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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Aditee,
I feel u haven't accepted my request. Please accept it. I know it is tiresome for u to accept all the request. For me Life without CASA i boring. plz plz accept it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aditee
I understand there is some problem in accepting requests if u can please accept our requests or update here in IF
I feel really bad to trouble u

Sorry will not pester u anymore

Missing u and Casa very badly 😭 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys
I am struggling
I feel terrible abt not posting here
I will post tonite's part here
What the heck!
Its fictional love story
The world wont come to an end if I post it here
If somebody is dishonest enough to plagarize it and make millions out of it
They will face the consequences sooner or later
Ive never had to steal anything in life to be successful
I have nothing to fear, all of it is mine...
My creativity is all ORIGINAL and MY VERY OWN😃😃😃
Just like the date and time and place stamps and the blue and pink lines and the humor and the intensity and the realism cannot be duplicated😃
Until I have my brain and ability to express myself its all peachy!
👏👏
I can churn out 100 original tales
Until I figure this blog thing out I will post here
Edited by aditee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 203-Kanjak-Ashtami
Give me 20 minutes"

"Take 15"

"I wont shave then"(rubs his jaw)

"Then stay in ur room"

"Women!" he rolls his eyes in frustration

"There is only one" she says softly (not plural)

He pauses on his way to the bathroom turns around and repeats "Yep only one!"

While he is getting ready, the guard's wife and two kids show up. She offers tea to the women has half a cup herself

Khanak starts readying for the process of the pooja itself. She asks for the kids names. She didnt know how many were going to show up or how old they are she didnt buy anything specific, she planned to give them Rs.100 or Rs.150 each with the food.

Her husband appears dressed in his work clothes a tan dockers and a marroon and yellow check shirt with shoulder straps, he is already wearing socks!!

He enters the ante room looking gorgeous, as he usually does, wet hair swept back neatly, shaved and cologned''

He is there in 19 minutes actually!

Khanak: Socks kyon pehna?

Shaan: For shoes?

Khanak gives him a sarcastic smile

Shaan: I dont like being bare feet Khanak, you know'.

She turns to look at him while arranging the flowers'..

Khanak: Hmmm

Shaan: Should I go get them? I have a 9 clock Khanak!

Khanak glares'' "Phir aap jajaiye" (sulking)

He stands there, hands in pockets

She wants to light a new diya the match box wont strike, she tries a couple times he extends his hand with a "Mujhe do"

"Nahi"

He grabs it from her lights it gently, adjusts the wick and looks at her

"Thanks nahi bologi"

"Nahi"

She lights incense sticks and makes place settings

Tells him what needs to be done, "I have watched Dad do it"

"You were not in town last year, when we were to(gether?)"

"You remember?"

"Barely" (she says husikly)

"But you do!

"Can I go get them? he asks

She nods silently

She goes to the kitchen to get the offerings, he goes to get the kids, tries to talk to them as they walk in. The Moms look at the couple curiously, as Jamuna may have hinted something

"Can I have coffee?" he asks as they are walking back into the ante room

"No! Not yet" (firm)

"You had your chai"

She turns around startled "How do you know?"

He picks up her almost cold tea cup and downs it "This is how"

The women exchange meaningful looks and hide smiles

"A rose scented tea cup"!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

Hey guys

I am struggling
I feel terrible abt not posting here
I will post tonite's part here
What the heck!
Its fictional love story
The world wont come to an end if I post it here
If somebody is dishonest enough to plagarize it and make millions out of it
They will face the consequences sooner or later
My creativity is all ORIGINAL and MY VERY OWN😃😃😃
Until I have my brain and ability to express myself its all peachy!👏👏
Until I figure this blog thing out I will post here

Hey Adi...
what happen...you seem very dejected...
Still waiting to accept my request ID : casaadditct1
Missing CASA like hell...please update yesterday's part and today's part also here... don't want to miss sigle word from CASA.
Lots of Luv and best wishes
Bhavana
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Casa Addict 1
I am doing really well
Not at all dejected
Actually very busy becoz of Navaratri and a half dozen haldi kum kum invites and hosting my own tomm nite (a Tamil tradition)
May not post tomm nite
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Aditee,
Happy navaratri.
Thankyou very much for continuing to post here till the blog issues are sorted out. It feels so good to read CASA after 2 days😃. Loved the last part. Shaan is too smart for Khanak 😆.
Edited by kiranc - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

Hey Casa Addict 1

I am doing really well
Not at all dejected
Actually very busy becoz of Navaratri and a half dozen haldi kum kum invites and hosting my own tomm nite (a Tamil tradition)
May not post tomm nite

Hey Aditee...
Where is earlier part which you have posted at Blog.. (this is too much from my side na... . please don't mine..)😉
Luv
Bhavana
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you so much aditee for posting here. Thanks a lot. I cant explain how happy i am after reading your update here. Take your time to solve problem with ur blog. Till then please update it here. PLEASE. 😊😊
HAPPY NAVRATHRI
Edited by neethurose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
adi thanks for posting it here..
but some continuity is lacking..
did u post any part before this in the blog??
coz last update in IF had shaan entering the ante room..
somewhere something is missing..

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