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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you friends very very much for accepting this Shaan🤗


Part 3


It was the beginning of a new year. Every one hoping that this year will be best for them.😃

Shaan was almost the first student to enter the college (he is really good😆). When he entered no body was there, he looked around. His eyes stopped at the place were for the first time he fought with Khanak. He started smiling. He started walking; he kept remembering all the fights with Khanak.😳

Khanak was almost the last student to enter the college (she is really sweet😆). But she has to attend this class, it is very important, and now she has to get good marks as well. She hurried to her class room, and bumped into a girl and both of them fell down.🤣

The girl: kyon dekhke nahi chal sakti?

Khanak gave no answer because her eyes were fixed into Shaan who was teaching something to a junior student.😳

One of Khanak's friends took her hand and pulled her. "tujhe class nahi karni?" Khanak got up and ran to the class room. The girl who fell down were still on the floor, she was totally irritated. 😡😆

Khanak came to the door but all the students were waiting outside as the earlier class was still going on, she was relieved "uff aj der nahi hui".😊

When the class finished, students of the earlier class were coming out and students of the next class were going in . Khanak was about to get in, but somebody grabbed her bag and pulled her out of the class.😲

Khanak: kya ho raha hai yeh?😡

Suddenly she saw it was Shaan. Her anger vanished into the air.😊

Khanak: tum? 😲tum yahan kya kar raho ho?😊

Shaan: chalo mere saath.

Khanak: kahan?

Shaan: tum chalo to

Khanak: dekho please mujhe chhor do, Tripathi Sir abhi ajayenge aur mere liye yeh class attend karna bohut zaroori hai.😳

Shaan: Tripathi? are unke saare notes mere paas hai, main tumhe parha dunga. ab chalo.

Khanak didn't say anything but pleaded him with her facial expressions. (You can imagine how cute Khanak was looking)😛

Shaan: tumhe kab se parhai mein man a gaya? tum chalo. and he dragged her to the corridor.

Khanak: thik hai, ab batao kahan jana hai

Shaan: wohi slum mein, jahan tum jati ho, mujhe tumahre dosto se dosti karni hai.😛

Khanak: achanak? Tum jao na, tumhe kaun rok ke rakha hai, mujhe class karne do.😡😒

Shaan: main akela nahi ja sakta, mere body guards ke problem hai you know, tum zaroor koi dusra rasta janti ho is college se nikal ne ke liye😉. Abhi mere body guards yeh sochte honge ke main class kar raha hun, aur isi beech hum dono wahan se ghumkar a jayenge.😉 He started smiling(his cute naughty smile).😆

Khanak: tum sachmuch mein jitney achche dikhte ho utne ho nahi😉

Shaan was delighted.😃 To tum chal rahi ho na mere saath?

Khanak: OK

To get out of the college first they had to climb up a tree, then they had to cross the college wall and finally they had to come down with the help of another tree.😆

They took an auto rickshaw to get there.

Khanak called all her friends. They were delighted to see Khanak. Khanak introduced them one by one to Shaan. Shaan said "hello" to them.

Khanak: ye hai Shaan, mera dost, yeh larka apne aap ko bohut achhcha sochta hai, ab tum log decide karo yeh achcha hai ya nahi.😆

Before Shaan could do anything the head of the sweet cute gang just pulled him to the place where they use to play street games.😛

Bholu (the head): chalo khelo hamare saath. Piku, Mahu, Jhupi ready ho jao.😎

They started playing a game which Shaan never played; even he never heard the name. 😆

He tried a lot but couldn't play it. All the kids started laughing. Shaan was a bit embarrassed but hid it and he laughed even more than the others.😆

He asked the kids to teach him the game. Shaan started learning the game, and he started improving. 😊

Khanak just kept watching, she felt that Shaan is too cute.😛 She thought "iski burai karoo to kaise? Lagta hi nahi ke aj hi yeh in bachchose pehlibar mil raha hai."😊

Khanak: are dosto, dekha tum sab, is Shaan ek chhotasa game bhi nahi khel sakta

The kids: Ha di, yeh to ekdam buddhu hai🤣 (Burthal in RBO language😆)

And they all started laughing again.🤣

Shaan: are dosto ab Khanak ki bari. Yeh bhi apne aap ko bohot achchi sochti hai, tum log bata do key eh kitni buri hai😆

The kids started telling him about their Khanak Didi. They started praising her in their own cute way. For example:

"Di bilkul bhi buri nahi hai, tumhe pata hai ekbar barish ki time mein humlog jab kagaz ki nao lekar khel rahe the, mera nao dub gaya, Di ne usi waqt mujhe dusra banadi", 😊

"Di ne ekbar mujhe drain se ek machhli pakarke gift kii thi" 😊

"Di ko bhi meri tarah golgappe ache lagte hai"😊

"Di bhi meri tarah bhooton se darti hai" etc. 😆

Shaan asked the question intentionally, he knew that the kids will always tell good things about Khanak.😉😳😃

Khanak was totally surprised, she loved to play with the kids but she never knew that she brought such sweet happiness to their lives. She never knew that the kids love her so much.😃

Khanak felt out of the world.😃 She was too happy. Shaan was even happier than Khanak. They kept looking at each other. They just can't stop smiling.😳😃

Suddenly one of the kids noticed Shaan's mobile. He asked: Shaan bhaiya, apke mobile mein gana bajta hai kya?

Shaan: ha kyun nahi? Sunoge tumlog?

He opened the song "bum bum bole masti mein dole"from the movie Tare Zameen Par.

All the kids started dancing to the tune, Shaan and Khanak also joined them.😃

But there was one problem, it was a open place so the volume was really low, and as the kids were shouting as well, they were not able to hear the song. So soon they stopped dancing.😒

But a very cute thing happened. There was wedding of a person in that area and the baratis were ready to leave for the wedding, so the bandwalas started playing music.😃

It was a wonderful gift for the kids and Shanak, and they started dancing again.😃

After ten minutes Shaan and Khanak had to leave as they were getting late. They waved good bye to the kids. The kids asked Shaan to come again. They want him to learn all the games they know.😆

Shaan and Khanak were coming back to the college by auto rickshaw. They were not talking. Both of them were so happy that they couldn't think what they could say. They kept exchanging glances, and when their eyes met they started smiling again.😳😃


After some time:


Khanak: you too love kids? mujhe nahi pata tha😊


Shaan: kyun, don't you know? mujhe laga tum janti ho


Khanak: kyun?


Shaan thought "because I like you for your kid like actions" but he said "nahi, waise hi"

Shaan: ek gana sunogi? Aj mujhe bohot yaad a raha hai yeh gana.

He put one part of the mobile head phone into Khanak's ear and the other part in his ear and opened the song. It was the song "Tare Zameen Par"

Taare Zameen Par - Title Song


"Dekho inhein yeh hai onss ki boodein
Patto ki goodh mein aasamaan se khude
Angdai le phir karwat badal kar
Nazuk se moti hasde phishal kar
Kho na jayee yeh
Taare Zameen par"


The song kept playing. As the song ended, there were tears in Khanak's eyes.

Shaan gave her a cute side hug😃

Khanak: Shaan, main sirf khelti hun un bachcho se, I don't do anything for them. I don't help them with good clothes, good food, I don't tell them to be literate. I don't do anything good for them.😭

Shaan: you know something, yeh kapde dena, khana dena, inlogoko parhai lokhai sikhana, in sab ke liye bohot sare log hai is dunia mein, lekin jo tum karti ho bohot kam log karta hai.

tum unlogo ki achcha insaan banati ho, intentionally nahi lekin tum in bachchoki innocence ko barkarar rakhne mein help karti ho. 😊

You know these slum kids become matured very fast, they lose their innocence very fast. Aur yahi baat in bachchoki life mein se khushiya chhin leti hai.

Aur tum rok rahi ho in bachchoko ko matured banne se. 😃

I don't know whether tum samajh rahi ho ke main kya bolna chahta hun.


Khanak understood what he was telling. She started smiling again.😃

Edited by payalmehra - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
really cute part:)
khanak bunk lecture only for shaan wow!
They both r kids yaar...
I like game which they r playing...aur hamare burthal ko kuch bhi nahi aata.
Kids r so sweet
they told all thing to shaan about the khanak...
And tare zamin par film song that one also my fev...
And side hug, ya this one also cute.
Now Shaan know few thing about the khanak.
She like kids
she like golgappe
khanak ko boottose dar lagata hai.
This plus point to shaan,go near the khanak...
nice update
please update soon next part
good going...
Waiting for shaan will teach khanak(khanak miss lecture).
:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Aww that was really cute Payal, :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Lovely update

loved how they both enjoyed their

how the kids were telling him abt khanak was super cute

when he was explaining to her how she's helping the kids out was superb adorable

em lukin fwd to when he'll started helping khanak with studies

luving how they are getting along and comfortable wid each other

update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
hai payal,
so sweet..shaan made khanak bunk the class saying he'll help her n went to spend time with the slum kids..which is a 1st for shaan..hope his bodyguards didnt start searching for him already..
the way both made the kids happy n shaan saying her wat a gr8 thing she is doing..so nice..
do continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
wow very well written...waiting forward 4 further story!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Payal that was really cute🤗more than her bunking lecture for him,i liked the way he coaxed her to bunk😆awww these make a really cute couple and great friends😉...khanak is really special,it is a gift to be able to mingle with all kinds of people😃and im glad Shaan is also following that route😃...i pity him ,its so annoying to have bodygaurds and people to wait on you,its seriously curbs one's freedom😡...im looking forward to them helping each other out in what they wanna achieve😃...nice update👍🏼waiting for the next one😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
wowww i loved deir cute nok jok...😉 suddenly khanak is serious wid her studies...😆
both buked d class wow...n deir interaction wid slum kids was superb...😊
superb update...n continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
lovely update Payal
they bunked the class 😉
wow!! they were playing with the kids...so cute😊
loved the part when they all danced to the music played by the bandwala

loved the part when he was telling her that what a wonderful job she is doing by helping the slum kids...so cute 😍
waiting for the next part😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
Kab update hoga yeh ff
pls update

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