Hey Tia,
Awesome…..beatifully written,,,,,,👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Hey buddy just saw the OS posted by you,,,,,,read it & loved it…..u have amazingly described their life journey from actors……to lovers……to perfect partners ,.,,,,,,,to awesome parents. Loved the way u used name Rang Badalti Odhani. Loved the Title " Just One Night" Perfect. 👍🏼
So Shaan & Khanak both are actors …..doing filma named Rang Badalti Odhani………Loved this very much……loved the way u described that everyone on set address them as Shanak. But both felt bad at the sudden realization that they are just together to shoot the last sence, the feeling hurt Shaan & he left the place without Khanak. Shaan is extremely carring when it cames to Khanak & u showed it beautifully, like Shaan biting Parellel lead coz he was misbehaving with Khanak. loved Shaan's concern he knows that she is afraid of Dark he left his place without even closing the door. When he gets to know she is alone.
Due to heavy rain Khanak has to spand Night at Shaans place….than Power cut….& both couldn't control their feelings & they make out. But next day khanak left the place before Shaan gets up. You took a leap…..they are meeting for the last sence shoot….Shaan wanted to meet her as he haven't seen her in last 1 mths…..Shaan gets a real surprise by hiring that Khanak is pragnanat, (u described it wonderfully……u are just too good)
They both get married & now they are in U.K Khanak is expecting her 4th child (Oops). Their Kids are watching "Blockbuster RBO" on Tv. Loved Kids convo…..& Shanak Romance…..Both are reliving old memories…..Wow…Loved it. Keep writing 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
Love
Pranjal.
Cricket
