FF: Partial Amnesia Pt 31Pg145-6th Dec - Page 3

i like i like i like! keep it going! :)

wow!!!! very nice start

Dudette you call this lame?!

Okay Jess is going to pretend she did not read the word "lame"

OMG ! Beensi ! You've started the most wanted track ! Eee ! I'm SO happy ! I was like tho DYING to see this incorporated into the show ! But sigh ! Our bad luck ! Cant wait too live it through your FF ! But a warning - this FF should have ATLEAST 20 parts + that too long ones ! Actually make it 30 ! Waarnah we will be bouncing on you ! The prologue - OMG ! So much emotions at once which you have emoted REALLY well ! Shaans pain, impatience, hope, shock ! Dr Geetas realisation of the hardships of her job, everything was emoted SUPERBLY ! Seriously ! My eyes were welling up ! OMG ! I can SO picture everything + KT acting it out ! I loved EVERYTHING ! The way you built up the suspense to the truth + portrayal of Shaans pain, not knowing who held him not caring as well to Khanak waking up in bed. SUPERB Beensi SUPERB ! Thoughts - It makes me think what happened to cause this. I seriously cannot wait to find out ! My thoughts include car accident, fall of building. SO sad they lost their baby ! I suppose it might have been 'Mother or child' scenario ? Gosh ! When I first read you were gonna start after the show end I thought 'wont Khanak think why shes pregnant ?' but you bombed us ! I suppose it was required. But then anothr thought came - imagine the pain Khanak is going to grow through when her memory Comes back + it hits her her child is no more. Shes gonna break down + I'm sure you'll pen it down BRILLIANTLY ! Aww, Shaan might try going in thinking how to tell her but not knowing Another hEartbbreAk awaits him ! Poor guy ! The turmoil hEs going to go through ! Who is he going to go to for support ? Khanak was his support ! Gosh ! I'm gonna need tissues for this FF ! + Please Beensi ! Dont insult your writing by calling it lAme ! You know how crazy I am about it as well as evEryone else ! (Even though I'm lazy at commenting but I will try to foR thIS ! ThreatEn me if nOt !) Eee ! Cant wait for it Beensi ! For them to love again ! This time from Khanaks POV ! Aaa ! I have SO much more to write but guests here ! I read this first thing as soon as I opened my eyes + then logged on to make sure I comment before I get out of my room LOL ! Carry on Beensi ! Your one of the people that are MOST in tune with ShaNak. Your going to SMASH IT !

Ahh, that was wonderful! :) Please update soon, GK as a neurologist?, super hot :)

hey beeni
wonderful specially this track I wanted to see in RBo with yasharan because their emoting acting no one can beat them always wanted to see Shan taking care of khanak with this track they are falling for each other will definitely see through your ff
Ragini dr Geeta love her too