FF- Shaadi Mubarak! IMP NOTE pg. 83

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

i think everyone is going to meet their Raj in Australia... happy abt that..

but still no Shanak??

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afiya.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: shalini_s
i think everyone is going to meet their Raj in Australia... happy abt that..
but still no Shanak??

Not yet, I still need to explain each characters background story :),but they'll meet soon!

Edited by AfiyaZ - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Thank you to all of you who have commented! It means soo much to me :) Also Thank you to all of you who have liked Shaadi Mubarak so far! :)

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Part 3-

Shaan! Kidhar thay yaar, kabse tujhe dhond rahe hai, the plane's boarding! Come on, Shashank said.

In the plane on the way to Australia

*In an Australian accent* Ahh finally Australia! Shashank said.

And Australian goris! Arjun exclaimed.

*Shaan Smiles* Aur hamaare yaar, Abeer. It's been too long, Shaan said.

*Shashank in a fake offended voice* Dekha Arjun, it's like we don't even exist! Kyun mera bhai, why do you hate us?! Shashank exclaimed.

Arjun smirked

Oh shut up, it's not like that! Abeer is like my "big" brother, even though he's the baby of the group, Shaan said. I can tell him everything, and he understands me. Especially the last time we were all together' *Shaan grows quiet*

*Shashank trying to ease the tension* Arrey yaar, remember that one time he saved me from failing! Shashank exclaimed.

Arjun snorts

He's a great guy, hamesha sabka khayaal rakhta hain, Arjun said.

Yeah, great guy, Shaan said.

Anyway, abbey Shashank, idiot, you never told us how you and Preeti met? Kya chakkar hai boss? Arjun asked.

Yaar, what do I say, it just happened so quickly! Shashank exclaimed.

Flashback to when Shashank and Preeti met

Shashank sir, your new secretary is here

Thanks Raju, *sighs* send her in, Shashank says.

*Shashank thinks to himself * Kya Dad bhi Na, mujhe secretary nahi chahiye, aur aggar chahiye to phir koi hot sa, jisse kaam ko maza de, waise work is soo boring! *Shashank yawns*

Preeti walks in

Sir, Preeti Malhotra *Puts hand forward*

Shashank is taken back, on how pretty she is

*Shashank thinks to himself* More like Preeti Mal "hottie" . God how can she be so beautiful, and so simple at the same time, I've never seen anyway look so good in a pink chudidaar!

Sha.. Shashank, Shashank Sharma.

*End of Flashback*

Actually at first, I don't think she liked me too much, but I'm such a killer! Shashank exclaimed.

*Arjun rolled his eyes* Riight...

Phir dosti hui, then coffee dates, and you know how it goes, Shashank said.

Toh phir sagaai ki baat kaise hui? Arjun asked.

Sagaai! I still hate you guys for not coming! Shashank exclaimed.

Sorry yaar, you know how it was' Shaan said.

Yeah I understand... But Arjun! You had no excuse!

Maat pooch yaar, * in a Punjabi auntie accent* Daadi ki "Happy Birthday" thi. Chandigarh rehna para. Arjun said.

I got ya, actually I can't believe I'm engaged either, but, Preeti really wanted to, so why not? But shaadi ka abhi bhi koi plan nahi, I'm too young for that! Shashank said.

Shaan roles his eyes

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Khanak checks her phone to see if there's anything from Ajay

*Preeti knowingly* Ajay se baat hui, aane se pehle? Preeti asked.

*Khanak quietly* No, I'm sure he's busy with work...

*Arohi snorts* Yeah right, jaise ki college mein bahut kaam karta tha, classes kum, aur parties zyaada karta tha

Are you sure he's right for you? Tujhe toh woh bilqul pasand nahi tha, Preeti said.

I know, but he's changed, he says he really loves me, Khanak said.

Are you sure he loves YOU, or your bank account? Arohi asked.

It's not like that, he's working really hard for his dad's business, he's changed, Khanak said.

Well we just want you to be happy Khanak, Preeti said.

Don't worry guys, I am... But Khanak wasn't so sure of that herself.

I tried to make it a long update!

As always Comments/Suggestion are appreciated! :)

Edited by AfiyaZ - 14 years ago

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ShaNak_RagNa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

afiya beautifully written keep going on loving it

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minnu345

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

afiya its beautiful

par give some long updates yaaar

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Manita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Awww...I simply love friends talking to each other in a matter-of-fact way !!!

loved your description of each character via the dialogues given to him / her !!!

write more and if it is not too much to ask...give us long updates rey !!!

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afiya.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Manita-
Awww...I simply love friends talking to each other in a matter-of-fact way !!!

loved your description of each character via the dialogues given to him / her !!!

write more and if it is not too much to ask...give us long updates rey !!!

Sorry!! trying to write more :)

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IF_rida

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Its really gud afiya👏

cute conv b/w frndz and penned amazingly

as manita said "in a matter of fact way"

hmmm he is missing natsaha a lot... mr gum sum hain
😒
oops !! khanak's bank acct or khanak😳

luved the line "preeti mal hottie"... lol😉

update soon

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Pranjal K.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

Hey Afiya.

Loved the update……Awesome part with the Beautiful writing. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Loved the Friends talk. Arjun is so funny 😆 I even like Shashank he is cute.😉 But Shaan is Sad & it makes me Sad too.😭Please jaldi milwado Shaan aur Khanak ko taaki Shaan ki life bhi Mazzedaar ban jaye.😉 He is Missing Natasha terribelly & his behaviour says that he has spand the Fantastic time with her which is impossible for him to forget. Waise Loved his Friends,,,,,they handel him wonderfully. Their talks about Abeer makes me curious to know abt him more.😳

Awww…..Such a Filmy way to fall in love for Shashank & preeti. …..Me loved it.😊 Girls talk were intrusting. So finally Ajay entered.😳 (I know he has not entered practically & will be peep in by phone calls for few updates. He will make appeance at the time when their will be lovey Sparks between Shanak,) Accha hain jitna late aaye utna. 😉 Hey Ajay & Khanak Story Seems to be complicated. Ho sake to ek update mein unke bare mein bhi batana….like when they met & how they get engaged?😕 Coz this talks makes me understands that initially Khanak hated him & Ajay is a mean person.🤔 Anyways waiting curiously to know Further Story. 😊

Hey Your writing is very beautiful. Simple languges with best Emotions & lovely atmosphere.👏 👏 But it was a choutusa update………Please try to make it long 😳,,,,,,Please…..please…..please.😳 & yes Sorry for the Stupid & long comments. 🤗

Waiting for the next part………..Jaldi dena. 😉 😃

Love

Pranjal.

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afiya.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: -pranjal-
Hey Afiya.

Loved the update''Awesome part with the Beautiful writing. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Loved the Friends talk. Arjun is so funny 😆 I even like Shashank he is cute.😉 But Shaan is Sad & it makes me Sad too.😭Please jaldi milwado Shaan aur Khanak ko taaki Shaan ki life bhi Mazzedaar ban jaye.😉 He is Missing Natasha terribelly & his behaviour says that he has spand the Fantastic time with her which is impossible for him to forget. Waise Loved his Friends,,,,,they handel him wonderfully. Their talks about Abeer makes me curious to know abt him more.😳

Awww'..Such a Filmy way to fall in love for Shashank & preeti. '..Me loved it.😊 Girls talk were intrusting. So finally Ajay entered.😳 (I know he has not entered practically & will be peep in by phone calls for few updates. He will make appeance at the time when their will be lovey Sparks between Shanak,) Accha hain jitna late aaye utna. 😉 Hey Ajay & Khanak Story Seems to be complicated. Ho sake to ek update mein unke bare mein bhi batana'.like when they met & how they get engaged?😕 Coz this talks makes me understands that initially Khanak hated him & Ajay is a mean person.🤔 Anyways waiting curiously to know Further Story. 😊

Hey Your writing is very beautiful. Simple languges with best Emotions & lovely atmosphere.👏 👏 But it was a choutusa update'''Please try to make it long 😳,,,,,,Please'..please'..please.😳 & yes Sorry for the Stupid & long comments. 🤗

Waiting for the next part'''..Jaldi dena. 😉 😃

Love

Pranjal.

First of all I love your comments!! please keep them long :) and shanak will meet, give em some time :) Natasha was Shaan's first love so it'll take time for him to forget her :( and exactly right!, ajay will pop in right in the middle of shanak romance :(, again thanks so much for the wonderful comments! :)

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