FF ~In A Heartbeat~update 13 pg39 She is the one ! - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sitting on the benches in the chaat house they all are hogging in pani puris shaan sees that khanak is not eating and is surprised to see how one can resist pani puris of course he cant !

SHAAN-why are you not eating khanak

DUCK-may be on a diet aaj kaal ki ladkiyaan tujhe toh pata hi hai

SHAAN- shutup will you dekh anki teri pani puri kha rahi hai

DUCK- arre aise kaise

KHANAK-actually

SHAAN- no I wont listen you have to eat

He picks up one pani puri and brigs it near her mouth

KHANAK-but shaan

SHAAN- no buts eat this or yo will have to eat the whole plate

KHANAK- but..

SHAAN- please for me

KHANAK- ok

She eats it from his hand

SHAAN- that's like a ood girl

DUCK-( cutting in ) mmm khanak tumhe agar problem na ho toh can I eat one pani puri of yours

KHANAK- sure

Duck eats her pani puris

KHANAK- it looks like its going to rain better go home

SHAAN- rain I LOVE RAIN ESPECIALLY GETTING WET

KHANAK- I don't like getting wet although rain is beautifull

SHAAN- ok I will pay up

He pays the shopkeeper

SHAAN- hsnt your dad sent a car to pick you up

KHANAK- ya I will call him up

ANKI- you guys come on motor bikes know it must be fun

DUCK- haan yaar bike par alag hi maa hota hai

SHAAN- yup bikes are any day better than cars

DUCK- waise you girls should also come on scooties

KHANAK- ya ducks I am thinking about it but for now dad is not picking up the phone ugghhh

Ankis brother comes to pick her up as she had told them before she had to go to her cousins engagement and khanak could not go woth her cause she was going in the opposite direction and was late to !

ANKI- well bye guys see you on Monday then

ALL- bye see you have fun !

SHAAN- ab khanak madam aap mere saath chalengi I will drop you I live in park avenue and your locality is just before me

KHANAk- offcourse and don't call me madam

SHAAn- theek hai arre ducks chalen

DUCK- offcourse I am ready

Shaan puts on his helmet starts his bike and khanak site behind him and ducks and shaan speed of khanak is terrified

KHANAK- don't you think you should reduce your speed its not safe

SHAAN-c mon be a sport

KHANAK- no it is not fun it is very dangerous

SHAAN-fine only till ducks house do you want me to loose no na then !

KHANAK- boys!!!!!!!!

Ducks and shaan race against each other but duck wins as shaan is extra careful as khanak is sitting behind him

DUCK-tu haar gaya shaan !

SHAAN- srre yaar zyada khush mat ho piche ladki thi isleyi zyada dhayan se chalaya

DUCK- chal chal mein sab janta hoon

SHAAN- jaanta hai toh pooch kyun raha hai chal bye

DUCK-bye man

KHNAK-(on the phone)its ok mom ya shaan will drop me

Ya love you bye

SHAAN- evry thing ok

KHANAK-yup it was mom asking whether I am home and that they will not be home for two days that's why they were not picking up the phone

SHAAN- oh well come lets drop you

KHANAK- ya sure!



guys sorry for the short update as I am quite busy


do tell how you find it

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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
Hey Peru... It's very cute...loving your FF dear ..it's very sweet, innocent and refreshing...why Khanak didn't have paani puri?? Shaan feeding Khanak,so sweet! Duck is goner when it comes to food...lol!
Bike ride seemed fun, Shaan chose to lose race than upset Khanak,so cute..take your time and update whenever suits you... But do post...
Love and take care, Ann,xox
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
hey very nice update...is it possible to get longer updates plzzz...love your story...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Arrey RollReversal..yhan bhi???????? i mean generally girls like Pani puris and rain more than boys...but here its vice versa 😉😉

Great Update Prerna 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hei prerna,
this time u r very late in updating too..
that too chote part..
waise doesn't khanak like paani puri ya koi aur reason??
so shaan dropping khanak off to her home n being careful while driving..
so sweet..so will khanak be all alone in home for 2 days r her bro will be there??
do try to post the next part soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
Hey Prerna

Nice update
Shaan feeding Khanak...caring about Khanak's safety while driving...so sweet.
Update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97

will we get some romntic scene btween kahnak and shaan in rain ??????????

i m curious update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
very cute updat...bt why didnt khanak hv pani puri?????
shaan feeding khanak & careful 4 hr safty ...wow!!! so srw of him
r we going 2 hv sum romantic scenes 4m shaan & khanak???????

tk ur time bt do post...dear
m waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hmm..prerna..just luvved the last 2 updates...cont asap
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Posted: 14 years ago
Really cute👏

he already concerned for her..😊

shoo shweet he fed her 😍

nice conv between ducks and shaan😆

wohoo he dropping her ... bike read... haye... lukin fwd to many more😉

hmm she'll be alone at home... kuch shanaklicious milega

luved it continue soon.

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