THIRSTY VAGABOND updated page 19 14 november - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
good update
liked it
next update soon please
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
amazing concept...loved it...please update regularly...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
hey i loved the update😊
ur story is very different i ike it very much
plz update regularly
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Nice update
The informer whom Shaan is going to meet may be his dream girl Khanak
waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
lovely update
shaan n Natasha going to b married as sunil's last wish n
khanak is a widow n informer who helped shaan
looking forward for the turns n hw they fall for each other
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@DiehardYMfan, sorry for taking time reading your FF and thanks for the pm and loved reading your FF it a beautiful, amazing concept really different...waiting for next update :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 3:

Shaan being the thorough gentleman he was never forgot to show reverence to the fairer sex,but today he even forgot to stand up from his seat as the lady in churidar entered the cabin.He even forgot to exchange pleasentries with this new entry.He was rather involved in thinking how can someone be so perfect yet so simple.He had turned towards her,still seated on the chair His left hand was resting on his left thigh and he was in a half turned position gazing at her with an open expression that could not be read,atleast by khanak.

"Ahem"she coughed as she was feeling uncomfortable under the intent gaze.

"Hmm?oh,ya"he replied awkwardly coming out of the trance.Then realizing his folly,he stood up from the chair and showing the seat,said "Please be seated."

"I thought you were never going to ask me to sit" she laughed trying to reduce the awkwardness of the situation.

"Umm ..no actually…." He fumbled trying to find the accurate words.

"Actually I will tell you the reason",Chauhan intervened,smiling a sly smile"our Mr.handsome is getting married next month, which is the obvious reason behind all this distraction."

Khanak didn't know why but she felt as if something bit her sharp in the heart. She couldn't decipher why she felt like that for a stranger whom she met minutes ago. Or was it because what she felt towards the word "marriage". She didn't know.

Shaan was also not quite pleased with Chauhan letting out this piece of information. It was not that he wanted to hide the fact that he was engaged,rather ,this piece of information was always helpful to him as it helped him to get rid of unwanted female attention . He did not know why but his heart did not want this girl to know the fact. God knows why.

"Coming back to the point" Chauhan said recovering his usual grim countenance "Shantanu this is our informer Khanak Singh , she is also the wife of an ex-officer of our department Late Suraj Singh who was killed by Shastri s men in 2009.Since then she had been waiting to avenge her husband s death and she did it today and made all of us proud."He said patting khanak on her back.

Shaan was shocked by this piece of information. This lady went on surprising him since their first meeting ,and now this recent development increased Shaan s compassion for the figure sitting beside him.Yes compassion was the right word, not pity or sympathy.It was strange how he felt towards the lady but failed to develop any feelings towards her late husband.Strange is human mind.

"Coming to serious issues Shaan, we need protection cover for khanak ;as she is a prime witness in the case andShashtri is after her. I want you to take the responsibility because I know you can pull it off."Chauhan said in his usual business tone.

Shaan felt his heart do a somersault.

6 pmish

Outside

Victoria Memorial Hall

"Umm,lets have some panipuri."Shaan said as an awkward attempt to strive a conversation with Khanak.

"Ummnhmmm,phuchka"She corrected Shaan,turning towards him and smiling.

"Woh hi"Shaan also said smiling.

"You know khanak what I like about kolkata is the homely feeling of the city"Shaan added ,trying to score brownie points with the lady ,as he had just heard that it was her favourite city.

She froze on the ground,unable to walk,talk or hear.It was as if someone had chiselled her heart.

Shaan sensed that maybe Khanak was not beside him .When he turned to check,he found her standing in the middle of the road ,frozen, and he saw an auto rickshaw driving towards her with full speed.

Khanak did not know for how long she stood like that until something whizzed past her with full speed and she saw a pair of strong muscular arms jolting her away from the spot and she landed on the road with the owner of those arms beneath her.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
nice update sourya
liked it
next update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
short and sweet update loved it...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
lovely update
so from now shaan n khanak will b together
luking forward to hw their relation will take a turn

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