FF:Love Arranged- Part 53 (Pg99) 3 Aug

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SJ6...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#571

wooow loool khanak is setting him straight loool
I think its time to get tgem to fall in love, I mean the pace of the story shud go up what say babe?

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Nisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#572

Originally posted by: aasma1
wooow loool khanak is setting him straight loool
I think its time to get tgem to fall in love, I mean the pace of the story shud go up what say babe?

You're right Aasma...but I just don't want it to seem too sudden 😊

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IF_rida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#573

wowww i juz loved it
fantastic update
this avatar of khanak is simply awesome
he really has a twisted brain i seriously couldn't get it wht he was saying
but i like the fact that at least the conv started normally
and it tirned into a heated one and i loved it
the way khanak talked to him...u nailed it
he truly deserves it
but em lukin fwd to how they'll get to know each other
update soon

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Nisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#574

Originally posted by: IF_rida
wowww i juz loved it
fantastic update
this avatar of khanak is simply awesome
he really has a twisted brain i seriously couldn't get it wht he was saying
but i like the fact that at least the conv started normally
and it tirned into a heated one and i loved it
the way khanak talked to him...u nailed it
he truly deserves it
but em lukin fwd to how they'll get to know each other
update soon

Thanks Ridaaa!! 😊

Shaan has so much in his brain..so much he doesn't understand..and so much he wants to hide from everyone else, that his words don't make much sense sometimes. He assumes things which Khanak has not even thought of. I can totally get what you mean about him!

They'll get to know each other better soon. 😊

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@Medusa..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#575

Woaaah! Feels like its been Ages!😳

Hi Nisha!🤗

Well, from where should I actually start? First of, I absolutely love your style of writing! Simply beautiful! And honestly, I'm a BIG fan!😃

Okay! So after covering all the parts, I realized how much I've been missing! But I'm glad I got to read it all in one go, nahi tho..mujhe excitement ke maare neend nahi aati!😲😆

So Back to Hindustan! :D Sudden Marriage twist was quite unpredictable..but I'm glad finally, there's gonna be some progress in their lives! :') Shaan, I dont know why.. I cant find him adorable anymre! He is SOO damn confused! and its high time, he sort them out, or atleast let his friend help him! But seriously, this guy has created a holy mess out of it all! -_- Only thing I wish to say is, GROW UP! :P

On the other hand, Khanak! Hayee...! I'm loving her more n more! And I feel so bad for her! Man, coz of the guy she likes, her life has stopped progressing as well! And I hate it! :( She shouldnt be stuck with him anymore! And yes Nisha, I so badly wanna see Khanak mingling around in HIS home with his family and people, and she paying him ZERO attention!Hmppffhh! For that, I wont mind, if you bring in any of his hawt cousin! ;)

I hate it, when he speaks to her in that mocking, and sarcastic tone! :@ Abhi bhi tum isko nahi sudhaari, tho I'm gonna hate him completely! :(

And the latest Part! Muaah! Kisses to you! This was MUCH needed, though I wanted her to be more harsh! :P He deserved it! and ASKED for it!

Okay, mera bhaashan khatam! :P

Loving the story! Continue soon! *hugs*

Edited by Xx-Shama-xX - 12 years ago