if Wishes were horses Part 30,Page 79,3rd November

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SJ6...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#541

babe at work so cantr comment but loved the update.. I think khanak shud started understanding shaan that hey only loves here and I agree they shud get together by body and soul
update quick loool
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Mounika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#542

superb update...penned beautifully...

Hope shaan's outburst may bring change in khanak and accept him...

looking forward for the next update...

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Heer

@heer_85

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Posted: 13 years ago

#543

Lovely update

finally Shaan talked to her and told her to give their relation chance now hope Khanak understand him and feel her love for him

the last word was " if not then " omgeee!!!!!!!! wat he mean by dat

waiting for next update

update soon😊

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niki_rbo

@niki_rbo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#544

hey sangitha..update is cute...i really loved shaans talk...it is beautifull yaar...now i am waiting for this tom boys decision...please update next one little bit early...if u can..no compulsion..but i want to know wat she will say...😊

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Chandana. H

@chandu8881

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Posted: 13 years ago

#545

Superb Sangita😊
Shaan's outburst written very well, i love the language you use, i was actually about to ask you whether Shaan's a human or not😆 i mean he had controlled himself for such a long time, from his engagement, if im not wrong😛
Loved it Sangita!!! Each and every sentence he spoke!!
hope Khanak atleast give a chance to their relationship😊
Waiting for next one eagerly😊

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Maneesha Reddy

@Maneesha_Shanak

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Posted: 13 years ago

#546

each and every word shaan blurted out defines his passion...awesome update...

waiting for the next part...

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snigdhanagar

@snigdhanagar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#547

wonderful update di...so shaan blured out everything m wid shaan...nw dis is d high time khanak should accept him...some where deep shez also liking him bt d guilt in her is nt allowing her to confess...
nw dis is wht she wnted bt shez nt happy...dat means she is attracted to him...
cnt wait wht will khanak do...
nxt part soon...😉

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jaisyjazz

@jaisyjazz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#548

poor shan he is absolutely right he is not forcing on khanak instead giving her another chance or say ke giving their relationship another chance its very difficult to do this

if somebody ask me or say something like this then i would never let him go what r u doing khanak he loves u so much just say yes

waiting for next:)

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sangitasengupta

@sangitasengupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: IF_rida
Penned beautifully
i loved it
each and every sentence was touching reflecting his passion sincerity misery insecuruty
but i guess now she has got a proposal to escape she wanted being human she'll realize thats actually not what she wanted
em lukin fwd to some progress in their relation
and then the unison of mind body and soul
update soon

Thanks Rida !! You are bang on, Khanak always wanted an escape route !! Let's see what she finally does...

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sangitasengupta

@sangitasengupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: aasma1
babe at work so cantr comment but loved the update.. I think khanak shud started understanding shaan that hey only loves here and I agree they shud get together by body and soul
update quick loool
xxx

Thanks Aasma !! Appreciate your effort of commenting while at work !!

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