SOUND OF LIFE Ch28(end) pg 55 oct 23 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: IF_rida

gud one niki
haye wats wrong with the lover boy and she called him bhaiya... oops... nahi ye nai ho sakta
shanak and their fight... they are too much but we love their nok jhok
i guess he will be in her coll as well
and em lukin fwd to the next part and how love blossoms


thanks a lot rida..ya they will meet in their college...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: ktymfan

BACK WITH NEW STORY HMMM? Nikki, lovely concept, characterization n our very dear burthals shanak...so Ansh is shAnak's ansh...iNteresting...waIting for updates...-SAROJ


thanks a lot saroj...i hope u will like this story...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: maneesha28889

awesome update niki...😊


curious to know what has happened between shanak...
waiting eagerly for the next part...


thanks a lot maneesha...ya everything u will know as the story proceeds...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
hi friends...

ch : 4

khanak was wearing a beautifull short chudithar...she was so excited...

its her first day in college...she walked inside the collge...with smile...

khanak:excuse me...where is first yr IT department...

girl smile at khanak...

girl: hi am also going to IT department...come with me...

khanak:oh...by the way i am khanak...extended her hand...

girl:i am nisha...(shook there hand with each other)

they both walked together to the room with smile and small talk...

they reached there class room...

nisha :wow finally in to college...(with a smile)

khanak:ummm..ya i am very much excited...

they both went and sat in the front row...

many girls and boys entered and they all were talking...

suddenly some group of boys and girls entered the room...

a boy alone from the gang sat in the teachers desk along with a girl...

the class became quiet...

khanak saw the gang and she kept on seeing a person...

khanak thought i dont like that person ...damn he is placing his hand on

her waist...infront of everyone...he does not know manners...wait...

did i know him...i have seen him some where...where...

khanak was thinking who that person was...

rahul:hey juniors...we r ur seniors...

class:good morning seniors...

rahul:shaan shall we start...

shaan noded his head...

khanak thought wat shaan that ...that nerd...idiot dork...shit...

rahul: come on guys introduce urself...lets start with boys...

shaan:rahul..no..first with girls...wat tina...

tina:yes sweet heart...

khanak thought oh its his girlfriend same as him...

nisha got up and introduced herself...next it was khanaks turn...

khanak thought wat get up and introduce my self no way...

she was sitting itself...

khanak:i am...

shaan:wait...dont u know manners...

khanak:i know manners...ur just a final yr student...so there is no need to getup

and answer ur questions...

shaan became tensed...he looked at her...khanak just looked at him straight...

nisha:khanak ..khanak...

shaan thought khanak...k...h..a..n..a..k...that fatty...

shaan looked at her very angryly...she also looked at him angryly...

shaan:u havent changed a little u..FD...

khanak:u havent changed a little u ND...

shaan:u Fatty Dork(FD) looking at her angrily...

khanak:u Nerdy DOrk(ND) looking at him very angrily...

khanak:good morning sir..(got up from her place and looked at the entrance)

shaan who was sitting in the teachers desk got down with a jerk and all

seniors became tensed and looked at the entrance...

shaan became angry and he saw khanak who was now sitting and laughing...

because lecturer did not came to the class...she has just lied...

all other her classmates also laughed...

shaan and other his friends became angry and especially shaan

became very angry...he walked towards khanak...khanak was sitting in her place...

shaan was about to talk...

rahul:shaan sir is coming lets go...come one...

shaan pointed a finger at her and he walked out of the class...

khanak became very interest in her class...

rahul:excuse me sir...

sir:s rahul...

rahul:sir today afternoon we r having welcome fn for juniors...

sir :ohh...inform them...

rahul:hello juniors...today we r having welcome function for u guys...

so please come to association hall after ur lunch...

rahul:thank u sir...

after lunch they all moved to association hall...

khanak:wow its really nice nisha...

nisha:ummm...

it was a big hall...chairs r put...nisha and khanak sat in the front row...

vidhruvan: hi i am vidhruvan...u talked very boldly today morning...extened his hand..

khanak also shook her hand...with a smile...

khanak:wow atleast ur supporting..nisha was scolding me...

vidhruvan:no its really nice to see a bold girl in our class...

shaan:ha..very bold enough...

khanak was startled to her the voice...she looked and saw shaan was standing

near to them looking at them without anyexpression...

khanak just looked at him and then sat on her seat...

khanak:vidhruvan come sit with us...(looking and smiling at vidhruvan)

vidhruvan:ummm..sure..(with a smile)

shaan looked at vidhruvan and khanak...

professors and HOD came to the hall...

HOD gave the speech and professors gave the students

about the college details and other things that students should know...

professors and HOD went out of the hall...

when students were about to move out of the class...

rahul: wait guys...please sit down we have arranged something for u guys..

everyone sat in the place...khanak was busy in talking with vidhruvan...

shaan:its enough of talking with eachother guys...

khanak looked at him in anger...shaan looked at her then he looked at the group..

shaan:this one for u guys...

rahul and other friends brought a beautifull big cake...

everyone in the hall clapped their hands with excitement...

but khanak was sitting quietly...

rahul: shall we cut shaan..

shaan:oh wait man..this is for juniors...so anyone from juniors can come and cut...

there was a loud clap from juniors side..but khanak was just sitting without any excitement...

rahul:thats nice...anyone from juniors...

but the crowd became silent...

vidhruvan:hey khanak u can go na...(with a smile)

khanak: no vidhru...

rahul: any volunteers...no one...ha...Miss khanak can u come please...(smile)

khanak:no..i am...

other classmates :come on khanak...khanak...khanak...

khanak looked at shaan who was talking with tina...shaan turned and met her eyes...

he just shook his shoulder and he continued his talk...

rahul:come on khanak...

khanak got up from her place and walked towards the cake...

she wenta nd stood before the cake and faced her classmates...

everyone r cheering her up...

rahul went and gave the knife to her...

khanak slowly blowed the candle...and everyone clapped the hands...

khanak kept the knife on the cake...she pressed the cake a little and

she lifted her head and saw all seniors were standing in distance...

she was alone infront of the cake...she has pressed the kife into the cake harder..

there was a sound...cake has blown and some cakes r on her face and head...

some scattered..khanak was standing there in shock...

shaan and his friends r laughing out loud...

shaan came near her while laughing...

shaan:dont play with me again u FD...

khanak:i am not FD u ND...within a fraction of second she applied cake in his whole face...

shaan did not expected this from her..he was standing still...khanak was laughing...



hey friends leave ur opinions when u guys get time r hit like button if u like it...😊

Edited by niki_rbo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

superlike...loved deir little nok jhok...

OMG dat cake part was unexpected...🤣 shaan u better dnt mess wid khanak...😉

wow nw wht shaan is gonna do...he will definitely teach lesson to khanak...😊

will wait fr nxt...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: snigdhanagar

superlike...loved deir little nok jhok...

OMG dat cake part was unexpected...🤣 shaan u better dnt mess wid khanak...😉

wow nw wht shaan is gonna do...he will definitely teach lesson to khanak...😊

will wait fr nxt...


thanks a lot IA...i thought for something ..but cake only came while i was writing...IA thanks for giving this idea...if i have not talked with u ..i would not have included this..thank u IA
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
awesome one nikki
cake scene was just fabulous loved it
next update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: AwesomeYashAran

awesome one nikki

cake scene was just fabulous loved it
next update soon


thanks a lot nainshree..next update i dont know when..when i am updateing i will PM u guys...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Lovely Nikki
So shaan is in senior group and khanak in junior
Senior group wanted to get intro from junior but khanak didn't stand to gv intro and shanak nohkh johkh started 😆
loved the short words FD n ND 🤣
the cake part was awesome, khanak apply cake on shaan face 🤣
waiting for next to knw what wil shaan do
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
Lovely update niki
waiting for the romantic moments of shanak

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