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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update heer!!
haaye kya dream tha!! dream sach bhi hogaya!!!
how mean you are laughing at Shaan!!hhhmmpphh!!
Chipkali kahi ki!! agar do minute late aati, toh kya bigad jaata!!
jealousy!!! haan Romit, Khanak sirf Shaan ki hain!!ROFL!!
update soon!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ktym

Shaan's dream was romantic...


but i didnt like this riya who always comes between shanak...

Feel like hitting her...dishum dishum...


Thanx for commenting, i too like to do dishum dishum 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chandu8881

Lovely update heer!!
haaye kya dream tha!! dream sach bhi hogaya!!!
how mean you are laughing at Shaan!!hhhmmpphh!!
Chipkali kahi ki!! agar do minute late aati, toh kya bigad jaata!!
jealousy!!! haan Romit, Khanak sirf Shaan ki hain!!ROFL!!
update soon!!


Thanx Chandu, yeah it was dream comes true but not for a long time 😆 khanak was shocked, yeah agar riya thori der aati toh shaan ki hojati bale bale 😉🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Heer

Great Last 2 update...about this update...full on Romantic...
so hot Scene on Bed...this time khanak move first to cress his head to cheek and admire him with full on passion...and what about the shaan dream ...and this Dream happen to the khanak in real...shaan was in dream but khanak was in real...God!when he kiss her neck trace her Lips how she handle this slow Love Torture ...i Love it!!!
But our Burthal Again made Mistake ...Said I Love not completing the sentence...
uff Riya!!!!!😡
God Misunderstanding increase day by day...i cnat see khanak in pain...
but i m very sure the...khanak ignorance towards the shaan will create the sensual Romance between them 😉waiting for the next update heer
update soon

Love u Take care
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: janavi07

Hi Heer

Great Last 2 update...about this update...full on Romantic...
so hot Scene on Bed...this time khanak move first to cress his head to cheek and admire him with full on passion...and what about the shaan dream ...and this Dream happen to the khanak in real...shaan was in dream but khanak was in real...God!when he kiss her neck trace her Lips how she handle this slow Love Torture ...i Love it!!!
But our Burthal Again made Mistake ...Said I Love not completing the sentence...
uff Riya!!!!!😡
God Misunderstanding increase day by day...i cnat see khanak in pain...
but i m very sure the...khanak ignorance towards the shaan will create the sensual Romance between them 😉waiting for the next update heer
update soon

Love u Take care
😊


Thanx Jaanvi for such a sweet comment, shaan was dreaming but its was real for khanak
yeah shaan is burthal he said i love u Riya instead of khanak due to riya load bang in his room
will try to update tonight, i have completed writing 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello guys i m posting today as i have finished writing

Thank you so much for liking my story and pressed like button 😊

( priyani143, virika01, kp_yasharan, jaisyjazz, chandu8881, diyak,

maneesha28889, Saranya1990, aasma1, ktym,IF_rida,

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Thanks to all who comment guys😊

Here is the 5th part enjoy and please ignore any grammatical

Errors

Part 5

Riya force shaan to take her out to see the town and do some

shopping, shaan told Riya many times not to behave like his GF but Riya

didn't listen to him.

Coffee shop

Romit and khanak were waiting for Jaanvi

Romit: areh yeah meri Jaan kaha rahgae... abhi taak kyu nai

ayi... hope she comes yaar ..(impatiently looking at khanak)

Khanak: mmmhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!

Romit: what mmmhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kuch karo yaar

Khanak: areh isme mein kya karsakti hu... yeh saab tumari

wajase horahahe... aur lado uhse

Romit: ohh!!! meri maa... baas karo... roz ekhi lecture

sunna parta hai tumse

Khanak: acha... toh mein tume roz lecture deti hu... thikh

hai toh mein jati hu... tum khudh samal lena ... ( tried to raise

from her seat )

Romit: nahi yaar thikh hai , m sorry ...( acting innocently )mein uhse ladta hu aabh thikh hai

Khanak: thikh hai... (Hide her grinning face ) lekin yeah

abhi taak kyu nahi ayi kitni der hogai hai... ( saw time on

her wrist watch )

Few minutes later Jaanvi came there

Jaanvi: hii sweety !!!!!!!!!!! ( smiling )

Romit: hii Jaan!!!!!!!!

Jaanvi: mene sweety tume nahi kaha kis aur se nahi ... ( looked

at Khanak)

Khanak: hiii cutie pie

Romit chuckle " cutie pie !!!!!!! kis angle se cutie hai... harwaqt

mujse ladti rehti hai ."

Jaanvi: tumne kuch kaha ...( stand facing romit one hand on her

waist )

Romit: nahi Jaan mene kya kaha!!! ...kuch bhi toh nahi

(innocently )

Khanak shake her head as they both started again

Khanak: choro nah... aur betho toh sahi...

Jaanvi takes the seat opposite romit .

Khanak: wese tum kaal kyu nahi ayi party mein...

Jaanvi: woh... dadi ki tabyat achak karab hogai isilye nahi apai

Romit: toh phir tumne muhje kyu nahi bataya... ( worried and in

stern tone )... mana keh we having little tussle... lekin

iska matlab yeh nahi keh tum muhje dadi ki tabyat keh bare na batao

Khanak: hai tuhme hume batana chahiye tha ...

Jaanvi: esi zyaad kharab nahi hui thi isiliye nahi bataya ...acha

choro how was the party yesterday... wese muhje shaan se

milna parega... tumne inti tayari ya joh kithi

uske liye

Romit: yeah he's a nice guy

Khanak thought of shaan again at his name mention and to her self "

shaan kya karraha hoga abhi... kya woh riya keh saath hoga ."

she left bad

Jaanvi: khanak tume kya huwa.. kihs soch mein ho

Khanak: kuch nahi Jaanu ...( she called her Jaanu )

Romit started to make conv with Jaanvi and try to patch up but Jaanvi

was not looking at him, she was very upset with him so khanak tried to

up their fight but she failed

They were fighting lovingly and khanak was just looking at them, they

were arguing like kids.

Romit: Jaan mene sirf us ladki ko hold kiya when she slipped,

i was just helping her aur tum ho keh kuch aur samaj liya ...

Janvi : ohh really!!!! Us ladhki ko koi aur nahi mila kya use

hold

karne keliye, tume uska hero banne ko kisne kaha tha aur

usne

tume kiss bhi kiya ... kitni chalu ladki thi woh...

Romit: haa ... kiss (Dreamily and didn't realise what he said )

Jaanvi opened her mouth in shock and said " what????." ( angrily )

Romit : nahi mera matlab ... haa na haa... woh...

( saw Jaanvi's facial expression which was changing in more anger )

He was confused he didn't know what he was saying coz Jaanvi was a

chatter box .

Khanak was enjoying their cute nokh johk, looking at both them

Romit: ( slowly to khanak) " please yaar kuch karo mene tume

yaha

Janvi se baat karne koh bulaya tha aur tum ho keh yaha waha

dekh kar enjoy karrahiho."

Khanak tried to say something but Jaanvi cut her off her

Janvi: khanak muhje kuch nahi sunna, aur tum meri side peh

ho

yah is dhoke baaz ki taraf (pointed to Romit )

Romit: dhoke baaz... mene kaab tume dhoka diya

Jaanvi was full nautanki

Khanak: pehle hum coffee order karle phir baad mein argue

karna thikh hai

Janvi: nahi pehle mein iss dhoke baaaz se baat toh karlu

and they started again, khanak place her one hand on her chin and

looked at them how they argue

Shaan and Riya was near by the same coffee shop. Shaan was not

interested in Riya's talks, his mind was on Romit with khanak

Shaan: hogaya tumari shopping now not more so lets go

Riya: shaan please kuch aur shop mein chalet hai

Shaan: tum jao mein gaar jarahahu...

Riya: thikh hai agar shopping nahi toh hum coffee pine chalte

hai

Jaanvi got a call so she moved to attend as the network was not good

in the coffee shop .

shaan and Riya enter the same coffee shop, they saw khanak and

Romit alone, they were chatting and smiling, Khanak got something on

her neck, romit notice when she tucked her hair behind her ear and

point toward her neck telling her to remove it but she didn't get it

Romit: Khanak woh tumare neck paar kuch hai

Khanak was trying to touch n said " khaha and touching her neck"

she didn't get it so

Romit move to her, bent a little and helped her , he touched her neck

, shaan saw all this and take it wrong, he become very angry

Romit turn and said " aabh yeah meri Jaan kaha chaligai." and

saw

shaan and Riya near by the entrance


Romit : khanak woh shaan hai na Riya ke saath

Khanak: she looked at the side Romit showed her and spot

shaan and Riya

Romit called shaan and told them to join

On other side Jaanvi message khanak that she is leaving, she got a

call from home, coz she didn't patch up with Romit, she didn't

message him .

Shaan didn't got chance to meet Jaanvi so he knows only Romit and

khanak were there for coffee

Riya: hii guys... we met again... ( smiling )

Romit: hiii yeah we met again... ( smiling too )

Shaan and riya had a seat Shaan was stealing glance to khanak, he was

very upset, he wanted to talk to her, and know the truth

Since he came he didn't get a proper conv with khanak, and now seeing

her like this with romit

Khanak was feeling sad to see shaan and Riya and the same situation

was for shaan seeing khanak with romit

Romit: so guys tum log yaha...

Riya: yeah shaan muhje shopping leke ayahai... aur tum log

milgae

Khanak looked at shaan, and found him looking at her

Romit: wow!! Shopping not bad shaan... aneke baad sidha

shopping

Riya: wese aabh ... hum saab saath mein milgae toh kyu nah

hum

saab thori shopping karle

Khanak: nahi hum thorihi der mein nikal neh wale the... shaan hai

nah tum uske saath shopping karlo ... ( stare at him and said, no

one notice except shaan)

khanak told romit that jaanvi has already left as she got a call

from home (before shaan came to them)

Romit order coffee for all four

After some time sunil called khanak, she excused herself

and attend the call, sunil told her to come office,

Khanak ended the call and came to trio

Khanak: sorry hame nikal na hoga woh Adda ka phome tha.

Office bulaya hai... urgent meeting hai

Romit: thikh hai abh hum chaltehai ...

Romit and Khanak took their leave, left Riya and shaan in the coffee

shop

Riya : shaan woh tume nahi lagta ke Romit n Khanak ke beech

kuch hai ... I mean jab saath hote hai to full mood me hote hai

Shaan listened to Riya and his blood started boiling, Riya's word

started occupied his mind.

In the office

Romit and Khanak were working on a project together

Sunil thought, shaan has just come so he wanted him to give some

time, latter he wil tell him to join the office

Riya wanted to roam for more but shaan was not in mood, his mind

was playing with him

He dropped Riya at home and goes to office

Sunil, Akki , Khanak and Romit were in Sunil cabin discussing where

their project was leading

Meeting went over, Akki and Romit left

Shaan enter Sunil office, sunil and khanak were talking

Shaan felt good seeing khanak n thought today he will talk to her.

Sunil was very proud of khanak, she was taking her work seriously n

leading where her father wanted to take the business with him.

Sunil : Khanak tumne muhje aur Madhvi ko kabhi bhi beti ki

kami

mehsus nahi hone dih, aaj agar tumare Dad hoteh toh, he

would be proud of u.

khanak had tears in her eyes when sunil told her about her father

Seeing this shaan was feeling very bad he can't see khanak in tears,

upset or hurt

Even when they were in school if someone hurt khanak, shaan would

fight for her

Sunil saw shaan n welcome him and khanak wiped her teary eyes

She was happy to see shaan but upset too, for wat happened in the

room and at breakfast table

Shaan told his dad that, he wanted to join office.

Sunil: yeah achi baat hai shaan, but tum abhi abhi to ayeho, i

think u should take some rest and then kuch din baad join us.

Sunil : kyu Khanak tumara kya khayal hai ( checking a file )

Shaan looked at Khanak. She didn't say anything

Shaan: nahi dad i m fine, aur mein Kaal hi join karunga

shaan said he wil join the next day, he wanted to be with khanak

every time

khanak excused herself and left son and father

After few minutes khanak went to Akshay's cabin to show him a file

khanak and Akshay talked sometime. Askhay left khanak in his cabin

and told her he is coming, shaan went to khanak's cabin but she was't

there, so he thought to meet his bro

shaan moved to Akshay's cabin he knocked but khanak didn't heard as

she was engrossed in a file, shaan just enter the cabin and saw khanak

back was facing him, she knew its khanak. He moved to her near where

is was seated.

Khanak raised from the chair turn and collide with shaan, before she

hit the floor shaan engulf her from her waist. Khanak looked at him as

she was dreaming; they both stare at each other lovingly. Shaan was

deep in lost in her beautiful eyes, he slowly raised his one hand to

remove her hair stand from her face, khanak just stare at him, shaan

tucked her hair around her ear and moved his hands on her cheeks and

caresses her, khanak closed her eyes at his touch and servers the

moment, shaan sees her closed eyes and move near her lips, they both

felt each other breathe on their lips, khanak clucked his shirt for

support as she feels him very close still eyes closed, shaan;s lips

slightly touches her, khanak felt electric current running in her body.

Shaan was about to kiss her fully

Their sweet moment was broken when Akshay enter his cabin, before

he enter he open the door and said " khanak."

So both moved apart at the sound, so Akshay didn't saw them close


Shaan to himself " areh yeh bhaiya bhi nah !!!!! kya galat timing

par agae, agar thore der baad ateh toh kya bigar jata." then

he looked at khanak to check her reaction after almost their kiss and

saw her nervous and not looking at him

Akshay: Khanak ... woh file... areh chotey

tum yaha ... what a pleasant surprise ...( happy to see shaan )

Shaan again to himself "areh kesa surprise saab bigar diya apne."


Akshay: tumne kuch kaha chootey

Shaan: nahi ..., esehi bhaiya... just passed

nearby so mein neh socha mein yaha ajau

Akshay: acha... Come sit ( he take his seat )

Khanak excused herself not looking at shaan " bhaiya mein

chalti hu..."

Akshay: acha thikh hai...yeah file leke jao aur dekhlo...

saab sahi hai kya ...

Khanak: jee bhaa... ( took the file and left, shaan looked her )

Both shaan and Akshay chat

khanak in her cabin

khanak was reading some file and working of her Lappy, someone

knocked and she welcome the person at the door

Khanak : coming !!! she was on her lappy and rised her face to

see who was

It was shaan who came to her cabin

Precape: what will happen next , will shanak talk

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will try post part 6 tomorrow if it will be ready

Edited by heer_85 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg wooow loool oved it, plz post soon... x
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aasma1

omg wooow loool oved it, plz post soon... x


thanx Aasma😊 tomoro wil try to update if i wil complete to write
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update heer...

loved it...they almost kissed...😉

hope they talk this time...
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Posted: 12 years ago
😆 i laughed like hell on romit and janvi's conv (and ya its romit not raj i m sorry for this mistake :)
hmm i understand seeing romit and khanak like that anybody will think in a different way
the only way to clear these misunderstandings is to talk but kitna strange hai ek hi ghar me reh kar bhi dono budthals baat nahi kar pate so much of disturbance are dinuya walon plzz let the budthals talk atleast
oh ho shit their almost first kiss was again broken by akshay the great bro
yesss now i m hoping that atleast they get to talk now plzzz heer
but this is not the right place to talk on this matter but atleast they should decide time and place to talk hain na i think so
oh if u can then plzz update tomorrow also :)

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