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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simiv

Updating ryt now!!
And I love Uxxx





ME TOO LOVE YAA
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Posted: 14 years ago
Dear wonderful friends and readers... This is the beginning of a new phase for our Shanak...where they are going to come up against a lot of different though quite normal things..but this time they hv to deal with them together.
I was hoping to get some feedbk from you..abt how you felt etc..etc..which will help guide me.
There will be a few new characters too..as is quite normal.
I am hoping to updt..more frequently for the next few days..so don't expect looong updts.
And pls comment freely..😃
Love U Ramzz!!
Ground Zero -A

Beeep! Beeep! Beeep! Beeep!...

Damn this alarm! Why does it have to go off at this hour?

Her palm hit the snooze button again and she rolled back over to her other side, where his warm lips greeted hers and his arms enveloped her body in a welcoming embrace. As her delicate outline strained hard to become one with his rugged exterior, and she put her arms around his waist to eliminate any remaining distance between them; she blushed to think that not that long ago they had been complete strangers unaware of each other's existence. But now the contours of his body were more familiar to her than her own and she couldn't imagine spending a day without tasting his skin or inhaling his breath. He had become her home and she did not wish to be any place else.

This had evolved into the most favorite part of day for both of them, the time between dawn and daylight; which they could spend in relaxed laziness making slow and deliberate love, whispering sweet and often nonsensical words into each other's ear and talk about anything and everything under the sun.

There was nothing to hurry about she thought as she stretched her pleasantly aching muscles and suppressed a yawn.

Sleepy? He enquired softly propping his head up on the pillow next to her, his fingers doodling on her flat stomach.

Hmm, yes. Will you let me, I need some. She pleaded with a smile.

Of course I will, but first I need to know when your clinic starts so I can drop you. I cannot allow you to drive your itsy bitsy car anymore.

What Clinic??!!! She suddenly shot up her back ram rod straight her eyes wide open looking around trying to recall where she was.

Yours my dear or have you forgotten already? He chuckled sitting up bringing his muscular arms around her and planting a soft kiss on her shoulder. By the way I think I told you before, your fair body looks great in the early morning light.

She pushed him away and hurriedly wrapping a satin sheet around her rushed to the bathroom muttering;

Damn you! Why didn't you tell me earlier? It starts at 8:30 but I promised to meet Dr K there at 7, so he could brief me on everything before he left.

But you never asked me to sweetheart and I have always admired your superior memory in such matters. Anyway wake me up when you are ready; I am going to have a snooze. He plopped back in bed and promptly fell into a deep sleep.

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Familiar ring tone..Beethoven's 5th.
It never failed to wake him up..

Mom's SMS:

How are you this morning my golden baccha, and how is my darling bahu?

Didn't have time to talk last night when you were over for dinner, you both left in such a rush; with Bahu making an excuse of clinic early in the morning. But I am not an old fool, I understood everything and I am so happy for you both! LoveU Big wet kiss!

Mom

PS: Ask the doc to give me a call when she is free.

Shoot!! My first day in the role of a caring husband and I have made a mess of it.
He thought as he padded around the empty apartment in his shorts and his eternal cup of black coffee.

I should have known, docs start their days much earlier than architects' do and anyway I have yet to find an office to go to.

He shot a glance at the wall clock and found its hands stuck at a quarter past 4; it needed to be refueled. He picked up his cell phone and was for a minute arrested by the picture of his wife looking up to the heavens, her face bathed golden by the evening sunlight; it never failed to leave him enchanted. The digital clock read 9:30.

Was it that late? But the sun really hadn't come out yet.

He frowned and opened the double French doors to check and was hit by sleet of driving rain as it pelted the balcony and the beach beyond. He wiped his face and stared at the angry looking white capped waves churning up the Arabian.

She had gone out in this weather and that too in that little beetle of a car? She would never make it through. He should have anticipated it'he knew her well enough by now.

He closed the doors and noticed that the rain had already made a large puddle on the floor, it was coming down with a vengeance.

He needed to find out how she was first; he dialed her number, but then changed his mind; if she picked up it may cause an accident, that was something he didn't want to think of.

He decided to call the clinic...

After several rings; it was finally answered by a voice which sounded distinctly familiar and it said;

Dr Krishnan and Dr Agarwal's clinic, this is Nurse D'souza, what can I help you with? And is baarish mein would you rather not stay at home?

Shaan couldn't help but smile despite his anxiety, the weather was so bad that it was making clinics turn away their patients. Or did it mean something else?

Uh Hi Nurse D' Souza! I am Shantanu Khandelwal, did my wife, I mean did Khanak, sorry did Dr Agarwal reach the clinic yet? He had his eyes closed and fingers crossed.

Aaahhh! Shantanu Khandelwal? The Shantanu Khandelwal? Our very own desi titanic ka hero, Mr Dhak Dhak? The one who swept my beloved Dr Agarwal right off her tiny feet??!! I cannot believe I am talking to you again! How are you, it's been a long time!

Yes it had been, but this wasn't the moment for small talk, he had to find out if his Khanak was safe!

But she was a kind soul and he didn't want to hurt her; so taking a deep breath he replied in a controlled voice; Dear Nurse D'Souza, who can ever forget you; the most charming woman I have ever met and if it hadn't been for my Khanak I'd have seriously contemplated snatching you away from under your husband's nose.

He heard a sharp surprised intake on the other side... he hadn't lost his touch. He pitched in quickly before she could speak; Is my Doc there now? She left at least 2 hrs ago..I think (hesitant)

No, not yet! Dr K waited for her for a long time and just left. He had to leave see... his wife is very ill with..

He ended the call, not bothering about how she felt...

Sh#*!! Banging his hand against the counter. It is my entire fault! I shouldn't have fallen asleep; I shouldn't have let her go. If she is stubborn; I should have been more. Now where will I find her?

He grabbed his keys, quickly pulling on a shirt.

Maybe I should give her a call first, just in case...

(Gal mitthi mitthi bol!!...)

Damn she forgot it at home; that silly girl!

It was lying on the counter, with his own face winking back at him;

Burthal calling..
She calls me Burthal! But your burthal is not there with you my darling!

God please keep her safe!

He prayed silently before racing out and down the stairs; and ran bang into a tall thin girl who was walking up and nearly knocked her over;

Sorry am in a hurry, I hope I didn't hurt you, He made sure she was standing before continuing down the stairs taking them two at a time.

To be continued!
Sorry guys but I am taking this opportunity to share with you some of the music I like a lot...
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Comments are vital!!!!!!😃

Edited by simiv - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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abhi thori der may comnt karungi

love yaa czarina
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Posted: 14 years ago
simi did u check the PM??
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: RB81

simi did u check the PM??

Yes..did you get my reply??
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simiv

Yes..did you get my reply??


yup..check again..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: RB81


yup..check again..

Done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

smething is deffo up the sleeves, both for Khanak AND Shantanu...lol..it was a chootu update..".mystery" Girl in tow..adds further to this MYSTERY!!

Edited by deepa_01 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey simi

Loved the last two parts !

Real life beckons !

I loved the phone thingy !

I don want the new girl in town.. bagaao usse !
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Posted: 14 years ago
simi thats a super cute update

loved it... nice nore normal things to deal with

and lots of love... as the update start wid it

its pretty obvious to forget abt where she is... together they are in paradise

but y did she left alone... he said na he'll drop her

awww poor shan... loves her to death and now is worried to death

cute conv between shaan and nurse d'souza

he can never lose his charm

when he called her that aprt was really shweet... his own pic winking back at him

and burthal... cute

She calls me Burthal! But your burthal is not there with you my darling!

God please keep her safe!... loved it

hmm who is that gurl

continue soon/

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