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Posted: 13 years ago
LMAOOO !!!!!
This was PERRRFFECCT !!!!!
Hahahahahaha .. So PERFECT ShanaK !
Sigh !!!!!
Let me read again ... hahahaha .. LOVED it !
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beeni back with the bang...superb update👏

loved the update

haye she has start day dreaming abt him staring at her hand... hayeela😍

hmm complete miss J ban gai khanak to😉

haye mitul and natasha ... poor souls wht they'll do now😳

her reaction after watching nats hugging mittul was superb😆

each and every word of shanak conv was super cute😛

she lay down beside him... aww poor shan kya haal hua hoga uska😉

but he know how to handle her

and the mangal sutr part haye... loved it

update asap.
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Posted: 13 years ago
suppaaa updatee! :D thank you and hope you are feeling better :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hai Beeni,
i hope you are ok now. Sweet and beautiful update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beeni-awesome once again!!!! And u were worried abt not creating an impact with just the lines?! NO!!!! it was beautiful!!!! Shan folding his arms and watching her so SHANTANU!!!!! Love that pose of his!! And when did Khanak wear such types of dresses lol. Main tho mar gayi when he stared at her mangalsutra and then during the ILU time and there was tho nothing lol. But beautiful!!! AWESOME!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

n ohhh shit sorry i frgot to add


u put badmash dil tujhse juda to d update...i simply love tht song fr d reasons best known to us😳
it made it all d more romantic fr me to read...im humming it now...haaayeee shanak n unke badmaash dil.aur kya chaiyye😍...

im still picturing d sight of shaan seeing her bossoms...super funny his eyes must have popped up🤣


Agree Karishma and Beenz..This song was ful fill Our Shanak Perfectly😍
Previously I Made a Vm On them...watch it😳😳😊
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[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hXVZYpQH2Rc[/YOUTUBE]

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey nice and funny update😃 well khanak is slowly realizing her luv for shaan wowww😍 actually hats of to shaan he is really trying hard to control himself😆 awww poor guy wonder wen is he gonna yield to his temtations😃 plz update next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Haha awesome update! The last line... poor guy is having a hard time! 🤣

Awww loved the whole bedroom bit... so like Shanak to fight like that! 😆 Wonder if she'll wear the mangalsutra soon...?

Natasha was bound to get caught at some point... she's not very good at this whole pretending-to-be-in-love-with-Shaan thing! Come to think of it... neither is he! 😆

And poor Geeta... why does Shaan have such a problem with her? Bechari! Lol.

Awww Khanakri's in love! Badmaash dil... perfect for them! ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beeni just loved the update! It was hilarous, very well written could just imagine them doing this on screen, felt like i was watching it all happen!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys!! 😃 Part 15 for all of you! It's the weekend so I thought I'd write this because during the weekdays it may be difficult because my floor has changed so now I'm sitting with my boss Anyway hope you like it! 😃

Part 15

16th January 2:30 AM

Once back in her room Khanak looked at her mangal sutr for she knew that it was hers; she recognized it. It was the jewel that had connected her to Shaan even when she was not his wife in the true sense. She recalled the mangal sutr giving her a sense of security even back then, a sense of pride that she was married. She played with it for a little while, thinking random thoughts. Then she abruptly got up, went and stood in front of the mirror and placed the mangal sutr around her neck. She looked at herself in the mirror closely. She looked beautiful.

"Iss mangal sutr kee jagah yaheen toh hain" she said to her reflection in the mirror and smiled. "Ub sahee lug raha hain----" she thought.

But something was still missing.

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16th January 2011, 08:30 AM

"Dad studio ja raha hoon" Shaan announced from the living room walking towards the doorway.

"Shaan!" Natasha exclaimed making Shaan turn with a frown. "Can you drop me off to the hospital?"

Shaan raised his eyebrows at her and smiled a little. "Tumko PHIR say Mitul say milna hain?! Abhee toh tum uss say milee thee! Paanch ghantay pehlay!"

The colour from Natasha's face disapperared in an instant as she mumbled something that Shaan took to be "Tumko kaisay pata?"

"Mujhay kaisay pata!! Natasha!---- Khanak nay tum dono ko dekh liya! Mitul ITNI raat ko yahan kya kar raha tha! Thori toh responsibility dekhao tum dono!" he said to her sternly.

Natasha's face turned stony in an instant. "Oh please TUM toh mujh say responsibility ki baat nahi karo!" she said angrily. "Toh kya hua agar Khanak nay humay dekh liya!------ Usay pata toh chalna hee hain na ek din!------Aur meri samajh main toh yay nahi aata kay ub tum usko BATA kyun nahi detay!?------You yourself know that she's falling for you so why hide now?!----" her voice became more dangerous as she spoke, completely taking aback Shaan.

"Yay TUM kah rahee ho Natasha? Tum? Tum jo yay chahti thee kay hum yay-----hum yay dhong karay-----mangaitar honay ka-----tum?" Shaan said gesturing frantically with his hands trying to reason with Natasha. "I thought you wanted to HELP!"

"I AM helping Shaan!!" Natasaha said loudly right in Shaan's face, her anger increasing. "You think this is easy for me! Living here in your house!?-----Not marrying Mitul? -----Listening to Mitul's family's taanas everyday kay main TUMHARAY ghar main kyun ruki hui hoon!----- You know what? Forget it! It's MY fault that I thought YOU of all the people would what I'm going through seeing that you yourself are going through the same!----- " Natasha's eyes filled with tears as she turned to leave. Shaan felt extremely guilty. Natasha was right. He knew perfectly well what it meant not to be with your loved one didn't he?

"Natasha ruko----" Shaan said lazily and Natasha stopped in her tracks, wiping her eyes. "I'm sorry okay----mujhay batao problem kya hain? Main itnay dino say dekh raha hoon---tum pareshaan ho----tum batao toh----" he looked at Natasha straight in the eyes and she took a deep breath.

Natasha told him everything. How it was so important for her to get married within the next 30 days, how Mitul was not agreeing to do so till Khanak was perfectly okay, how she had requested Mitul to get married secretly and was in the process of making him agree.

"Do you want me to talk to him?" Shaan asked Natasha at the end of the conversation in which he agreed that Natasha should indeed marry Mitul before a month. Natasha said nothing but just sniffed. Shaan took that to mean a 'Yes'. "Do you still want to get a drop at your hubby's?"

Natasha looked up at him and smiled broadly. Shaan grinned. They really were budding friends now.

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16th January 2011, 12:00 PM

Khanak searched her entire cupboard but she could no find the little box that had her sindoor in it. No matter how much she tried to remember she just could not recall where she used to keep it. After searching for a good 50 minutes she gave up and sat frustrated on her bed. It was already mid day.

"Khanak-----suno-----" Madhvi entered her room and spoke in a hurry. "Amna ayee hain-----"

Khanak looked confused. "Amna?" she asked madhvi politely.

"Aray Amna!" Madhvi said a little impatiently. "Amna, humaree neighbor-----tumko mehndi lagwani hain toh uss say lagwa lo----I'm going shopping-----" and saying this she left the room in a rush.

Khanak got up and met Amna, a pretty 17 year old, who used to come to the K house and apply mehndi for Khushboo and Khanak every Eid. Khanak saw her waiting outside the room, smiled at her and invited her inside.

"Iss kamray main?" Amna asked. "Main toh humesha apki mehndi USS kamray main lagati thee!"

"Konsay kumray main?" Khanak asked though her ehart told her that she already knew the answer. Sure enough Amna pointed to Shaan's room. Khanak smiled and looked down shyly.

"Kyun?" she asked Amna still smiling, hoping that she would give her the answer that she wanted. That she used to stay in that room as Shaan's wife.

"Wohhh uss room main zyada light hain na----iss liyay-----" Amna replied, thouroughly disappointing Khanak.

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16th January 2011, 01:00 PM

Khanak sat on the bed looking at her hands fondly. The mehdi design looked beautiful. She sighed. Amna had left to apply mehndi for Khushboo in her room but Khanak did not feel like leaving the room she sat in. Something told her that she belonged here. Was it her love for Shaan that made her want to stay in the room? Or was it something else?

Just then the door of the room flew open as Shaan entered in the middle of opening the buttons of his shirt. He stopped dead in his tracks when he saw Khanak sitting on the bed comfortably, her legs spread out on the mattress. Khanak's face brightened up on seeing Shaan.

"Khanak tum?" "Aray Aap?" both Shaan and Khanak said respectively as soon as they saw each other. Then both of them laughed. Shaan came forward, closing the door and sat beside Khanak who was smiling broadly. Her eyes automatically flew to Shaan's bare chest which she could see as a result of him opening 3 of his shirts buttons. Shaan traced the movement of Khanak's eyes and grinned in his head. "You're not going to get this baby anytime soon" he thought wildly. Almost as though Khanak understood what was going on in Shaan's head, she pouted and turned her head away from Shaan.

Shaan grinned openly now. He went closer to Khanak's left ear and said "Khanak?---jub tum naraz hoti ho na-----toh bilkul Jhansi ki rani lagti ho----"

Khanak tried not to laugh but gave in. She snorted with laughter and tried to hide her blush by looking down at her hands. Shaan looked at her mehdi filled hands too.

"Agar um chahti ho kay main tumhari mehndi ki tareef karoon toh main karloon ga----laikin tumhay pata hain na ----mujhay mehdi bilkul pasand nahi----" he made a little face

Khanak looked at him shocked. "Kya?! Appko mehndi pasand nahi?! " she sasked disappointed. Here she thought that she'd apply mehdi and make Shaan happy, for every husband in Dhulwadi loved mehndi on the hands of their wives. It was a symbol of them being happy in their married lives and the darker the colour, the happier the woman was. Shaan not liking mehndi was another harsh truth she had learnt about the city life, she registered.

"Tumko pata hain----Khanak" Shaan said softly and politely.

"Nah---i" Khanak looked down sad.

"Bhool gayee hogee" Shaan replied understandably.

"Hmmm----" Khanak suddenly felt really upset. People do things for their loved ones tha they like not which they detest, she thought. And she was such a burthal. Didn't even bother to find out what Shaan liked. How could she expect to please him by doing the opposite of what he liked? Her hair began to fly across her face and she lifted her elbows to move them aside but Shaan was too quick for her. Getting hold of her strands of hair he swiftly placed them behind her ear, his fingers conveniently caressing her cheeks as he did, making Khanak intake her breath sharply at his touch. He did the same with the strand of hair at the other side of her face and this time his huge fingers trailed to touch her chin and her neck and that's when he saw it.

"Khanak!!" Shaan's voice shook as he spoke. "Yay! ------Yay tumharay galay main------yay mangal sutr------" his head turned to look at his cupboard then back again------"Yay tumhay kahan say mila!" he asked shocked

"Aapkee almaree say----" she responded in a straightforward manner, looking straight into Shaan's eyes to decipher his expression. "Yay mera mangal sutr hain." It was not a question. It was a statement thrown at Shaan's face in the most blunt manner possible. Shaan was suddenly overcome with a desire to get hold of her and hug her tight and never let go. He then wondered how many times he would have to stop himself. Khanak saw in Shaan's eyes a variety of emotions but could not place them. She wondered vaguely what he thought of her wearing the jewel that described her marital status.

"Haan-----tumhara hain-----" Shaan bit his lips as his eyes threatened to water. What was wrong with him? Why did seeing the mangal sutr around Khanak's neck affect him like that?

Khanak remained to be uncertain of Shaan's emotions. Was Shaan worried that now that she has worn the mangal sutr she would want him to give her wifely rights, to leave Natasha. She vowed to tell him she would do nothing of the sort. But now was not the right time. She had other pressing issues in mind.

"Wohh mujhay sindoor-----sindoor ki dibya nahi mil rahee-----meri almari main-----nahi hain----" she said to Shaan, her eyes again falling on Shaan's bare chest. Can he button that up already? She thought

Shaan gave her a quick look and got up without saying anything. Once near the cupboard, he said " Jub Mangal sutr iss almaree main tha-----toh sindoor bhee yahii hoga na-----" he opened the cupboard drawer and took out a small bow of sindoor and showed it to Khanak. Khanak's face brightened up immediately as she gave Shaan a wide smile. Shaan brought the bittle box to her and said "Yay lo-----"

Khanak brought her hands forward then moved them back as she saw the mehndi on her hands. It irritated her beyond measure now as she secretly wished Amna had never come.

"Wohh main---baad main-----" she began but as Shaan came and sat beside her and opened the vox of sindoor slowly but forcefully, Khanak's voice died in her throat. She knew what her husband was bout to do.

It felt like a dream. The opening of the sindoor box was a cue for Khanak to slowly close her eyes; then changing her mind and making them shoot open again. She could not keep her eyes shut, she thought. She wanted to see it, to see her husband filling her maang, to feel the sensation and to etch the entire sight into her memory forever and ever. So that she could live with it even when she got separated from him.

Separation? The thought gave her goosebumps. Shaan's fingers had already taken a pinch of the sindoor and his eyes were now looking directly into Khanak's eyes. As he brought his hand forward towards Khanak's forhead, all thoughts of 'separation' vanished from her head. They were not being separated. They were being united'.at that instant----weren't they? And as Shaan's fingers pressed on her forehead and trailed down the parting of her hair, filling it with red, Khanak realized that she could not let go of him; not after what had just happened, not after he had filled her maang with the colour of love. So what if it was only HER love at that moment. It would be his too, and soon. She would make sure of that.

Shaan's face had remained serious the entire time but when he got done with the application he smiled a little. Khanak smiled too, more at her new found goal in life than as a return to his smile.

"Khush?" Shaan whispered.

Khanak looked down and gave her hands a small smile. The mehndi was not irritating after all.

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16th January 2011, 04:00 PM

"Di----Shaan's theory is that Khanak should say that she loves him herself! He doesn't eant to go up to her and say it to her because a) he's supposed to be engaged to me-----" Natasha rolled her eyes " and b) he doesn't want her to think that he's forcing the relationship on her---being her husband and all-----I dunno Di hardly makes sense to me-----"

Natasha and Khushboo were sitting in Khusboo's room, having chilli chips and talking about the present scenario.

"But that's crazy! Why does he think he'll be forcing the relationship on her? He KNOWS she loves him!" Khushboo reasoned, putting a handful of chilli chips in her mouth in a hurry.

" Shaan and his therories-----" Natasha sighed. "---And Mitul agrees with him too -----" she added. "But I'm not going to make this an issue abhee-----it's more important that Mitul agrees to marry me first---" She picked up a chilli chip and put it in her mouth mindlessly.

"Well that's stupid really! Khanak will NEVER tell Shaan that she loves him! Does he even KNOW his wife?!" she paused, thinking. "Dekho Natasha, main Khanak ko ache tarah jaanti hoon-----wohh kabhee nahi chahay gee kay doh pyaar karnay walay alug hojayay-----woh kabhee bhee tum dono ko alug nahi karna chahay gee------Meri baat mano---tum hee kuch karo-------"

"Di MAIN kya karoon?" Natasha said frustrated.

"Pata nahi-----laikin TUM ko hee kuch karna paray ga Natasha----" Khushoo said, now rolling her finger in the empty bowl of chips and licking the chilli off it.

"Hmmm-----" Natasha went into thinking mode as she saw her sister digging all four fingers in her mouth as she licked them.

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16th January 2011, 06:00 PM

"Khanak!!! Oh Emm Gee! You look beautiful beta!" Madhvi exclaimed when Khanak came down in the living room at tea time. Shaan, Akshay, Sunil and Madhvi were sitting relaxing on the sofas and had just switched off the television. Shaan raised his head to look at Khanak and his jaw dropped open. Khanak really DID look gorgeous. She was wearing a red sari with a golden border, her hair was loose, she wore little jhumkas in her ears and her mangal sutr and sindoor shined as though the sun was lit brightly over them.

" You can close your mouth buddy----" Akshay coughed deliberately to Shaan in his ear. Shaan immediately closed his mouth and looked around sheepishly as Khanak chose a seat opposite Shaan and sat down.

Akshay raised his eyebrows at Khanak's move and smiled. "Bhabhi-----aray wahh kya baat hain! Aj toh aap bilkul kahi ki princess lug rahee hain----" he said genuinely smiling and looking at Shaan who looked up at Khanak again, careful that his jaw stayed in place this time. Khanak smiled shyly and looked down.

"Beta tum roze sariyaan pahen sakti ho-----achee lugti ho----" Madhvi chimed in.

"Forget the sari Mom!! Check out the mangal sutr and sindoor!" Akshay said happily. "Aray hum toh taras gayay kay humari patni bhee humaray liyayay mangal sutr pehnay------sindooor lagayay-----" he said, nudging Shaan with his elbow. "Laikin humari kismat------" Akshay sighed, feigning sadness and looking at Shaan pointedly. "Some guys have all the luck-----"

Both Shaan and Khanak blushed and said nothing. Shaan chanced half a look at Khanak then looked away. Khanak glanced at Shaan too and looked away. Both their glances missed each others.

"Aray! Tumharay haathon ki mehdi kahan gaee?!" Madhvi asked surprised as Shaan looked up sharply and saw Khanak's mehndi-less hands.

Khanak felt uncomfortable and looked at Shaan as ther eyes met. "Wohh mainay hata di----" she said "Wohh mujhay ache nahi lug rahee theee-----" she explained.

"Acha?" Akshay said sarcastically grinning and eyeing Shaan. Shaan gave him a warning look. He was suddenly feeling a mixture of warmth and guilt. Warmth at Khanak removing the mehndi JUST because he didn't like it and guilty because he had unknowingly made her do something she did not want to.

"Oh Emm Jeee Shaan!!" Madhvi exclaimed suddenly making everyone look up. "Tum ko yaad dilana tha! Tumharay dost Adi aur Simran aa rahay hain na?"

"Hmmm----" Shaan said. "They can stay in the third guest room"

"Nahi-----Uss guest room ki renovation ho rahee hain! Yahi toh batana tha! Toh un ko Khanak ka room dena paray ga-----"

Shaan 's eyes widened with shock as he registered what his mother was getting to. "Mom!"

"Haan toh Khanak can move into your room-----so that they can stay there together----beta un kay liyay kumra bhee toh chahiyay na!" Madhvi reasoned.

Khanak stared at Madhvi blankly. Shaan stared at her in disbelief. How could his mother do this to him? he thought. He could not stay in the same room as Khanak! Why didn't she understand?!

"Dude-----you have 2 options----" Akshay said to Shaan softly in his ear. " Either Khanak leaves the one guest room and lives in your room-----or NATASHA leaves the guest room and lives in your room----take your pick-----" he looked at Shaan and chuckled. "Ahhh tough decision I must say------" he grinned making Shaan glare at him.

"Theek hain Mom----" Shaan finally said. "Khanak-----apna samaan bandho-----aur errmm meray kumray main-----ajao-----" he said slowly and fidgedtly.

Khanak's insides started dancing the tonga.

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Edited by tofeeees - 13 years ago

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