THIRSTY VAGABOND updated page 19 14 november

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello guys here I go with my 2nd os just tell me how it is...I already have a plot in mind...so lets see how it develops...buddy me for pms and please suggest(honestly)if I should continue or not...
THIRSTY VAGABOND

"Mission Successful",the devilishly handsome figure blurted out on phone. He was wearing a maroon shirt and a black jeans with his trademark golden goggles and the most enchanting smile on earth which could make any person awe in wonder of his genuineness and could make any girl go insane for his gorgeousness.

"Yes Sir ;I will take care of that ."He assured his superior, completing his call.

Just when his heart was brimming with happiness for the success of his first mission, destiny had something else planned for him.

A young female bumped into him.

She had the most scared eyes one could have ever seen; wearing a pink and white kurta and a ragged white salwar ,she did not have her dupatta,which made her all the more uncomfortable.

He felt as if his heart missed a beat ''''

However he quickly restrained himself and asked namrata, his junior to escort the girl to the car.

Evening news

"A very dangerous sex racket was busted by the Madhya Pradesh joint operations department, today here in Salt Lake, kolkata"roared the thunderous reporter"At around 2:30 pm in the afternoon, a male officer of the department pretending to be a customer went into the building which is situated in the BB block and busted the racket. West Bengal police was trying to catch this racket for a long time but they have not been very successful. However a young officer from Madhya Pradesh today achieved that, what the whole police force has not been able to achieve."

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He has been very tired the whole day. Right from giving interviews to various channels to forwarding data to his office. He was here for two more days before he will have to return to Madhya Pradesh.Heliked all the adulation and encouragement he got here. He laughed inwardly counting the number of proposals he had received along the day. But there was something uncanny which he could feel but could not gauge. Why was that he was feeling a bit restless. What was that?

And then, as if by some divine intervention, he remembered those hazel eyes, those gorgeous orbits. Her personality reflected her aura. Her chastity was beyond doubt. She was simple yet so fragrant.

His train of thought was disturbed by an incoming call. The caller ID showed "natasha".

He picked up the phone and said,

"Hello Darling"

2 years ago

The morning sunshine filtered into the house. She parted the curtains to let in the fresh sunshine and then with a sweet smile watched as the dust particles danced in the rays. The serenity of the place was increased manifold by the sleeping form whom she called her husband. His handsome features and blissful mood was something she loved to watch .She crept up to him and brushed her fingers opposite his stubble in a back stroke.

"Wake up darling sooraj.Its time."

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ShaNak_RagNa thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome sourya you should continue
its a unique story I liked the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you nainashree...hope am able to satisfy you all
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it shouray
It's interesting n now i m more eagerly wanting to read further
khanak bumped on shaan n saw her eyes which make his heart miss
beat dat was a gud start
n dat 2 years ago intro was really gud
pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very interesting ... and unique
plz continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its different..
but is that all??r will u be continuing this??
if thats it may be i didnt understand.. sorry..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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NICE STORY..CONTINUE SOON😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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first of all u gotta n have to continue wid this


loved it...u have to continue please...like yr style of writing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wooow nice start plz start to pm me because I cant add anyone to buddy list... Do continue because everyone starts and stops anf I know ur a big fan of shanak so u will definently continue xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW!!!
i loved it
plz update next part very soon 😊

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