~Trespassers Prohibited 2 ~ Update 13,14: page 134

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Trespassers Prohibited
Season # 2




Dear Friends,
Thanks for the awesome response to my only completed FF - Trespassers Prohibited !!
I am at loss of words when I think about the number of friends I made due to this FF
the number of pm's I received,
the number of people who reached out to me through various ways...
I am still in awe !!!!
a lot were depressed when it ended as some were attached to it like I was,
a lot have been after me for continuing this tale of Shanak in my own humble attempt !!

Out of these,
a few of cutie pies pm me almost daily for the second part of TresPro...
I had promised Pranjal that I will do it soon and was simply delaying out of laziness !!
So, what better day than her birthday !!!

Pranjal, This is a Birthday gift for you !!!!
and everyone else who I am forgetting--
You all can thank Pranjal !!!
I had been planning since quite some time but thought of posting it today !!!
Though Pranjal was elementary in driving me to write it...
Suchi, Disha, DeepaliS, Jyothi, Ramani, Jess, Nishi, Risha, Sumedha were no less !!
I won't call it pestering...it was actually flattering !!!
love you all
will write till people are there to read it !!!

Index --

Next post -- Gist of story of TresPro 1 for all those who did not read it !!
Prologue and Part 1 -- Page 1 !!
Part 2 -- Page 10
Part 3 - Page 13
Part 4 -- Page 26
Part 5 -- Page 63
Part 6 -- Page 70
Part 7 -- Page 79
Part 8 -- Page 96
Part 9 -- Page 123
Part 10 -- Page 125
Part 11 -- Page 127
Part 12 -- Page 129
Parts 13 -16 -- www.trespassersprohibitedseason2.blogspot.com
VM --
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Trespassers Prohibited
Season # 1

Gist of the story



Shantanu is a tough boss who heads the team in the regional division of a known health care chain !! He is joined by Khanak who believes in irritating and troubling him. Shantanu does not pay much attention to her and she continues to irritate him by her silly antics.

She makes him talk to her as they had been childhood friends who drifted apart due to awkwardness in teenage and later due to some unknown reasons.
Khanak admits having a crush on him since teenage and pesters him to tell her the reason of him being away from her.
He doesn't tell her the reason initially as he is uncomfortable but cannot hide that he loves her as much as she loves him !!

They keep fighting and arguing...meeting and dating while they are in Mumbai due to their jobs.
Shantanu feels that he should not hide the truth from her and tells Khanak that his own mom was responsible for the accident which incapacitated her brother Jai and rendered him confined to the wheel chair. He tells her how he felt guilty and couldn not face her family so he drifted apart...

Khanak is shattered for a while but when she realises that even Shantanu faced the past 6 years in isolation, in deep depression and guilt as Jai is not only her brother but also Shantanu's best buddy... and how he lived a life of near exile, even away from his family...she melts and forgives him,...
but she knows that the path is difficult and her family might not forgive him...

How the two were in love since past 6 years and stayed together even after the hardest of times hit their ship of mutual trust and togetherness...still they survived every blow, every tough time, every harsh storm and emerged winners is the crux of season 1

Carrying forward this tale of Shanak -- I start season 2 with a four month leap after season 1 ended !!!

Edited by -Manita- - 14 years ago
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Starting with a small part !! Promise to write long long long parts...longer than what I used to post !!!

Ramani -- I promised an epilogue to you...so this Prologue for next season is for you !!!
I am using a beautiful siggy by ever so talented Ramani !!!

Trespassers Prohibited # 2

Prologue and Part 1.



Prologue

It has been almost 4 months since the dark grey clouds of adversity cleared from over the relationship that Shantanu and Khanak had preserved religiously since past eight years.

All confusions were cleared……….. their parents had agreed for their wedding and the best part was that their main concern about Jai had been addressed. He was getting married too…… to Dr. Ragini…………who was not only his doctor but also his first best friend now……. very comfortably she had nudged Shantanu and Khanak a step down from their position of first best friends of Jai………….

And they did not mind at all……………. They were too happy for both of them…..

Jai wanted to get married only when he was able to walk a little……………no matter how less !!

Shantanu and Khanak wanted to get married only after Jai and Akshay got married.

Madhavi took it as a mission to search for a pretty and eligible bride for Akshay as she wanted to see Shantanu and Khanak get married as soon as possible.

Shantanu and Khanak spent a beautiful time together in past four months…….. they dated …….. they went for movies……..shopping…….. dinners…….. and theatre.

As always………they talked for hours, amusing everyone else who wondered what they talked for so long, days together and could see no one else when they were around each other !!!

As always……..they fought and made up……….kissed and fought again !!

None of their fights lasted more than a few hours…………none of them carried the burden of malice towards the other !!

As always…………they teased each other……..made fun of their weaknesses…….. apologized and were back to square one…………as always !!!

Savita arranged for get togethers and all of them usually sat together till late night and chatted away to glory.

Shantanu had joined Khandelwal Group as the Country Head – Operations and was doing absolutely well. He had managed to earn the same respect from the board of Directors and staff and employees as he had in The Graceful You group.

Khanak wanted to join him too but Savita refused to let go of her. She reasoned that with two weddings lined up in a few months time……….She had loads of work pending to be done ……….. from shopping to household chores and as Jai could not accompany her, she was dependent on Khanak for everything. Moreover she wanted to pamper her little girl before she left for her future home.

She asked Khanak to join Shantanu after they got married. Shantanu and Khanak were reluctant initially but when she said that they were allowed to meet after and beyond the office everyday………..they gave in.

The late night last phone call had become almost a ritual and Shaan never failed to call her even when he was very busy.

Jai and Ragini spent a lot of time together too……

Last four months flew away in a quick snap…………..

Hard times pass with difficulty !!...Good times have wings !!!

……………………………………………………………………

Part 1.

It was a beautiful Monday and as usual Shantanu was in his office before time.

He was given the most swanky cabin with latest gadgets and stylish furniture.

Sunil Khandelwal was very particular when it came to providing the best for his sons. Both Akshay and Shaan had perfect cabins, phones, laptops and even the best of furniture selected by Sunil himself.

Akshay was cool about it all though Shaan loved to take his own decisions. But when it came to office and work environment, he let Sunil take his initiative as it made him feel happy that he was making his sons comfortable.

Sunil loved it when Shaan and Akshay smiled and felt comfortable…………he took pride in the fact that his two kids were now grown ups and were very efficient in matters regarding business. He had always seen a dream of watching his business…….. that he had set up with years of hard work………grow and flourish with his sons.

Shaan reached his cabin, placed his laptop and the files on the table and picked up the phone to call her……

"Hey sweetheart !!"

"You are late……" she woke up and sat on the bed still sleepy.

He simply loved her sleepy voice and imagined her straightening herself…….with her crumpled dress and ruffled hair……..eyes half –closed. She made a lovable picture in his mind when he closed his eyes thinking of her.

"No, I reached office on time……." he spoke trying to irritate her.

"Very funny….."

"I know I am…………."

"Tch……..Tch……."

"Meet me in the evening."

"Not today…….."

"Why?" he twitched his lips in frustration.

"We are going to the jewellers' today !!"

"Jewellers?? Who wears heavy jewellery these days ? Why waste money??"

"Err………..you are right……….But still I have to go……….Ma wants to buy a lot of jewellery for me and Ragini."

"How's Jai?"

"He's fine………….why don't you call yourself?"

"I will…………in the mean time, give him a message………..if you are not meeting me……then, I'll be coming to meet him in the evening………"

"No…………you are not coming to my home……….go to your home and prepare nicely for the wedding!!"

"What do I do? My mom is not shopping for anything………"he laughed.

"Shaan, I am just not going to sit with you for the wedding if you don't turn up well dressed….." she warned him.

"And what does that well dressed mean?"his naughty eyebrows were raised.

"A nice sherwaani……….preferably a designer one, since you can afford…….. hair well cut and clean shaven look….."

"Oh No !! So you mean, this 'hawt' stubble won't do?" he teased her.

"Shaaa-aaan !!" she spoke frustrated, "Does anyone come to his wedding in a stubble? And no it won't do!!"

"What about Jeans and T-Shirt?" He chuckled.

"Eeekksss!!! I am so not going to marry you if you land up like a angry young man straight out of a movie………"

He laughed out loudly, "And I thought that you love films and filmy stuff……"

"I am just not laughing…………I am serious."

He laughed more with her tone and said, "I think you too dump this wedding attire, trousseau and jewellery………lets get married in a simple way………"

"What is that?" she asked slowly, indulging him.

"Just the two of us…………" he spoke with a flirtatious bent to his tone.

She blushed looking at her fingers and one of it adorning the ring that he gave her. She didn't speak anything…..

He continued, "You in a simple saree and me in denim jeans and Polo Tee……."

She was back to present, out of her dream world, "No……….no Shaan. I love the wedding our parents are arranging for us…………it feels so special."

"What is so special about it? So much of hungama, so much of nuisance, crowd of relatives, heavy attires, intolerable music and nonstop nonsense for 4-5 days. So much of wastage, of money, of food, of electricity, basically a show business……….I would love to get married in a temple with just your family and mine………"

"Shaan………..I want to explain it to you that………."

"That?" he questioned in a calm tone.

"Nothing………." She left a small breath.

"Tell me………." He asked softly.

"Later………………you have just reached the office and you should be working right now…"

"Alright………but do complete it……….before the wedding."

"Sure…...maybe tomorrow..." She smiled, knowing very well that there was no point arguing with him.

"Okay, ask Ma – Can Shaan come to the jewellers?"

"What !! No………….I am not going to ask that?"

"Why ?"

"Shaan, this is so not done…………. There are still 2 months to go……… you just cannot hang around with me everywhere."

"But why?"

"It doesn't look nice……………what will Ma think?"

"She knows me…………..more than you, okay?"

"Be it…………..I am not asking anything and we are not meeting today."

He made a disgusted sound, "Go and shop for whatever jewellery you feel like……… as if I am going to let you wear it…….."

"Bye !!"

"Think again…………….I can help choose nice, easily removable designs……."

He teased her again knowing that she will blush hard.

"Sheeeshh !!!! Keep quiet………..put your dirty mind to rest………or it won't let you work."

"Fine then…………….I am going for a business meet tomorrow……..it is in Bangalore."

"When will you come?"

"By tomorrow evening…………it is a day – conference. I'll be going in the morning and will come back by the late evening."

"Have dinner with me then?"

"Wow !! what an invite !! I'm honoured………….so Ma'm, Let's meet at dinner tomorrow. I'll pick you up after I come back from Bangalore."

"No, just let me know the flight details. I'll pick you up at the IGI Airport."

"Perfectt !!!"

………………………………………………………………..


Edited by -Manita- - 14 years ago
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Saachi...😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲
Oh God! Somebody Pinch Me! I Gotta Be Dreamin 😍

I am so so happy Manita😃

Thank you so much!


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OMG!!!OMG!!!OMG!!!OMG!!!OMG!!!
R u serious Mani di...
I cant believe its going to be happen...😉 😉 😉
I m dancing...
LOVE U SOOO MUCH DI... MUUUAAAHHH🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
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Happy ! Happy ! Happy! Happy! Happy !Happy!

Very Happy!

Thanks a ton Maani !!!!!

~Cheers,
Dish
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Omg 😲
its 8 wonder for me in the world 😛

do u know i had seriously missing tresspro today a lot and when i was in market while driving , i actually thought that what could be d sad part from which u will start tp2 but seriously should i say it intuition or what but i did actually 😛

i know its silly but tresspro 2 😳 i will b mad
eekksss so excited ' a bear hug to u di "muahh"

love u
suchi
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Oh god di... R u serious?? Pinch me...
I just don't belive my luck.. U started trespro 2... U r amazing di...
U kept ur promise...
Love u Di...best news for 2day...
Nd pranjal a special thank to u.. Ur b'day seems to be very lucky for us to hav trespro back..
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Omg omg omg omg...!!!

*rubs eyes in shock*

omg omg omg...!!!

Mani diii... Hugs... This is sooo cool...

Omg... Im feeling like crying...

Pranjy... Sweety ur bday is d bestest day...

Im literally dancing here...

Omg i still cant believe...
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Posted Prologue and Part 1 on page 1

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