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Posted: 13 years ago
I love CASA's Shaan. I love CASA's Khanak. CASA's Ritu, Daadi, Sunil Khandelwaal, ... even Pradyun. Everyone & Everything about Aditee's CASA. I m obsessed with this tale .

No cliched lines, no over the top situational drama, or out of the world imaginary lines & scenarios.

All the emotions, feelings, & people are realistic and relatable to our normal life.

You are one piece of amazingly talented writer Aditee.

I hoope, wish, & pray that you get your due recognition in time.

Also one more thing; others and may be you might also hate me for saying this, but I just hope that you will move it to a different portal. If wordpress is a hassle, then any other site besides here sometime in the future one day. (fingers crossed)

Anyways... The last updates, like all the rest, was fantastic.
Love Shaan's straightforward interrogation. To me it makes him more appealing. He doesn't talk around the bush, straight to the point, BANG!
Both of them miss each other like crazy and want to spend time together, but neither will come forward and admit it or say it to the other. It kind of makes the tale more interesting, as for if they declared their feelings to one another and everything gets good & peaceful, then the zest of Shanak will be missing.

Ok, shall blabber more later. Waiting for the nightly dose of update. Will wait patiently. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 211 A
Vasant Vihar
27th Oct 2012
Saturday
11:20 AM
She showers for as long as she can, smiling and singing offkey, she wonders what she should wear, wonders where he is going to take her. "I shud suggest" "May be not" "I shouldnt make it apparent" "He shouldnt find out how eager I am to be with him"
She wears a Marc Jacobs dot print flared skirt in coffee color and a offwhite/creamish ruffled blouse with almost sleeveless/cap sleeves.
Ties her hair in a long silk pony tail with a coffee color scarf... and wears tan thong sandals with beadwork wrapping around her ankles
She spends inordinate amounts of time in her pooja, he is on the phone watches her go back and forth between the pooja ante room and the kitchen
Jamuna makes him more coffee and she gets more tea.
S: How long do you think you will be (complains)
K: Dont know (smiles smugly as she turns into her room)
There is unexplainable pleasure in making him wait for her
Watch him be impatient, and irked by her morning rituals
She smiles and winks at her mirror
He is on the phone again with Bhayya
Akshay wants to know how the "making out while pretending to be room mates" is going
He laughs out loud, "Making out is heavenly" he says smugly " Cant stand the separate beds
Akshay is shocked, mocks him about not being able to do a "touch down" on that one
S: She fights too much
A: SHE? Fights too much
S:Oh! well, I contribute some
A: You are an egotistical b----
S:Hey hey hey, I am the baby brother...
A:Baby my a--
S: How s the baby
A:Great... working on number two
S:Youve got to be kiddin me!
A (laughing) I am
S: Howz Mom?
A:Good, on her way to Goa I think
S:Really? Hmmm
A: Some NGO camp
S: Say hi to Bhabhi
A: Shez giving the lil guy a bath
S:Any plans for Delhi?
A:Dad and I leave for Sao Paolo in a week, may be then?
S: Cool! I didnt get to eat any chips BTW, my wife ate them all
A:Wife huh?
S:Yep!
They laugh and end the call
His hands play with the spiral note pad laying on the table by the couch. He picks it up when he notices her writing
There are three pages of notes, some amounts struck off some in bold, over written
Looked like his wife was in the "red"
It made his blood boil, he read and re-read the notes, trying to follow the chronology of dates, but it wasnt easy
He didnt know if he should admire her resolve to be this"savior" for her family or be mad at her for trying to hide it all from him.
She had paid him rent, with a smile, the devil in him egged him on to increase the amount next month
He didnt want to see her lose
He wanted to be everything for her
He wanted her to depend on him as much as she depended on herself
she wasnt embarrassed by the state of economic affairs in her own family.
Not at all!
She loved them as passionately as she made love to him...
He gently placed the spiral note back back he took it from
He knew she would come back and tear off those pages at some point
She walked by to the kitchen
S:Khanak chalo
Smiling she responded with "Kahan"
"Are you kidding me?" he said exasperated
K:Bus 10 min aur?
S:Bring me ur PC in the meanwhile
K:I have to password protect my files first
S: Is the password u are think of, by any chance "Shantanu?"
Her face coats with warm color "Umm... ummm" she lies "I dont use that name" (her current NT password)
S: Do you have any use for the man? (soft)
K: To replace the high light bulbs
He laughs at her quick wit
S:And?
K: Kill cockroaches
S:Aur?
K: Taste test spicy looking food?
She is leaning on the wall near the dining table, she is thoughtful and lost
He walks up to her
She pushes his hair back from his forehead, as he checks her out... his bare feet (for a change) begin their art project on her ankles...
S:Bus itna hi
K: Haan... if I have to wipe off smudged lipstick, I need his tee
K: Fix the fuse
K: Trouble shoot my PC
His hands on either side of her head
S: What about when you ache (for me)?😳
K: Oh! I just go to a spa when my body aches😉
She smiles slowly...
Edited by aditee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow ... inki baatein!

When she speaks he must be loving it na ... and I'm sure she is happy to talk to him. He is the only other person who she talks to so much after Ritu ... isn't it ...

I love this Shanak ... Thanks Adi, for making them the way they are!

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 13 years ago
CASA is like the music of A R Rahman. the more you listen to it , the more it grows on you.every time you read a CASA update you find something new in it...any number of time i read it there is bound to be some nuances that i find out when i read it the next time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Kaise Batayeein Kyoon Tujhkoo Chaahee ... Yaaraa Bataaanaa Paaye !
Tu Jaane Naaa !!!!
THEY are Phenomenal ... Their convos are TO DIE FOR !!!!!
Eeekkks ...
Dude .. when is the Paperback coming ... I want the special edition of this oneee !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yayyy... An update, and that too a long one. I m off to read it.
I m emotionally down today for some reason, but I m delighted to see the update and I know reading it will make me feel better and will be able to go to sleep little stress free. Thanks Aditee :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!! Khanak is scared that he will check her files in the laptop... She should be worried about the honeymoon pics she has on the screen saver 😉
Loved Akki and Shaan's convo... Finally he admits to somebody, how badly he wants to make out with his wife... I loved it when he said "my wife ate em all" also when she said "I need to check with my husband" when he asked her out...

It is natural for him to feel irked when he realizes that she does not share her financial affairs with him... But we all love Khanak for her self respect and the love she has for her family...
There are many daughters who just forget where they came from, once they get married to a rich, affluent family... Our Khanak is one of a kind, career oriented, hardworking, independent and she doesn't forget her middle class values...,
For a moment Shaan felt like increasing her rent just to corner her ... Very bad Shaan... 😭
But as you say, he is absolutely imperfect and we love him with all his imperfections ...😉

Loved the hubby wifey convo... Your writing is what makes our leads so interesting and irresistible ... Just can't live without them...
Way to Go Aditi...
Edited by Ujjwala - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great updates Aditee. Too good. Loved the pink line. I am sure Shaan will help her with aches😆 to show he can do a better job than the SPA,
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vineeta2108

CASA is like the music of A R Rahman. the more you listen to it , the more it grows on you.every time you read a CASA update you find something new in it...any number of time i read it there is bound to be some nuances that i find out when i read it the next time.

Welcome to the REAL WORLD of CASA !!!!
😆 😆 😆
Yahaaan Aapko sab log Drooling .. Fainting ... Swoooning ... Dreaaming ... Dying state main milenge !!!!! 😳
Aditeee is the ROCKSTAR 😳 !
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Posted: 13 years ago

shalini,right?see i know you. aditee is the ROCKSTAR, no DOUBT about it, and CASA is intoxicating. pehle mujhe post karna aata hi nahi tha otherwise i would have done this earlier.

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