kah kaam

bhi samal lega

Shaan was fuming inside no one let him talk to khanak , and khanak too is ignoring him

After their breakfast, khanak went to the kitchen to help harilal and Madhvi, khushoo

was in the hall and gossip on phone about kitty party

Dadi went to rest in her room, Riya, Jay and shaan were in the hall

Shaan wanted to talk to khanak but no chance, she was busy in the kitchen

Shaan muttered slowly " pata nahi kitchen mein kya hai...har waqt wahi rehti

hai."

Jay and Riya were having theirown conv, riya and Jay became friends

Jay: bhai apne kuch kaha

Shaan: kuch nahi...

Jay: bhai chalo nah hum kahi bahar chalet hai...it's so boring here

Shaan: nahi tum jao... wese aaj kaal dekh rahahu mein gar peh rehta

hai...kya baat hai ...kyu aaj nahi jana apne dosto ke saath

Riya: haa shaan hum kahi chalteh hai nah ...mein yaha gar par bethne

nahi ayi...aur tum neh muje kahatha tum muje...yaha gumne

lejaonge

Shaan: riya ...tume agar gumna hai nah toh Jay hai nah...wese bhi ihse

bahana chahiye gar se bahar nikal neko ...

Jay: thikh hai agar aap nahi chalenge toh mein di se puchke atah hu

Jay went to asked khanak but she refused him and told him she has some work

Jay: di chalo na bohut mazaa ayega...thikh hai mein Jaanvi aur romit koh

bhi kehdunga

Khanak: Jay muje pareshan maat karo ...tume jana ha toh jao nah ...

Jay: masi aap kahi na di se ... pata nahi aaj kaal kisibhi cheez keh

liye haa nahi kehti

Madhvi: khanak jao beta...wese mein hu nah yaha saab samal lungi

Khanak: nahi maa aaj nahi kisi aur din aur wese bhi...Jaanu keh rahithi

keh woh aaj aegi

Jay: thikh hai di...lekin next time apko chalna hoga ...

Madhvi: aur tum bhi jaldi ana ...

Jay: bye masi ...bye di

Madhvi: Jay... shaan tumare saath arahahai nah kaha...

Jay stopped turn and said " anhi masi bhai bahar hai...riya keh saath hall

mein..."

Mahdvi: thikh hai

Jay: bye... ( Jay got a call from his friend so he left without Riya )

Khanak's mind was thinking of shaan and riya at Jay's mention and last night scene

flash in front of her, she was absent minded making kheer instead of using sugar she

took a full spoon of salt and start adding in a kheer on the gas

Madhvi called her

Madhvi: khanak woh dish pass karna, when she didn't get any answer she looked

at her and said " khanak woh dish ..." and stop midway she saw khanak was in

a deep thought and putting salt in a kheer

Madhvi just looked her and smiled, Madhvi to herself

Khanak mein tume apni beti banana chahti hu hamesha hamesha keh

liye , uske liye beta tumein thora interzar karna parega, mere shaan ki

dulhan sirf tum banogi khanak aur koi nahi , sorry khanak paar hame

yeah karna parhahahe , tumein aur shaan apna pyaar meinsus karo aur

jaldi izhar karo.

Madhvi said " khanak." and shake her little,

Khanak jerk a little and said "Jee maa." and looked at her

Madhvi : beta yeah shaker nahi namak hai

Khanak looked at the bottle that she was holding and was too shocked, she added salt

instead of sugar .

Khanak: woh Maa ... pata nahi kese and was tensed

Madhvi: koi baat nahi beta, kabhi kabhi esa hojata hai and then asked her

" khanak kuch baat hai beta, mein kaabse dekh rahihu tum kuch khoi

khoi lagrahiho , saab theek hai nah?.

Khanak: hai maa saab theek hai and turn to put a bottle from her hand on a rack

Madhvi saw her uneasily and to herself " khanak mujse baat karo, mein janti hu

tum shaan se kitna pyaar karti ho aur tum kisi aur seh shadai ke bare me

nahi soch sakti, toh tum mujse kyu baat nahi karti ."

Madhvi didn't know khanak misunderstand shaan seeig with Riya

They all are playing this game to make shaan confess his love to khanak

At the same time shaan came to the kitchen and Madhvi saw him

Madhvi: areh shaan tum yaha, kuch chahiye kya beta

Khanak heard madhvi and turn to see shaan , they looked at each other and Madhvi

notice them

Shaan: woh... mom, mujeh fridge mein se fruits chahiye

Madhvi looked again at them.

Madhvi: acha theek hai and said " khanak woh shaan ko fruit ka bowl

nikalke doh mein abhi atih hu

Shaan felt very happy now he will get chance to talk to khanak

Khanak was very angry and tensed after seeing shaan , she started to cut vegetables,

shaan moved toward her very slowly and stand behind her

Shaan: khanak woh muje tumse kuch baat karni hai

Khanak was not listening to him and she was cutting vegetables very roughly

Shaan again called her " khanak tum sunh rahiho nah, muje tumse kuch

baat karni hai and hold her shoulder from back

Khanak turn to him very angrily

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG these parents r making situation worse now are unhe baat toh karne do shittt
now this guy will be staying in their house kis ladke ko bakra banaya hai in bade logon ne
riya toh idiot ki idiot hai bheje me kuch hai hi nahi
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Posted: 12 years ago
loool,i love the parents but know its time for them to stop their meleodrama, there making things worse loool hahahahaah
xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesomeee Heer !!!

These khandelwan's are Extremely Funny & noughty & Poor Shaan 😆 though he deserves all of it still feeling bad for him 😉 loving these khandelwals with every passing day 😃 Awesomeee they are with their masti all the time 😛

Khanak Saw riya & Shaan together again & left the place after apologizing for the interruption in their Romantic moment 😛 & left from there with tears 😭 awee i feel so bad for her ...Poor girl .Heerrr Kab Rulana band karogi tum use 😡 bechaari pahle part se Roti hi rehti hain 😭 Shaan finally understood that he need to talk to Riya now 😊

Khanak started avoiding shaan again. as she knew he loves riya so poor gilr didnt felt liek talking to him & getting hurt again & again 😭 khandelwals started with their masti again 😆 So finally khanak ke prospective groom ki entry hogi ab is ka matlab 😕 sach mein entry ho rahi hain Shaan ko jealous feel karvane ke liyee? 😕 lol Loved Frustrated Shaan a lottt 😛

Jay was awesomee too ...but felt bad when sw khanak lost n thought while making kheer she added salt in to it 😲 poor girl loved Mdhavi ...khandelwals loves her a lot & for their sake khanak is now ready to meet the guy ...OMG shaan is in kitchen to talk to her & she truns to him angrily 😲 ab kya hogaa 😕 Shaan ki toh band bajegi 😛

Waiting for next ...jaldi denaa ...pleaseee

Love
Pranjal.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jaisyjazz

OMG these parents r making situation worse now are unhe baat toh karne do shittt

now this guy will be staying in their house kis ladke ko bakra banaya hai in bade logon ne
riya toh idiot ki idiot hai bheje me kuch hai hi nahi


Thanx Jaisy 😊 K family is adorable ageh ageh dekho kya hota hai 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aasma1

loool,i love the parents but know its time for them to stop their meleodrama, there making things worse loool hahahahaah
xxx


Thanx Aasma😊 2 more two come then they will be one
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Awesomeee Heer !!!


These khandelwan's are Extremely Funny & noughty & Poor Shaan 😆 though he deserves all of it still feeling bad for him 😉 loving these khandelwals with every passing day 😃 Awesomeee they are with their masti all the time 😛

Khanak Saw riya & Shaan together again & left the place after apologizing for the interruption in their Romantic moment 😛 & left from there with tears 😭 awee i feel so bad for her ...Poor girl .Heerrr Kab Rulana band karogi tum use 😡 bechaari pahle part se Roti hi rehti hain 😭 Shaan finally understood that he need to talk to Riya now 😊

Khanak started avoiding shaan again. as she knew he loves riya so poor gilr didnt felt liek talking to him & getting hurt again & again 😭 khandelwals started with their masti again 😆 So finally khanak ke prospective groom ki entry hogi ab is ka matlab 😕 sach mein entry ho rahi hain Shaan ko jealous feel karvane ke liyee? 😕 lol Loved Frustrated Shaan a lottt 😛

Jay was awesomee too ...but felt bad when sw khanak lost n thought while making kheer she added salt in to it 😲 poor girl loved Mdhavi ...khandelwals loves her a lot & for their sake khanak is now ready to meet the guy ...OMG shaan is in kitchen to talk to her & she truns to him angrily 😲 ab kya hogaa 😕 Shaan ki toh band bajegi 😛

Waiting for next ...jaldi denaa ...pleaseee

Love
Pranjal.



Thanx Pranjal 😊 for a sweet comment , aabh bas 2 update n all will be dhamal for khandelwal and pareshan for shaan 😆 ageh ageh dekho hota hai kya 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome!!! 😊 Shaan is not getting any chance to talk to Khanak 😭 and she decided to see that guy... well everything is just an act.. 😆Khandelwal clan is awesome!!! They doing what not to make Shaan understand his love..👏 will he express his love in front of everyone like in RBO where she said those 3 words in front of all??? awww!!! she put salt instead of salt..so much lost in thought of Shaan and Riya..😒

Will Riya turn antagonist when she learns abt ShaNak love???

Looking forward and thanks for the superb update😊
Edited by poo_j - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update heer...

hope now they will talk and clear out the misunderstandings...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: poo_j

Awesome!!! 😊 Shaan is not getting any chance to talk to Khanak 😭 and she decided to see that guy... well everything is just an act.. 😆Khandelwal clan is awesome!!! They doing what not to make Shaan understand his love..👏 will he express his love in front of everyone like in RBO where she said those 3 words in front of all??? awww!!! she put salt instead of salt..so much lost in thought of Shaan and Riya..😒


Will Riya turn antagonist when she learns abt ShaNak love???

Looking forward and thanks for the superb update😊


Thanx Poo😊 all ur questions will be answered in few upcoming updates. lets see how khanak clear her misunderstanding and about Riya something will follow to make u all shocking may be aur grinning 😉 K family is always awesome at a tease 😆

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