if Wishes were horses Part 30,Page 79,3rd November - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello girls!!! promised to post an update today but am in Kolkata now. Real life beckoned,will be here till 27th. Am not sure if i'll get a chance to post from here. if not will post the next update on 28th Jan. But will try and post on before that if i can.

Love you all for being so inspiring.

Love
Sangita


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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok..will wait for it sangi..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sangita I dont know how I missed this It is really good
Lage raho good job 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sangitasengupta

Hello girls!!! promised to post an update today but am in Kolkata now. Real life beckoned,will be here till 27th. Am not sure if i'll get a chance to post from here. if not will post the next update on 28th Jan. But will try and post on before that if i can.

Love you all for being so inspiring.

Love
Sangita



Take your time sangita we r waiting...
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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no probs di we cn wait...bt nxt update should be super long...😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Sangita take your time no probs...we will wait for it😊though its killing to do so😆
take care😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am not regular here and hence I missed it !!
Wow, you writing an FF ...sorry, I couldn't read it.

But I know that it has to be awesome. I am in awe of your level of understanding by the comments on my FFs...small comments, few lines but deep thought !!
Truly appreciate.

Though I don't read many FFs as I have literally dug a grave for myself with 4 FFs which I prefer to call 'running'...😉😊
But I will surely read this one and post comments too !!

Looking forward to reading it by weekend ...Take care !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi everyone!!! am back!!! Would like to thank all of you for the lovely comments and waiting ever so patiently.Posting the next part.Hope you find it worth your while.



Part 4


Dialogues are in purple and the thoughts are red and in brackets



The turbulence of SQ 516 exactly mirrored Shaan's state of mind. Still was unable to come to terms with the fact that he has agreed and to go and meet someone his father had immensely liked at the first sight and expected him to echo the same feeling!!!!


Arghhh!!!! Can't believe I'm actually doing this!!! A perfect case of nuts and bananas Shaan !!!! You are s'' for life!!!!


Wait!!! Can't be as bad!!! Well,I can always disapprove of her,can tell Dad that I don't like her'.she's not my type'.


But what if Dad still doesn't get dissuaded and decides to sacrifice me in the name of holy matrimony? Shaan,better churn your grey matter or you are dead meat!!!!


Screeechhh!!!!! Even the landing didn't provide Shaan with any comfort' The flying experience suddenly manifested itself into Shantanu Goenka''.




Goenka household - Shaan's room



The lime green colour on the walls had freshness written all over. The bed defined aristocracy,couch suave'everything smelt of elegance'..


Shaan reflected all of these which made him the cynosure of all eyes''


The first thing he decided once he reached home was to translate his thoughts into words and make Sunil realize that marriage can wait for a few years'..


Hi Beta!!! how was the flight? Madhavi enquired while enveloping his son in the warmest of hug''a luxury that he missed so much in Singapore'.


Missed you Mom!!! Someone's looking ravishing!!!! How do you manage to look like this always?


Awww!!! Save these for tomorrow evening sweetheart'.someone will relish these'.


What do you mean? Shaan tried to sound nonchalant'..


Sunil's requested Mr.Kejriwal to meet at their place tomorrow evening beta'.hope it's alright with you'.


Mom'..I was thinking of discussing with both of you once'.I mean,don't you think all this is happening too soon? I feel I'm not ready yet'..


Let's find that out tomorrow'..now get some sleep(he wasn't sure he would get any'..)



Kejriwal House


Gunju,you look ethereal in this dress'.how do you manage these never ending yards so professionally?


Baaje katha bolish naa!!!(don't talk rubbish)


No,I'm not kidding.you look like a murderess at her fatal best''.what do you call it, Qatilaana adaa''


Just then Dadi Ma entered Gunjan's room and what she saw flooded her heart with emotions'..one of immense joy and pain blended together and all she could manage was a silent prayer''.


Clad in a fuchsia pink lehenga,the blouse a bare back with almost no sleeves, she looked a million bucks. The minimal thread work in electric blue added extra lustre'.


She decided to wear Supriya's diamond teardrops and left her rich brown cascade loose. Her make up was only gloss and kohl which only enhanced her thin lips and dark eyes'.


The Goenkas had arrived and Shaan portrayed an image of utter discomfort'.


Khanak,why on earth aren't you ready yet?'.. She was attired in a flowing orange and pink dress accentuating a lean figure'..


I look absolutely fine and don't waste your breath on futile things. Get,Set,Go!!! The race has just begun'..


The first look at Gunjan and Shaan realized why Sunil's been going bonkers but what held his stare were a pair of hazel brown eyes that looked inside him'.hair tangled in a bun,wheatish complexion,a perfect athletic figure'here was a girl accompanying Gunjan''


Those eyes met his jet black ones and something changed forever'..


Gunjan and Shaan were asked to spend some time in private'Khanak showed them to Gunjan's room. Though not at all comfortable with the idea of her getting married,a look at him assured Khanak that he's the one for her friend''


Shaan,meet Khanak,a slice of me'..


Khanak' Shantanu


Call me Shaan,that's what everybody does'.


I prefer Shantanu'' Shaaan sounds too pompous'.


The jaw dropping expression on Shaan's face was nothing short of a Kodak moment'..inspite of all efforts,Gunjan's embarrassment couldn't hide itself'.



Amongst the two it was decided that the wedding wasn't on the cards before a year'.so a low key engagement was all that would keep the spirits high of both the families till then''



The engagement was an absolute no-frills affair with only the close members of both the families joining in. The ceremony was in the morning followed by a lavish lunch at a 5 star property'.


A persistent Madhavi succeeded in making Shaan opt for Indian attire. An off white silk kurta and Aligarhi churidaar of the same colour with a black stole completed the look'.


For the first time since their last meeting,Gunjan felt choking herself looking at Shaan.( Am I this fortunate'.let me pinch myself)'..


Shaan insisted on a plain platinum band( those men's diamond rings looked so gross'he thought) and Gunjan's was a dainty diamond flower set in the same metal'..


Shaan's roving eyes spotted her in a corner. Dressed in a purple and black halter neck dress,she kept her accessories to only her pumps. Without even a speck of makeup,she managed to look captivating,he thought''


What's wrong with you? You've just got engaged to perhaps the most beautiful girl in this room and here you are stealing glances at someone else'.that too your fiancee's best friend? all the right ingredients for a potboiler'..get your act together dude,or else you are doomed''



Please comment!!!
Edited by sangitasengupta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow sangi..i'm grinning like an idiot..
shaan came to see gunjan but got his eyes set on khanak..
even during their engagement he is searching for her..
*sigh* they r meant to be..
i still wonder how'll shanak unite..
ur description is awesome as always..
shaan's reaction at khanak's i prefer shantanu..LOL!! absolutely perfect kodak moment..
awaiting the next part..

PS: update was chotu..thought i wont say it this soon but wat to do..no updates today..so bhooki hun..hehehehehe..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wooaw g8 going sangita! Dis is my 1st comment of dis ff.sorry cant like! Ur story based on kolkata awesome. All 4 part indicate hw talented u r as a writter! Shaan watcing some1 else without thinking abt why da main reason 4 came dat house lolz love is blind as i knew bt also bring insanity abt people come to knw. Looking forward to next...

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