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OMG confusion hi confusion hai for shan
he is taking it all wrong he has taken full u- turn
aww shan was crying but uski galti hai ab bhugto
and ya what happened to idiot riya where is that chipkali ?
now that khanak has got that shan is misunderstood she can clear it but hamare shan phirse koi gadbad na kare
u r will update tomorrow means today na :)
Edited by jaisyjazz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

wowww uff ye burthal yhi soch rha hai romit n janvi r getting married...

oh last line...😲 nw wht???????

will khanak confess shez nt getting marries cant wait update soon.!!!!!!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maneesha28889

Lol awesome update...😆

kaise hori tumhari shaadi ki tayariya...😆 lol shaan he don know whats happening around him and jumping int conclusions... i want khanak to slap him and say woh meri shaadi nahi mere doston ki shaadi...😆

Wonder how will khanak handle him...😆

waiting for the next update...


thanks maneesha 😊 he is burthal baat der se samaj ati ha useh
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Originally posted by: suchi_245

Lol, shaan ko itna gussa aaya aur jab woh chipkali se chipakta hai tab khanak ko kaisa lagta hai , yeh socha usne ?

Oh ho ! Confusion he confusion hai yahan

hope , jaldi sab thik ho jaye aur shanak ache se kiss kar paye phir without feeling bad or something .

Loved it

continue soon...


Thanx Suchi 😊 will clear confusion soon 😃
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Originally posted by: jaisyjazz

OMG confusion hi confusion hai for shan

he is taking it all wrong he has taken full u- turn
aww shan was crying but uski galti hai ab bhugto
and ya what happened to idiot riya where is that chipkali ?
now that khanak has got that shan is misunderstood she can clear it but hamare shan phirse koi gadbad na kare
u r will update tomorrow means today na :)



Thanx jaisy 😊 will try to clear confusion soon and that chipkali lets see kaha hai 😆 don't worry about her she is nice yaar 🤣 don't kill me for this
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Originally posted by: snigdhanagar

wowww uff ye burthal yhi soch rha hai romit n janvi r getting married...

oh last line...😲 nw wht???????

will khanak confess shez nt getting marries cant wait update soon.!!!!!!😊


thanx Sneha 😊 lets see kya hota hai about last line
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanx 😊
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Originally posted by: -pranjal-

*Knock ...Knock*

Update !!!!


writing yaar to make all u grin 😃bohut rulaya nah mein ne isiliye 😆
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Thank you so much for liking this tale and pressed like button 😊

(Jaisyjazz, aasma1, Pranjal, suchi_245, IF_ rida, Snigdhanagar, diyak saranya1990, Virika01, Janavi07 Maneesha 28889, )

Thanks to all who comment 😊

Here is part 13 enjoy and please ignore any grammatical error

Part 13

Shaan: Hope u enjoying very well, ohhh!!! Mein to puchna

bulgaya how was your date, i mean your first date.

Khanak didn't understand what shaan was talking about; she was in

shock with his sudden behaviour

Shaan : areh abto shadi kar rahiho toh bohut shari date bhi

hongi ." he was saying all this loudly that anyone round can hear him

Sunil was there on pool side as he was worried thinking about them and

shaan's strange behaviour after returning from Pune , he heard sound

coming from terrace other side and move to have a look who was shouting

and saw shaan and khanak

Sunil : to himself " Yeah dono yaha iss waqt aur ese kese baat kara

hehe"

Khanak was confused and just stare at him, " shaan tum yeh sab kya

keh raheho shadi, date and ...

Shaan : ohhh!!!! Come khanak mujse chupaneka kya faida and

griped her tight on her upper arm

Khanak saw him pressing hard on her arm , shaan u are hurting me

and her eyes become watery.

Shaan saw her eyes filled with tears, he jerked her and move a distance, he

started shouting on her and said " u r getting married to Romit n u

didn't even bother to tell me, i didn't know u have changed so

much khanak , and u said i m hurting u."

Khanak: shaan yeh tum ... ( confused )

Shaan: oh come on khanak stop it...abh chupane ka kya faida,

sabko pata hai tumari shadi ka sirf mujse chupaya

Khanak: shaan tum yeh kya keh raheho... shaadi and all

Shaan: forget it khanak ...

he didn't listen to khanak and left from there

Khanak was dumb stuck hearing; she and Romit are getting married. She

was more confused now hot tears run down her cheeks

Sunil witness what had happened between them, and he too was shocked

when shaan related khanak with Romit.

After some time khanak left from there and sunil kept wondering what

shaan has said

Sunil realised, shaan has taken all wrong and make his own story, he

smiled thinking his son is really burthal, khanak was right when she called

him burthal

He too head to his room with tension free but now how will he make shaan

confess his love to khanak, Madhvi saw him in deep thought and she ask

him "is everything ok." sunil looked at her wife, smiled and start

laughing at his son act

Madhvi: sunil ese akele akele kyu hass raheho

Sunil: Madhvi, khanak sahi hai, tumara beta bilkul burthal hai

....( laugh loud )

Madhvi: sunil kya hai...saab jag jaenge...abh batao bhi kya

huwa hai

Sunil: Tumara beta yeh samaj rahahe khanak ki hum shaadi

karwa rahehe

Madhvi: khanak ki shaadi kisse ...yeh kya kehraheho tum sunil

Sunil: Madhvi puri baat toh suno

Madhvi was confused and then sunil narrate her all

Madhvi : OMG!!!!! Sunil !!!!!! and she too laughed, and said My Poor

baby

Sunil: ha tumara poor baby...( both laughed talk for sometime )

Next morning on breakfast

Sunil narrate all this to dadi and she was too shocked

Dadi : ufff yeh ajkal ke bache bhi ... (smiled )

Sunil and madhvi : toh maa aabh hum kya kare

Dadi thought of an idea and it stuck her mind, mean while dadi was

explaining his plan and other member join them, except khanak, Riya and

shaan.

Akki and boo asked what's going on and they too narrate to them

Khushboo was very happy

Khushboo: muhje toh pehle se hi pata tha ke they love each other

paar didn't no shaan will think like this ... (smiling )

Dadi : toh suno aab hame in dono koh paas lana hoga uske liye

saab ko thori acting karni padegi

They decide to involve Romit and Janvi in the act coz all misunderstanding

was caused by Romit.

Shaan , Khanak and Riya joined them later and all eyes looked at shanak

Shaan: Good morning every one

Sunil: Good morning... wese shaan kaal neendh toh achi ayi

nah ...( control his laugh, Madhvi glare at him )

Shaan: kyu ..dad aap esa kyu puchraheho...(looked at khanak )

Khushboo: areh Khanak betho nah... khari kyu ho aur tum

aaj puja mein kyu nai ayi tabiyat toh thikh hai n tumari...

( hide her smile)

Khanak: bhabhi mein thikh hu ... woh baas saar mein dard

horahatha

Dadi: saar meh dard horahatha !!... thikh se neendh nahi

ayi kya

Khanak: nahi dadi mein thikh hu

All were having breakfast steeling glanced on both khanak and shaan

Dadi gesture sunil to start a conv

Khushboo: Khanak zara shaan koh parathe toh serve karo...

kuch khahi nahi raha

Khanak served him but shaan gesture by his hand that he doesn't want,

khanak felt very bad

All saw the action of shaan and then sunil started

Sunil : Khanak beta, woh muje tumse kuch baat karni hai

Khanak was sitting opposite shaan now " Jee adda, kahiena ."

Sunil : woh khanak beta... agar tumare dad hote toh unone

tumari

Shaadi ke bare me socha hota, toh hum ne bhi ...

All eyes were own shaan

Khanak : Adda yeh aap... (and looking at shaan )

Sunil: nahi khanak beta, humne tumare liye ek ladka pasand

kiya hai ,woh mere ekk dosto ka beta hai, bahut acha hai aur

woh ladka tume do din baad dekhne arahahe, aur usi din saab

fixed kardege . mene unlogo ko tumari photo dhikhai toh

unone tume pasad kar liya hai.

All were enjoying the scene and control them self not to laugh

Khanak didn't know what to say as she was shocked

Shaan was shocked looking what sunil had said and then at khanak

Shaan in his mind " khanak ki shaadi lekin phir woh romit ka kya

chakar hai, shaan yeh yaha kya horahahe agar 10 din baad

khanak ki shaadi nahi hai toh phir majra kya hai."

Madhvi: haa khanak , mein tumari shadi mein koi kasar nai

chorungi woh saab hoga joh eek maa apni beti ki shaadi ke liye

karti hai hum woh sari rasam nibhaenge

khanak didn't know what to say and she looked at shaan

shaan to himself " khanak ko ladka dekhne arahahe toh wo

Romit." and he kept thinking and was confused , he start wondering

whose marriage was going to take place after 10 days, if it's not of khanak

and Romit

khanak didn't know what to say as Sunil and Madhvi didn't let her think of

her parents , since she was 6 they were her parents and they gave her

equal love as shaan and Akshay bhaa got from them

Dadi: haa madhvi hum woh saab karege aur phir meri ladoh

apne sasural chalijaegi ...( smiling )

All wanted to have a loud laughter but control them selves

Jay, Boo and Akki too tease khanak about her marriage but her gaze was

fixed on shaan

Jay: di i will miss u so much, aabh meh apni problem kiske saath

share karunga but koi baat nahi mein apse milne apke sasural

zarur aunga kyu Bhai ( shaan)

Shaan gave Jai a stern look and make his hand into a fit to hold his anger

Jay hold his laugh and said koi baat agar bhai nahi ayega toh hum

saab apse milne ayenge

Khanak was still looking at shaan and her eyes became watery but she

hold them back

Khushboo: areh Jay u don't worry mein hu nah kyu Akshay ...

Akshay: haa hum hai na khanak u don't worry hum tumse milne

zarur ayenge, shaan bhi ayega ... kyu chotey

Shaan in his mind " bhaiya mein apko bhi dekhlunga lekin pehle

pata toh chale yeh kya horahahe, pehle romit abh yeh shaadi."

Akshay: areh chotey tum kuch bol kyu nahi rahahhe... tum

bhi kuch bol... ( hide his chuckle )

Shaan just smiled to him and khanak looked at shaan

Riya: wow!!!!!!!!! Shaadi ...congratulation khanak, muje nahi

patatha keh muje yaha ake shaadi meh shamil hona milega

Shaan glared at her angrily

Jay: haa riya tume yaha mohut mazaa ayega

They all finished their breakfast and sunil and Akki left for office

Before they left,

sunil : ok shaan are u done, chalo saath meh office chalteh hai

After what happened, shaan was not in mood to go office, he wanted to

clear his confusion and talk to khanak, he wanted to know whose marriage

is after 10 days

Shaan : nahi dad woh muje aaj office ke bahar kuch kaam hai toh

aap log jaeye and he left from there to his room .

All left, khanak didn't go to kitchen, instead she went to her room, she was

thinking about the proposer of sunil

Shaan in his room

Shaan: khanak ki shaadi ese kese koi ladka use dekhne arahahe,

lekin mein kaal raat jistara uske saath behave kiya woh muhje

nahi karna chahiye tha, lekin mein bhi kya karta usne muje

kuch bataya hi nahi ...( passing in his room )

Shaan conscience " dude tumne use bolne ka moka hi kaha diya

keh woh tumse baat kar sake,aabh toh use koi aur dekhne

arahahe aur uski shaadi romit se nahi horahihe."

Shaan: ese kese uski shaadi kisi aur se hogi woh sirf meri hai

samja tu

Shaan conscience " acha jab woh tumare pass ayithi kaal raat tabh

toh tume uske saath rudely behave kiya aur uski baat nahi suni

aabh suddenly woh sirf tumari hai, aur bhulgaya tumne Pune

meh bhi uske saath joh kiya woh ."

Shaan: kaal raat mein ne khanak se acha bartav nahi kiya, muje

use baat karnihogi abhi isih waqt ."

Madhvi, boo and dadi were in the hall they were chatting and laughing and

see their plan was working, Madhvi called Jaanvi and Romit, she explained

their plan, they were too shocked knowing what shaan thought. Madhvi

told them to come and joined them for dinner and take they plan ahead

Khanak came from her room deep in thought, Madhvi called her and make

her sit with her, shaan too came from his room

It was her plan to go shopping with Jaanvi but she called her and

cancelled it

Dadi and madhvi saw shaan and they start again, shaan move to them

Dadi : Madhvi mein soch rahithi ke khanak ke jane ke baad yeh

gar kitna suna suna hojaega... ( sadly but happy in side )

Madhvi: haa mummy jee aap thikh keh rariho hum isseh bohut

miss karenge

Khanak didn't know what to say, she kept quite as many questions were

still troubling her

Madhvi: areh shaan awoh ma beta, hum khanak ki baat kar

rahethe , hum khanak koh bohut miss karenge uske janeke

baad .

Shaan looked at khanak ,he wanted to talk to her and raised her head to

looked at shaan

Madhvi: mummy jee mein soch rahithi ke khanak chalijaegi , toh

kyu na hum shaan ki bhi shadi karwade , khanak ki kami hame

zyada mehsus nahi hogi...Iss gar me hamari choti bahu ajaegi

... (Smiling seeing shaan looking at khanak)

Shaan in his mind " what ??? meri shaadi no way mom please aap

log jaeye na yahase muje khanak se baar karni hai ."

Khanak looked at shaan, khushboo saw them looking at each other and

smiled

They stare at each other; dadi and madhvi were smiling seeing them

They were chatting and shaan pray to meet khanak but no chance,

khandelwal were playing with them, they didn't left them alone, Jay came

to sit with them

Jay: kya baate horahihe...kahi di ki shaadi kih planning toh

nahi horahihe abhi se , wese di kya baat hai aaj apne mujse

baat nahi kin aur muje data nahi keh Jay esa maat karo

Khanak glare at him

Jay: sorry kya abhi bhi saar dard horahahe ...( control to laugh )

Khushboo: koi baat nahi Jay mein hu na mein tume khanak ki

kami kabhi mehsus nahi hone dungi

Khanak stand to leave from there but khushboo stopped her

Khushboo: kaha jarahiho khanak, betho nah...

Khanak: nahi bhabhi woh kitchen meh kuch kaam hai

Khushboo: tum betho yaha kuch kaam nahi hai...aur wese bhi aaj

se tum koi kaam nahi karogi samji tum ...

Khushboo hold her hand and make her sit beside her, dadi and madhvi

were smiling

Khanak tried to change the topic

Khanak: bhabhi aap thik ho na, mein apke liye kuch leke awu ...

.( try to stand again )

Khushboo: mein bhilkul thikh hu aur muje kuch nah chahiye...

betho yaha

Jay: di hum shaadi ki planning karte hai teek hai aur wese mein

hu nah apko chota bhai

Madhvi: ha yeh acha hai hum shaadi kih planning abhi se shuru

kardete hai kyu mummy jee

Jay: wese bhai aap aaj office nahi gaye ...( smiling )...oh!!!!! apke

bhi saar meh dard hai, yah phir... ohh!!!!!!!!!!!! meh aabh

samja aap bhi di ko miss karoge nah

Shaan glare at him. control his anger and fold his hand into fist

Shaan: Jay aaj tum collage nahi gae...( with a fake smile )

Dadi: areh kyu miss mahi karega bachpan se joh saath

hai...yaad toh aegi nah

Jay: ohh!!!!!!!! isilye bhai upset lag rahehe,koi baat nahi bhai,

hum milne jaenge nah di aur jeju ko...( control not to laugh )

Shaan to himself " Jay i will kill u, lekin meh pehle khanak se baat

toh karlu, yeh ho kya rahahe shaan."

Jay: wese i m planning for day out after di's wedding will all go

to farm house, shaan bhai saab arrangement dardenge

Khushboo: aur shopping ki sari zimedari meri ....( happily) aur

mein ne yeh bhi soch liye ahi ke mein kya shopping karungi

Dadi and Madhvi want to laugh but they can't and just stealing glances to

khanak and shaan

Shaan muttered under his breath jay lagta hai bahar walo se pehle

tum mere hatho zarur pitega

Jay: bhai apne kuch kaha...( looked at him )

Looked give him an angry look and said " kuch nahi."

Jay: sorry lagta ha mood kharab hai ...

Khanak: woh mein abhi ayi...

Khushboo: kaha jarahiho khanak

Khanak: bhabhi woh kitchen meh kaam hai mera zara dekhke ati

hu

Dadi: khanak beta harilal hai nah...tum betho yaha par

Jay: haa di abh aap sirf aram hi aram karo...enjoy this feeling

Khanak glare at him and said " Jay tume parai nahi karni ."

Jay: sorry lagta hai aaj sabka mood kharab hai...( hand in air )

Khushboo control herself so as all Jay, madhvi and dadi

Dadi: acha aabh saab yeh baate choro aur khanak se toh bhi

pucho, use kesa lagrahahe

Madhvi: haa beta tume koi problem toh nahi hai nah, tum khush

ho nah

Khanak didn't know what to say first she wanted to talk to shaan

Khushboo: ereh mom khush kese nahi hogi ... uski shaadi ki

baat chal hahihe

Shaan was stealing glances to khanak, he want to talk to her but no one let

khanak move from there

Madhvi: mein to puchna hi bhulgai...khanak tum shopping

jane wali thi uska kya huwa

Khanak: nahi maa ... aabh hum nahi jarahehe

Dadi: kyu nahi jarahiho...saar abhi dar horahahe ...( worried )

Khanak: mein thikh hu dadi ...

Dadi: mein abhi dawai bhejtihu ...aur phir apne kamreme jake

aram karna thikh ha

Dadi and madhvi left from there

Shaan felt bad, he thought this is all because of him

Shaan: khanak tum thikh ho nah...( worried and felt bad )

Khanak looked at him surprised, shaan talked to him nicely

Khushboo: shaan yeh saab tumari jawase hai

Shaan: meri jawase !!!!.....(to khushboo)

then to himself " ha shaan tumari wajase, tume kaal uske saath

istara behave nahi karna chahiyetha ." he was angry to him self

Khanak: bhabhi mein thikh hu ...bas thora sa hi dard hai

Jay: di aap bhai ki side lena band karo ...yeh saab unki wajase

huwa hai

Khanak: Jay mein thikh hu ...( looked at khanak)

Khushboo: shaan istara koi kartaha kya ...( smiled to herself )

Shaan: mein!! Mein ne kya kiya ...( in his mind kahi sabko pata

to nahi chalgaya kaal raat joh huwa )

Khushboo: itna kaam koi karata hai kya... pehle akshay

aur aabh tum bhi, khanak woh file ready hai kya har waqt file

dikhti hai tum logo ko

Shaan had a sigh of relief, he thought they knew everything

Shaan phone rings

Shaan: haa bhaiya ...mein arahahu ...( he didn't want to go but sunil

wants him there for some work )

Khanak: kya huwa shaan , office mein saab thikh hai nah

Khushboo: agar kuch thikh bhi nahi huwa, phir bhi tum kahi nahi

jarahiho samji tum, aabh chalo karmene jake aram karo

Shaan: haa sab thikh hai tum jake aram karo

Shaan in his mind " mein khanak se baad mein baat karlunga wese

woh abhi pareshan lagrahihe ." he went to his room to take his wallet

and car keys

Khanak and khushboo in khanak's room, khushboo was giving tablet to

take for headache but khanak refused to take it, she didn't like to take

medicine

Khushboo: khanak kya bacho ki tara zidd kar rahiho yeh lo kao

isi saar dard kaam hojaega

Khanak: nahi bhabhi please...yeh tablet nahi please... abh

thikh hai saar darn...dard nahi horahahe ...( make a baby face )

Khushboo shaked her head, shaan pass by her room and heard some noise,

he came to her room

Shaan: kya huwa...

Khushboo: acha huwa tum agaye dekho ise...dawai nahi leh

rahihe

Khanak she was sitting on her bed " mein thikh hu...muje nahi

chahiye yeh tablet ."

Shaan : bhabhi idar lao ...( khushboo gave him)

Shaan moved beside her to give her medicine

Shaan: muh kholo... ( near her mouth )

Khanak make a face " nahi mein thikh hu shaan ."

Shaan: agar tumne muh nahi khola toh mein zabar zasti

khilaunga samji tum

Khanak: mein barm laga dungi... lekin yeh nahi please

Khushboo sit on the cough facing them and smiled

Shaan: haa woh bhi mein laga dunga pehle yeh ...

Khanak make a baby face pleading him

Shaan: khanak...( stern voice, khanak felt happy shaan talked to

her and cared for her )

Khanak opened her mouth shaan gave her medicine and make her drink

water

Shaan moved from there, open a drawer and took out a bam came near her

Khanak: yeh kya hai...( looked at him )

Shaan make her laid on bed and apply bam on her forehead

Khushboo was still there smiling at them and said to herself slowly pagal

Shaan gently massage her forehead and both stared into each other's eyes,

they were lost in their world, khushboo was just looking at them lovingly and enjoyed the scene, then after few minutes khanak slept, last night she didn't slept well so when shaan massage her fore head she slept peacefully

Khushboo: acha huwa tum agae...warna yeh kabhi nahi

maanti...abh sogae hai toh thora aram milega

Khushboo thought to tease shaan and see his reaction

Khushboo: shaan wese tum neh bataya nahi khanak ki shaadi ka

tumara kya khayal hai...( chuckle and hide her smile )

Shaan muttered to himself " phirse shaadi...yaar mein pagal

hojaunga ."

Khushboo: kya huwa...tumne kuch kaha

Shaan: nahi ...( then he thought ) wese bhabhi woh romit ...

Khushboo understood what he want to know

Khushboo: haa romit... uski bhi shaadi horahihe ...

Khushboo didn't feel well so she excused herself

shaan looked at khanak's sleeping form and admire her, caresses her face

softly not to disturb her sleep

shaan: khanak i m so sorry ....( caresses her hair and kiss her fore

head ) mein tume kabhi hurt nahi karunga i m sorry ...( kissed

her closed eyes ) mein ne tume bohut rulaya ...( kissed her cheeks )

he looked at her for another few minutes admiring her and again kissed her

fore head before he left from there

hey guys i will try to be regular but can't promise as my vacation is over

and from tomorrow will be at work so time to write will be lack

Please press the like button and feel free to comment😊

Edited by heer_85 - 12 years ago
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Aap toh super fast ho yaar!!
read both the updates and loved both of them!!
bechara Shaan!! sab uska mazak kar rahe hain😆
Loved the whole family convo😃
and not to forget that tablet part, loved it!!!
no worries, jab time milta hain tab update karlo😊
tumhare boss tho bahut mahan hain, itne dino ke liye chutti dedi, meri bhai toh ek din chutti lene ki liye sau baar sochtha hain😆
Waiting for next one eagerly!!

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