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Originally posted by: abhaylover

alrite i was thinking same but it is sad huh !!!

srry not today 2morrow 3 update's pakka rite knw i have to concentrate on the os

Originally posted by: abhaylover

srry not today 2morrow 3 update's pakka rite knw i have to concentrate on the os

CHAP 15

Fantastic tia

The secret smile for shaan … shweet

Dinner at beach, mid nite picnic and the sun rise… em sure it was the most beautiful sunrise they 've seen … coz they were together

Aww.. miss alluwalia is so emotional… well true uit was not another movies it was kal ho naa hoo.

Well the way he asked her consoled her was super cute…. The lap part… haye…. The ultimate romantic guy…. but of course teasing her has to be part of their every conv.

The pillow hitting part… cute… and they wht happened at the sectional was exactly I hoped for. Gurl blv me I just thought that he'll be with her on bed in the next one no matter it was a sectional but it was shanaklicious.

Wohoo… finally he realized that he luvs her and thinks that she feels sumthing two. A real mature guy with passion luv everything…. A perfect guy.

Nice that rashi knows as they both get along well. Hot iron….. man it was funny bit really there was no better ans I guess.

The dress u described was awesome no doubt she was luking breath taking and only he asked her the third time I thought he'll take her somewhere else…. But he's a gentleman

She looked at him where he was in crowd and saw him looking at her with intensity… imagining his intense gaze make my heart do flip flops.

Alrite then ms.alluwaluia complaint that her bf is not giving her time… a veryu cute was to complaint by sitting in lap… how can he refuse anything at that moment.

Well, megha entry…. Ms.alluwalia back to herself that how sum1 can take decisions for her But that's ok he knows how to handle her and handled her in a cute way making her realize how talented and imp she is. Happy that megha is not goin to cum in between.

"Our hotel is going to be amazing because my Khanak is going to make it amazing."…. super cute.

Yeah there is only one way they make up for each other… and we luv it.

Gud that she's luvin her work and the hotel project is going gud. Em not writing much abt the office work… but everything is superb.

CHAP 16

Gurl u'll kill me wid the updates… well two in a row is a treat.

It was superb.

No doubt gurls act like bridezilla in dealing with teh wedding prep. I luv the bond between khanak and aria and really nice that even shaan get along wid her. Very right u can't help but like aria…. After all she make khanak realize the attraction.

Their conv was really shweet and gurly and the STAGETTE part was awesome.

Oh man he walked in just at the right moment…. Nice conv between aria and shaan … I luv she doesn't beat around the bush………… she directly asked him and his response was to die for

"I love her more than I thought it was possible to love someone…………….. luved it😍

He really knows how his khanak is goin to react …

Shanak conv was super cute and for the first also about others

Wht happened next was totally shanaklicious and I luved and thoroughly enjoyed reading every bit of it………… Hell no the door was open…. Aww he shd have shut it but dats k the wedding prep was done along wid the cuddling and lounging so its pretty gud.

The reason he asked her for his tie was superb. Shoo cute she started tying up for him. Hmmm jealousy factor …. But he always calm her in a cute and romantic way…. Hell rashi kyun aagai….

Wht happened in the office was quite sad and dramatic bit all is well if it ends well he said and she realized that she luvs him.

Wow they both cant wait to tell each other.

Man fab description of dress she must have looked stunning and it was obvious for shaan to drool over her. The song u selected was perfect for the situation. Gud that she get along well wid his frndz.

Yeah………. Yippee🥳……….. she confessed thank God no irrational behavior of trying that the other person shd say first…………….. Atleast she made it and he hugged her.

Wht happened next was really sad… I actually felt bad… aria is a luvable character… hoping for the best.

Continue soon.. eagerly waiting for the next update and the OS. Plz pm me if psbl.

Hey Tia,

Hey Tia,

Awesome update dear'''beautiful. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

I am back with my comments on part 16'..btw thanks for the Pm'.🤗well dear I am ur regular follower so don't make ur self stress just post updates for us I'll catch it without fail. Thank u for the awesome updates.👏 👏 👏

Loved the part 16...you have amazing writing skills,⭐️ the updates was caring yet a bit scaring.😉 Loved the convo between khanak & Aria. Khank syas her friend is behaving like bridezilla 😆...i was like wait for your turn you are going to behave the same. 😆 They are discussing about evevry little thing for the wedding...thats so sweet. Wow Shaan is also bonded well with Aria. Loved the way he authoritively grabbed phone from her & talked to Aria like its his friend not her. He is so comfortable with her he even confess his feeling for khanak to her.😊 Loved their convo.& their Romance. Khanak stops him for going further & tells him that the door is open...Oops. the wedding prep was done along wid the cuddling and lounging by shaan & Khanak.😍

Haaye they are cutest shaan came to khanak asking for his Tie...very much like a Hubby-Wifey convo...loved Khanaks line. "Seriously shaan what would you do without me." Khanak doesn't like Megha ... Same here 😡...loved their sweet convo. Shaan was about to confess his feelings but yet again disturbed by Richa.😡 Shaan thinks that he will tell her in the evening. But office sence was dramatic & bit upsetting, Khanak gets upset seeing Megha with shaan & after that shaan also gets angry on her.😭 Poor guy take out his business frustration on Khanak, ...Loved the jealousy track. It made her understand her true love for shaan.

Khanak decides to confess her feeling in the angagement party...She gets ready for Shaan & not for the party.😉 fantastic description of dress she must have looked so pretty & stunning and it was obvious for shaan to be Fida on her camplitely. She dicided to show her feelings through dance & Song...Loved the song & ur discribption.👏...their eye gestures,,,,the way they were looking at each other...Finally Shaan gets to know that she loves him.🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

Shaan decided to let her know his feelings too...but destiny has other plans for him or should I say u have other plans for him. Finally u droop the bomb by saying that "This morning Aria tried to kill herself." ...man that's really sad...i liked Aria.😭

Why I am having that feeling ki because of Aria incidence Khanak will get aloof & make distance from shaan 😭(ofcourse for the few updates ...until she will realize that she will not be able to leave without him & he will never can do something like Kabir) ...coz the reason behind Aria commiting sueside is Kabir.😡 Hey guys please this is just my imagination & bakwas result of my vellapanti 😳 😉so please don't throw chappls at me 😆...& Tia dear please prove me wrong,,,,,,don't want them to stay apart.😭

Waiting for the next part ...Please post it jaldi jaldi..😳 😃

Love

Pranjal.