FF: Partial Amnesia Pt 31Pg145-6th Dec - Page 56

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Posted: 13 years ago
WOOO!!!! You're on a roll! :)

okay off to read

EEEKKKSSS! omg omg omg that was wonderful!!! ahhh im in shanak dreamland now :D 😍 GOD, that was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! can we give you an award for best FF?? :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
OH MY!!!!!

It was just MINDBLOWING!!!!

From the time Shantanu sees Khanak it was absolute magic! JUST PURE MAGIC!

A backless blouse, the dori, he wanting to tie it, his frustration for not complimenting his wife and blushing over Akshay's remark about sex, so can imagine him going through all that.

And ShaNak and their confusion( may be he just acted out lol) and Khanak's impulsiveness brought such a joy to Shantanu and also to us readers lol. I so wanted Shan to slip her blouse or dress or whatever down her shoulder! Now even without watching I can visualise it.

Just beautiful Beeni! So needed this today!!! Thank you!

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!! i LOVE THIS UPDATEE!

can u PLEASE give us another update!

totally loving the story line!
keep it going!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ANOTHER UPDATEE! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beeni... too much... finally he got to kiss her and what he says yek tik nahi hua'... poor Khanak... she is going to suffer again... and burthal Shaan doesnt register that she kissed him back...
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Posted: 13 years ago
beeni,
wat a surprise..
awesome..
khanak frustrated again seeing natasha n mitul together..
poor b'day boy..ek kiss tho bantha hai..bechari khanak had to see that..
but wat followed..so passionate..the way u described their KISS..
superb..
wat is khanak thinking now??
is she feeling guilty r disappointed as shaan moved away..
waiting for the next part eagerly..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Eeeks ... OMG ... WHoaaa !
I love love love love love IT !!!!
Beaaanss ... You should have applied for the Creatives Post of RBO !
Yipppeee ... This was WOWWW ... OMG
I am having a tingling sensationnn RIGHT NOW !!!!
*gooosebummpppsss*
WHY tHE HELL did he have to SAY 'Yaaay Theeek naaahi huaaa' !!!!
Duffferr ... SHIT man ... Now she is going to feeel Guilty and Avoid HIM !
Nooo ... What if she doesnt move to his rooom !!!
What if she runs away to Dhulwaaadi ... Nooo
Naaahhhiii ... Nooo ... Mommmieee !!!!
LET me read the ShanaK and Kisss part again ...Morning Morning Drooolinng :D :D :D :D :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beaaanss
Please Updateee Naa todaaay ... PLEASEEE !!!!
I wanna Knoww that KhanaK is not avoiding him nowww
PLEASEEE ... That would be reallly bad :( :( :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
WHY couldnt you PUT Phone Ringing or Someone Coming on the Terrace ...
Instead of him Saying "Ye Theek nahi huaaa" !!!!!!
Mommmieee :(
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Posted: 13 years ago

OMG EEE i am so happy that you all loved the part!! I was so excited when i posted it i couldn't sleep lol 😆 *hugs* all of you!

@Anisah: Chalo you finally caught up with it! Did you read the next part then before or after your revision? lol! Sorry honey i had NO idea you were revising othrwise i would have waited lol (not!) Don't worry i don't think i'll be ending this before anoter 10 parts atleast :D and after that I can continue writing OSs na :)
@HADMishti: Heyyy thank you so much! erm i don't have a PM list but I guess I can PM you when I update next :)
@Priya: Wow you still remember that OS? That was such a random thought I had had sighhh I miss them :( I'm glad i cheered you up! :)
@Afiya: Thank you! I thought we needed a strong dose of shanak :) and lol @ award.
@Smitha: thanks! Aww you thought it was magic! :O woww! LMAO no Shaan was not acting it out!! He was just being his burthal self LOL! But he did take off one side of her bloouse so you CAN imagine it lol since the dori untying made it all lose na lol
@Sravya: thanksss!! Ermm i'll try :) then thing is i can't write it at office anymore and at home i get kinda busy but i will really try :)
@Shalini: thanks! Hehe suffering is the first step to a healthy relationship of love :) He did register that she kissed him back but he got worried about him getting carried away and losing control lol
@Ramani: Thank you honey! Khanak is right now feeling disappointed obviously since she was expecting Shaan to tell her that he loves her back but he went and said something else lol. Wacth out for more of her feelings in the next part :)
@Gunjan: thanks!! <3
@Shalu: LMAO i loved it the way you said Shit man!! LOL! seriously trust Shaan to mess things up for himself! lol thank you so much! Muahhh
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Posted: 13 years ago
Talk to meee hereee !!!
You dont love mee anymoree ... Dekhoo Kitnaaa Formaal Thanks Bolaa Tumneee Mujheee !!!!!

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