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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey , some of u guys no me some not well lemme introduce . my name is Tia i have my FF going around here those who haven't read it u will defiantly find it. So i ahve story going around my mind so i thought to drop my pen on it , Hope so u guys will like it ,This is my 2nd attempt here so this is not taht goos but yeah i will be back with a awesome FF after my current Ff will finsh , till then enjoy this ...


JUST A NIGHT

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HERE I GO: ...

director:cut it..
dere hug broke, by the appluase of ppl,stndin dere and appreciating dere acting skill. Shaan and Khanak main lead of da movie "Rang badalti odhani" were shootng da second last scene of da movie. aftr 1 mnth dy hv 2 shoot da last scene. ya only 1 month, and dere dreams will come true. aftr da hardwork of 2 yrs, dere 1st movie iz gng 2 released. director, and actors hv great hope wid da movie bcoz of da hardwrk,and da chemstry ,whch dy both shared...

Mehak:hey Shanak juice lo ge?
Khanak: han dedo,feelng thrsty.
Shaan:no, i dnt want.
Khanak: pelo, subah se shoot kr rhen hen,tum ne kuch khaya bhi nhi... and she pressed her glass 2 his lips.
Mehak laughs: men to sandwich mngva rhi hun, tum kaho ge, jldi bolo Shanak.
Rahul: yar, ab Shanak bolne ki aadat chor do , ab to movie khtam hogai he. ab to pta nhi ye kahan aur wo kahan... dy laughed.
bt Shaan Khanak felt a pinch in their heart. only be4 5 mintes dy wer happy, bt nw...da thought of livng widout eachother overcome dere any happiness.

2 yrs b4,dy met on kitni set,dy got their 1st break and wer v.happy. dy hv 2 shoot 2gethr, reharsal 2gether. so dy becm usd 2 eachother. dy enjoyd eachother company alott. after some time all da cast bcm 4rnds 2 eachother. dy hv 2 shoot da scene or not, dy must cm 2 set 4 seeing eachothr. specialy due 2 dance shoot khanak has to stay on da set longer,bt Shaan alwys stay wid her.

da thought of gng far 4rm eachothr, made Shaan head spining . he took his keys and leave bcoz his shoot iz ovr.
dats da 1st time,he is gng alone, or ddnt ask Khanak 2 come or drop. he iz nt able 2 undrstand why he iz nt happy... why at da time of achivement, he felt like a looser.Shaan reached his cmpartment, wid heavy steps. 2dy 1st time he realized da traffic of mumbai, becoz 2day she was nt wid him. he sit on sofa and start tkng his drink, ask himself wht iz bothring him? in da age of 22 he iz gng 2 be a star, by why his life become empty within a few moment. he wanted 2 divert his mind, looked 4 t.v remote, shouted: Khanak remote ka...

only bcoz of her name , a smile appeared on his face. and beautiful memories swing in 4rnt of his eyes,
...shot in agra 4 2 days,and dey escape 4rm da airport, stay in agra 4 a week...

...writer was v. rude wid dem, dey chnged his dailouge ppr, poor writer, director fired him.. 4 celebrtin dere dat victory dey went 4 a long drive...

...bcoz of romantic rain dance sequence, Shaan got flu, she also take leave ,care him, stay wid him also in night...

...poor director has 2 chnge da parallel lead, bcoz Shaan beat him hardly, bcoz he misbehave wid Khanak...

and alot of more thngs holi,diwali,birthday whch seems 2 be more beautiful now.

suddenly a strong storm start. it was about 2 rain. director packup da shoot, ppl huridly get dere vehicles 4 reach dere homes. Khanak came out of Shaan thought, bcoz of da cold storm, uff it was realy cold. wid evry 1 she also come out on da road. nw she was alone waitng 4 a taxi, bt she also knw hw toye got a taxi at 1:am in december night. she thought, hw Shaan teach him driving ,by mkng her sit on his lap. bt she is afraid of drivng. heavy rain started , she totaly drenched, da dark lonely road mk her scared, oh wht she has 2 do? she tookout her cell and call Shaan, she knew dere paths r gng 2 be separate , bt she trusttt him, only him and sure he must come...

Shaan recvd her call, and ran madly , " oh God hope she is fine , she iz scared of dark , it is realy cold, da rain is so heavy..

he stoped his car, in da rain, he iz nt able 2 see in a dark. he come out. bt his good luck after few steps he found her... she was shivering in rain ,in her red sari, whch iz cmpletly stuck 2 her body.
dy ran 2ward eachother, and hug...
in da car dy both wer silence , da new realizatin mad dem cnfuse..
Shaan: tumhare ghar ka rasta to block he, thori der men street lights bhi off hojaengi, tum mere sath mere apartment men chlo, jb barish bnd hogi to men tumhe drop krdunga..
Khanak(shivering wid cold): theek he .
they reached Shaan aparment, he took his keys out of his pocket , bt da door is already opend or u cud say he didnt bother 2 close it. dy entered inside , bcoz of her shivering she cudnt said a word , bt she understood reaction of Shaan on her call.

she cud see, hw hurried he ran , window opened , t.v on , drink and glass , and broken flwer pot..
she sat on da bed , Shaan took out da towel, sit nxt 2 her , start drying his one corner of twel, and gv other corner 2 her . he was cntnuosly curses rain , ppl on da sets 4 let her staying on da road... bt she was just thnkng about his madness , bcoz of her.

Shaan: Khanak kya hua? buht thnd he apne hair saf krlo , wrna beemar ho jao gi.

her arms r still khanakund her,bcoz of cold , he start wiping her wid twel , her ears , hairs , face , lips , neck. he spoke out: tumhe mujhe pehle hi call krdeni chahe thi...
Khanak: kb tk aaoge..?

Shaan remained quite, bcoz he too want da answer ," men tumhari liye coffe lata hun, bt just i chnge b4. he stood up,went 2 washroom. just den lights went off , Khanak screamed ,he came fast, shirtless, bcoz he knew she is afraid of dark. he hurriedly lighten da cndle , and wrapped her in his bare arms. " hey, relax i m here wid u, due 2 heavy rain, all da cities light got off , ur body is so cold and u r still wet, u shud chnge, wait i gv u smthng" bt she ddnt let him go , she just want 2 wid him, ever and 4ever. she just want 2 brust in2 tears." men aarhaun, tumhare liye closet se kapre dekne do, umm... men ladies kapre to pehnta nhi hun, to tumhe mere kapron se hi kam chlana prega, ok take dis white kurta, nt so long...bt itne tumhari dry hote he,guzara hojayga...

Shaan, in da kitchen, coffee to he nhi, kya krun, tea bnalun? Khanak se puch leta hun. he went 2 da room bt stopped, she was standing infront of mirror, cleaning her self wid towel. she was in a deep thought, thought of Shaan, and only 1 question "why her heart wished, da rain nvr stoppedd"

Shaan standing, admiring her beauty. he just want god fulfil his only 1 wish" is rat ki koi subha na ho "
she turnd 2 tk da kurta, Shaan mvd back 2 kitchen.
he took da water bottle 4rm fridge and throw water on his own face."wht da hell iz happening wid me?"

he heared her scream , ran 2 her room , she was sitting on floor crying, he ran 2 her, a pot broken piece, was stuck in her foot. she was wearing his kurta, whch cvrd her upper thigh, due 2 da big size of it, it is hanging dwn 1 of her shoulder. Shaan took her in his arm, keep hr on centre of bed..he kept her on bed and sit with her, she was screaming in pain. he was about 2 take out da piece, but she grab his hand and push him. he knew dat she is so coward, she never let him do. bt he has 2 do, he pushed him, she fall on da pilow, immediately he put thigh on her bare thigh, and 1 arm on her 4 cntroling her. with a jerk he took out. she screamed and start resisting badly. he lay dwn and hug her tightly 4 calm dwn her. hi swhole body cvrd her soft elgent body. she also hug him tightly, he pulled her 2ward him hardyly.

Khanak: oouch..
Shaan: damn it, why u got hurt alwys ? stupid y u cnt care ur self?
Khanak(wsper) bcoz u alwys leave me.
Shaan:mv her chin up, i will nvr leave u...
and started kissing her, her tears, eyes ,nose, cheeks, his hot lip kiss has a magic whch mad her lost. he ws nt abl 2 stop himself kissing hr sfuctvly, cold soft skin, his kisses was soft bt deeper as cud possible .
his lips reached her, he cressed her lips with his lips. she moan , she pulled him and he kisd her... as he kisses hr strnger , stongly he mvd his hand and rubbed her each part... dy apart bcoz of breath, bt Shaan kisng hr cntnusly on hr neck shoulder, or whrevr he cud reachh. she softly kiss his chest, closing her eyes and give up 2 his hot body.
dy made love whole night, express deir feeling 4rm action...bt even a life is nt enough 4 telling "how much i care about you, how much i love you "

AFTER 1 MONTH

Shaan is waiting 4 khanak on da set in shimla , he iz gng 2 met her after 1 mnth , dat morning wen he got up, she already left. he was very ashamed of wht he did , so he ddnt call her till 3 days, bt wid courage wen he try, she had already left 4 u.k 2 his brother. he tried his best bt no use. 2dy he was gng 2 met her, dis is his only last chance... he just wanted 2 tell her , dat each moment widout her he fells " a day widout u is like a year widout rain".

he found out, she is in makeup room. he entrd and got freeze 2 see her, he still nt belving his luck. he came 2 senses wen he heared da last sentence of her 2 whm she was talkng on cell. " she is pregnant, pregnant of his child."

Khanak turn back, and shocked 2 see Shaan. his teary eyes telling her, he had listnd da whole convo...
Khanak: wo...sha,..
Shaan: u r pregnant? why u ddnt bother 2 tell me??
Khanak: Shaan dekho , jo kuch bhi hua use bhool jao , tumhari movie release hone wali he, golden opportunities tumhara wait kr rhi hen, abhi to tumhe buht kuch bnna...

Shaan: wht about u?
Khanak: she knew , she cant lie 2 him. Shaan us rat mere emotions mujh pr heavy hogay the( turn her back) , men tumhe face nhi kr skti thi, men buht embarace thi, men janti thi tum mujh pr gussa ho, apni stupidity ki waja se tumhe kho chuki hun. bt in dis 1 mnth, i hv realizd, wht i hv 2 do, i m gng back 2 u.k 4rever, i knw , i nvr dreamt of it, bt look like my all dreams r fullfil, i can feel u inside me, and i cud spend my whole life wid our baby...

Shaan mvd 2ward her: i will never leave u.
Khanak: no Shaan ,it wasnt ur mistake,u cant spoil ur future jus bcoz of"1 night"...
Shaan:just it was JUST A NIGHT..?

AFTER 8 YEARS

mom hurry up we r waiting..
Khanak: ya coming prince.
prince:krish, sur, u r again fightng on remote.

sur: i m elder 2 u 5 mnutes, gv it 2 me.

prince's cousin: dnt fight gv me , just see yar , in dis movie hero, heroine looked like ur parents naa?

Khanak looked da t.v, blockbaster RBO was on t.v. ya right hr movie..
Shaan come behnd her, keep her arms khanak around her stomach whch she is keeping 4 mnth angel in it.
Shaan: hwz was ur day sweetheart?
Khanak: like urs.
prince shouted on his cusins: lgte hen, bt ye parnts nhi hen, agar wo actor hote to yahan u.k men kyn hote? i bet u, wo to ek dailouge bhi nhi bol skte.

Shanak r watchng their 7 yrs smart kid.
Khanak: ur son iz such a jerk, like u...
Shaan(crease his neck wid nose): ya my all chldrn r like me bcoz, dear wifey u all time stared at me, evn in pregnancy so dis is a result.

Khanak giggle: smart, remember hw ppl said us fool, about leaving evrythng ,get married . thy wr sayng u lost ur treasure opportunity...

Shaan: dy were fool, dy ddnt knw v got da treasure of both wrlds, u, me 2gether , prince my 1st son, krish, sur and nw da 4th on da way.

Khanak: u remembrd hw we fought dat it wud be boy or girl?.. in my 2nd delvry ? and v got twins, and nw me sure dis last time, grl,so cmplt family.
Shaan kissd hr shoulder and whisper in a seductv way: well nt sure , i want moreee
Khanak turnd 2 him gv him slap on his chest.
Khanak:"besharam"
Shaan: I LOVE U
Khanak:I LOVE U 2
dy kissed , bt i mv my camera otherwise u will say"kitne besharam hen"
hope u like, and hv 2 like bcoz i made alot of effort. and if u like so dnt be KANJOOS press like button,and cment. waitng impatiently

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Posted: 14 years ago
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First of all I loved Shanak being actors...
we can relate it to all actors lives... Ahem ahem...
U hv broght ur oS in the right time...😉

Wow...!!!!!!👏
ppl who work together for a long time...
n suddenly their so called saath ends...

They must be feeling terrible... I mean in the 2 year span they ll fight... laugh... pacify each other... n share many more experiences together...

Shaan beating the parallel lead for misbehavin with Khanak... whoa😲!!!!!!

so this was about two ppl who realise their feelings for each other after their separation... which is believable...
but they take their time to confront each other...
and after that...
they live happily ever after... 😃

seems like u hv posted the OS in a hurry...
Do edit it whenever u get time...😊
n keep the OSs cumin...


Edited by hotchpotchRBO - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was awesome girl

Its really diff from other OS but has got the essence of RBO and SHANAK

Kool they ar actors and 've started feeling for each other... chalo if yasharan dont feel we still 've the os to keep us happy

penned beautifully they way he cared and ran out to pick her up

wht ever happened was shanaklicious as ur all updates luved it,

really cute he hold one crer of towel and gave her the other even more cute her helped her dry her hairs face... aww scared of dark... that means more hot romance.

wow the broken pot piece was magical it led them to paradise.

wohoo she's pregnant... but he luvs her and wont leave her...

already 3 and 4th on the way... still he wants more... 8 yrs an romance is still on its peak

lovely... keep updating the ff and write os frequently.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww u guys loved it yup i wrote in a hurry :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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tia ...
it was beautiful👍🏼
it must be so difficult for the actors to leave each other's company after working for 12-14 hours a day for 2 years😔

it was like a movie😍

excellent writing👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hei tia,
that was so wonderful..
shanak's last but one shot n they already feel like missing the other..
shaan couldn't understand the feeling n he left the place without waiting for khanak..
but when she called him he was there for her as he knows she is afraid of dark n all..
so they get to spend lone time together in his house and ended up making love..
khanak n shaan were quite embarrassed abt wat happened n khanak left his home before he got up n he didnt contact her for 3 days n after that she was out of reach..
when they r here for their final shoot he badly wanted to see her n get to know that he is going to be a father n khanak didnt want to put the blame on him for wat happened n she tried to hide it from him..
the way u wrote is wonderful..
now she is expecting 3rd kid..(prince is considered their 1st kid..so the expected baby becomes 4th)..haaye ram..poor khanak..n we very know that shaan is besharam n he wanted more..
kids seeing rang badalti odhani in tv n their discussion over it was cute..so they r in uk leaving their acting career behind..
gr8 going tia..

Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey its really gud .nice to see shaan sacrifiing his career for her sake and making a family with her .3 in 8 yrs and more to come hehe loved it .loved the background of the actors the way they feel when its the last day of their movie and all loved the events that happened during the night .well written
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was so emotional yaar...luvved it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww sweety it was beautifully wriiten the emtion ...living without ecah other v bachre shnak love ur story it was dran good and 4 kids lolz shann and kahank r too toomuch lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
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grt os luved it... i know many people realise there feeling for each other after sepration loved the concept ...keep writing more os

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