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Bona

@bones88

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

OMGGG Anishaaa..this is my reaction after reading ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️damn it I am still blushinggg.. all ur fault😛 just joking.. I am speechless.. u made relive shanak moments... all the lifts, sexcuse🤣 dhat😍.. shanak lifts... I am damn emotional now😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 u seriously need to continue... truly a beautiful gift ❤️

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snigdhanagar

@snigdhanagar

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

omg...wow...🤗
dnt hav words to describe dis os...☺️☺️
awee dey r sooo cute...😉 n shaan hayeee😳
speechless yar...u made my day ...😍😍
nw m only thinking abt shanak 😍
thnk u so muchhh...bueatifully written...👏👏👏
mising dem😭😭😭...

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

OMG OMG OMG

its awesome blossom👏👏

it was super duper cute... i was ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ like this all the time

u've made my day ... a perfect treat for the weekend

em in luv with them all over again ... em luvin them even more😍

i must say it was worth the wait😉

i loved it🤗

counting the lift part stole the lime light🥳

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

hei ani,
wat to say??oh girl u simply nailed it..itna lambha update..i never expected this long one..i thought may be u have posted in 2 parts seeing part A 1st..but u have posted it in 5 parts..awesome to the core..
the way khanak made shaan take her to bathroom to wash the bibs..really u have portrayed shaan to have too much of patience..actually i was running out of patience with her antics..LOL!! but loved it..
then shaan bringing her to the sofa for her to prepare for her mock exam..loved it..if she answers right a kiss from him n for wrong answer she kiss him but the other should not respond to the kiss..i wonder how did u get this in ur mind ani..lovely..the way he asked so u do want to kiss me when she said i would give right answers to all..superb..shaan at his best..loved it that he gave full support in her studies..finally study session got over..
then she checking herself in the mirror forgetting the fact that darling hubby is in the room..she caressing her stretch marks n feeling that it is permanent one n shaan being his naughty self..wat an idea sirji??by getting pregnant again there wont be any marks..LOL!!!really really enjoyed it..when finally he took her to bed lo aise kaise chaltha bina phone bajaye..samreen..i was like u girl dont u get any other time..
poor shaan..n khanak is too enthusiastic to talk with her..even though shaan didnt let her speak couldnt blame him for doing like that..as soon as she realised that its late to call she should have cut the call n decently should have given privacy to them..with the kids they get minimum time na..
loved their little game..1st i didnt get the game actually..read it again to know wat they were playing..so nice..loved their rule in bed..no clothes to his clothes only..waise i was laughing like anything when he said i should undress u before lifting u when she asked him to say the dress colour..khanak is impossible..
then their discussion abt anay n sia..shaan was so sweet u know..when he said he didnt want to see either of them alone..always he wants both of them to be together..the time when he takes anay for haircut r when khanak brings one of them when they cry he just hates it..i so love him..
loved it ani..felt nostalgic with dhat..sexuse me..n all the lifts mentioned..u did justice to this ani..worth the wait..
a big tight hug for giving this wonderful OS ani..
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
mmmuuuaaahhh..loved each n everything u wrote..the way both remembered the incidents n everything..i tried my best with the comments ani..if i disappointed u i'm sorry..
keep writing more ani..as simi,mani used to say writing is their stress buster..do that in that sense..thereby tum bhi khush hum bhi khush..

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Krithika

@k.krithika

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Hi Anisha 😃
Awesome parts i am just lost in Shanak's world 😍 ☺️
I still have one more part to read but i have to log off for the day
U are a great writer loved every line u have written 👏
Will complete reading and post in detail tomorrow
Thanks a lot for the awesome mindblowing parts going to sleep now dreaming about our Shanak and remembering everything i read today in ur OS its pure bliss brilliant writing ⭐️
Love u always 🤗

Edited by k.krithika - 13 years ago

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foreverRBO

@foreverRBO

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

i dnt knw wat 2 say... d feeling s jst sooo overwhelming...😳

a big thank you...😃

is all i cn think at d moment..

reliving shanak wid ur view is a bliss!!!

all d gestures d teasing d fun d romance.. .u jst nailed it.. 😃

n cherrry on d cake being d update ws superrr long 👏

kudos 2 ur patience n efforts.. ⭐️

luv,

nimisha

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Sharon

@sharon18

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Anishahh🤗🤗u made my weekend😃...was that an OS?????????no way i dont think so,I would call it a superb one day long story👏👏wow...Shanak magic was beautifully woven in this update😃and the way the bonding between the parents and the children was written was brilliant👏lucky twins,they have such awesome parents😍...What i liked the most was the phone convo,it was really hilarious,Shaan is madly desperate for his khanak😃...awww I loved it😍the question-answer round was awesome👍🏼...thnx so much for this ODLS🤗

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

OMG Aniii ...

I am re-reading it ... Its Sooo Peaceful ... So Blissful... So Beautiful ...
GoD. . I will Breakdown :'(

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Nisha

@ABlank90

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Uff uff uff...agar CVs itni hotness RBO mein daaltey tou I don't think this forum would've survived. Hum log tou blush hi kartey reh jaatey! Seriously woman...this is brilliant stuff. Each and every movement defined so clearly. Though Khanak ki childish harkatoun ne romance ko thora drag kiya but sweet Shaan played along. Damn these two. Mar kar hi chorein ge! 😳

All I can say is that you deserve 100 👏 for this.

I thought you'd have forgotten about it but since you remember very much tou I'll be looking forward to the next parts. Please please do continue this. You're such an amazing writer!

Best wishes,

Nisha

😊

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mahamsajjad

@mahamsajjad

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

WOW. You write sooo well! Thanks for such a lengthy and beautiful OS. 😃 I was blushing the whole time ☺️ I love how Shaan is getting even more romantic now, and their little mock test was sooo cute 😍 The game was also very sweet 😍 Thank you sooo much for bringing back Shanak like this, a big hug to you! 🤗 I really miss them 😭 I wish this OS would have become the actual episodes of RBO and that it would have never ended. Sigh. I guess that's why we have writers like you who are keeping them alive in these wonderful OS' and FF's. 😊 Keep up the great work, and please continue writing such beautiful things! 😃

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