shanak FF- Discont! Note page 6 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
Very interesting from the start

love nai to attraction a t first sight ti ho gaya
gud one

continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
hey guys ! thank you for a warm welcome on rbo forum! this is my first try on writing on them and your comments are really encouraging. please mind my writing as i cant do detail updates!

and please call me tina.

thank you 😳😃😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
hey tina 😊
welcome dear
nice start of FF...👍🏼
shanak first meeting with Nok-jhok interesting... i Love it!
Please Continue ...looking forward to the next part 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
a very warm welcome to u tina😊
ff is really good and different also
eagerly waiting for ur next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
hey tina welcome here😊 nice start ..liked it ..
Teekhi ladki hain...acha hain 😊
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try to add more similar *nhok jhok* cute bubbly exchanges between shanak if possible 😊
Edited by sshriyaa84 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Part 2

Sunil was his name Sunil Khandelwal. Sunil loved Shaan dearly. He has always let him have his way and still does.Shaan's happiness matters to him the most.


Sunil looked at his son. He found him looking around.

Sunil- whats up son?

shaan- urm nothing dad, just looking around to see how much things changed

Sunil smiled

Sunil- okay come on now lets go. Your mom must be waiting for you

shaan- yeah

They both left from there to go home.

When they reached Madhavi was waiting impatiently at home

sunil- now i am dead for bringing you home late!

sunil shook his head

shaan laughed

shaan- you two still haven't changed have you?

sunil smiled

madhavi- sunil! have dare you bring my son home late! do you even know i haven't checked my make-up for the past 3 hours because i was waiting for you!

Both sunil and shaan looked at each other with straight faces

madhavi- why are you two looking at each other like that!

shaan- mom! leave it nah! anyways now i am here i going to keep me waiting here

madhavi- no beta come on in you don't now how much i missed you !

"haan haan everyone one just misses him , nobody even cares about us ! right dad?"

they all turn around to see akshay standing at the doorway

shaan- hey ! bro how are you?

akshay came and gave shaan a hug.

Akshay- im good, chote tell me how were the studies

Shaan- great bhai all great.

shaan looked around

shaan- by the way wheres our miss india?

everyone laughed

akshay- khusboo has gone to the parlour to get ready for the dinner tonight.

shaan- dinner? why is she getting ready for dinner?

shaank looked at them confused

akshay - actually dad's childhood friend has invited us all over for dinner tonight so i think you should go and get fresh so we can leave

madhavi- oh my god i still need to get ready now!

madhavi left from there leaving the the three of them amused

sunil- beta you call khusboo miss india but i think your mom should be called miss universe!

shaan- dad!

sunil- just kidding come on now get fresh and have some rest.

all of them leave for their respective rooms.

sorry for the short update! will make up for it on the next one! thank you.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
lovely update
i guess he again meets khanak there!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Hi Tina😊
Nice Tina if im not mistaken is this family friend Khanak's family????😉 I guess so😊
I liked the Miss India and Miss Universe part😆 so is Khanak gobnna be Miss World😊
Glad to see ur update so soon😊
waiting for the next😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update Tina
I love this family they all r adorable n really funny
hope this childhood friend is Khanak's family
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
tina nice update
loved sunil saying madavi miss universe and shaan saying khushboo miss india
next update soon

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