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Posted: 14 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: abhaylover

hey i dun wanna get killed for not updating 1 day so i will be updating 3 chappy but it will take tym nah so w8 haan not like 1 hour just 5,6 min hehe its coming up soon !!an dyeah i introduce megh she will make entry veryyy late


I can wait the whole night...
waise bhi i dont sleep b4 4am...

Take ur time...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Ammu_SunshYn


3 updates? 😲

yay! 🥳

btw Tia, do watch the ShaNak kiss! uff! 😳


ammu... u wanna kill me...?
God...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
tia gal... watch it...n u ll get sum idea bout our picturisation of shanak kiss...

m dead allready...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#93

opps wrong 1 update comin up

Edited by abhaylover - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ohh em really sorry actually i have written first 10 chappy on arjun and arohi than i came to know that the forum is dead so i thought to turn in my next fav couple shanak srry haan editing mistake 'em relly soory update is coming up :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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chapte 8 sorry for the arjuhi thing !!!!! a bit confusion :)

Shaan was not happy. He had barely slept. Now that his vacation had been unpleasantly and unexpectedly extended he had to rearrange things back in Mumbai, he needed to go over important project details with his Director of Finance. Details he should be going over in person but instead he was going to be gallavanting to Goa because Princess Khanak wants to go on vacation. Isn't she already on vacation?? Hasn't she been on vacation for the last 4 months?! But ofcourse what Khanak wants Khanak gets and now he's going to have to put up with her demands for the next 6 months too. Shaan had finally gotten everything organized and had hurriedly packed and after saying bye to his family he had the driver drop him off at the airport. Once at the airport what greeted him was the whole Ahluwalia Clan. They were acting like they were leaving for 4 months not 4 days! Shaking his head he walked over to Sid uncle who welcomed him with a big smile. Shaan looked around and zeroed in on his nemesis. She was texting something rapidly on her I phone and hadn't noticed him yet. This gave him a chance to have a good look. She looked so pretty he couldn't help thinking. She was wearing a pair of skinny jeans with a long thin blue shirt. The shirt fell over one shoulder leaving it exposed. She wore a belt that hung low over the shirt and jeans with ballet flats on her feet. Her hair was tied up in a high ponytail. Large sunglasses covered her eyes. She was completely engrossed in her texting and every once in a while would smile at something she read. Shaan wondered who she was texting so rapidly, was it a guy he thought. As soon as the thought entered his head he pushed it out. Why would he care if she was texting some guy. Actually he wanted her to, maybe then she'll run off and get married to him and this 6 month prison sentence Shaan has been handed down would be shortened.

Goodbyes were said and the group boarded their flight. Khanak found her seat and went back to texting her best friend Aria in Vancouver. Aria's boyfriend had finally proposed to her last night and Aria was sharing the details of the proposal. Khanak was so excited for her. Looking up she saw Shaan walking down the aisle and she couldn't help but remember her own supposed engagement or rather business proposal. How sad she thought. When she was actually proposed to she wanted it to be extemely romantic. Seeing the little smile playing on Khanak's face Shaan wondered what she was thinking about. Shaking his head he went back to looking for his seat 27, 28, 29B. 29B right next to 29A which at present was taken by Khanak Ahluwalia. Just wonderful he thought looking down at her. As Shaan made a move to sit down Khanak looked up at him, "what are you doing?" " This is not your seat." "Riya is sitting here." Khanak quickly said. "No Riya is already seated next to your cousin Sanchit." "This is my seat" Shaan responded. "No there has been a mistake, I can't sit with you for 3 hours." "Nope not going to happen." Shaan on the other hand made himself more comfortable in his seat. "Feel free to move" was his response as he buckled up and then closed his eyes. Khanak stared at him for a minute with disbelief. Did he just blow her off...HOW RUDE! Khanak got up and squeezed her way by him, shoving him as she went. The loser didn't even open his eyes. None of her cousin's would trade seats with her because they were either listening to music together or playing cards or as in the case of her cousin Priya "Shaan was too HOT" she'd be too nervous to sit next to him. At that answer Khanak just rolled her eyes and threw her hands up in the air. USELESS! Her family was useless! Khanak looked around and saw the flight was full expect for a man who was sitting by himself picking his nose...EEEW! Khanak walked back to her seat. "EXCUSE ME" she said as she tried to get by. But Shaan's legs were too long and taking up too much space. "EXCUSE ME"!!! She practically screamed at him. Again no answer. Frustrated she started shoving his legs aside and trying to get by Shaan when she lost her balance and fell into his lap. Shaan opened his eyes and Khanak was in his arms. They stared at eachother until the air hostess told them to get their seat belts on..but not before giving Shaan a once over and a sly smile. HELLO Khanak thought I'm sitting in his lap and you're checking him out you besharm girl! With that thought Khanak pushed away from him and fell back into her own chair. Shaan just looked at her, shook his head and promptly closed his eyes again. Khanak spent the first hour shoving Shaan's head from her shoulder. Everyime he'd fall asleep, his head would somehow fall onto her shoulder. Khanak would with great pleasure take her hand and push his face away from her. Waking him up everytime.

Shaan was getting irritated now. "Khanak what is your problem" he snapped. "You" Khanak said without looking up from her magazine. "Oh really well the feeling is mutual but what is your problem now." "Because of you I have not slept properly in two days." "I thought I might get some rest on this flight but ofcourse you're making that impossible too." "You can sleep but the second your sleep interferes with my personal space I will not tolerate it" she said nonchalantly. "How is my sleep interfering with your personal space" Shaan practically yelled at her. " I don't want you touching me Shaan" Khanak responded. "Oh, I see... Khanak does my touching you make you nervous?" Shaan questioned. Khanak quickly looked up. "In your dreams, your touching me has no effect on me." "Alright Khanak let's test that theory of yours." Khanak stared at Shaan for a few seconds before responding. "What do you mean "test" she said. Well like this, and Shaan touched her lightly on the arm, "Anything" he asked? "Nothing but repulsion" she answered back. Hmm...then Shaan trailed his finger down her arm to her hand giving her goosebumps. Anything now he asked huskily. "Nope" Khanak responded slowly. Then he brought her hand up to his mouth and lightly ran his finger on her wrist and then kissed her pulse point. "Anything now Khanak" he said his deep sexy voice. Khanak just stared at him and then slowly shook her head. Her pulse was racing she was sure he could feel it holding her wrist. Then he bought his face so close to hers and blew on the side of her neck, just as he was about to kiss her neck they were interrupted by the airhostess. "Would you two like a drink?" she asked. Khanak and Shaan both looked at her dazed but Shaan snapped out of it first. "I'll have a vodka no ice" he said. Khanak looked at him and was tempted to say the same for me. "I'll have a glass of white wine please". Something to calm her nerves she thought.

What had almost happened there Shaan thought. What started out as a lesson for Khanak had become something else entirely. He's been with other girls but for some reason Khanak could just get under his skin. Khanak quickly put her earplugs on and closed her eyes she didn't even want to think about what they were doing and almost did in the middle of a full airplane.
The rest of the flight passed without Shaan and Khanak speaking again. It was safest that way they both thought.

Goa was beautiful. Paradise Khanak thought as she looked outside at the beach from the Villa they were renting. She couldn't wait to get onto the beach. The next 4 days were going to be all about relaxing, and partying. She ran up to her room and opened up her suitcase and found her swimsuit . Once she had changed she tied a sarong around herself, grabbed her flip flops and her beach bag and told everyone to meet her on the beach when they were ready. Shaan couldn't wait to get out there too, but ofcourse he'd stay on the opposite side of the beach that Khanak would be on. Now that he was in Goa he could appreciate all that it had to offer, including the gorgeous women. Shaan too got ready and headed for the beach but with one stop first, the beach bar. He ordered a drink and as he looked out at the beach he saw what can only be described as a goddess coming out of the water. She was wearing a white bathing suit . sun shone down on her as she was walking out of the water and her long wet hair hung down her back. All Shaan could do was stare, and then he paused, took off his sunglasses and could not belive who it was.. Khanak! Then he noticed that there were other guys that had stopped to stare at her too. What the hell was she wearing he thought angrily and what were these guys looking at. He quickly walked over to her. "Khanak everyone is looking at you, cover yourself up" he said. Khanak was shocked. "Are you kidding me Shaan, look around you most girls are wearing bikini's here." "And this is a beach what else would I wear?" "I don't care" Shaan said. "Look at the leach staring at you? " "Wait a second let me go give him something to stare at" Shaan said as he headed in the guys direction. Khanak caught Shaan's hand and pulled him back. "Stop it Shaan" "Who looks at me is none of your business." "So lay off." "I'm here to have a good time I don't need you babysitting me" Khanak said angrily. Khanak and Shaan both stared at eachother for a minute before Shaan stomped away. What the hell are you doing Shaan he asked himself as he pounded back his drink. But he didn't leave until he saw that Khanak's other cousins had joined her. Then he headed over to the far side of the beach.

The afternoon passed too quickly and the group headed back to their Villa to get ready for the evening. They were going out for dinner to a nice seafood restaurant and then out for a night of dancing and drinking. Khanak was feeling pretty mellow from the sun and from the drinks she'd already consumed. The fact that she hadn't seen Shaan all afternoon helped too even though she had found herself looking for him more then once and wondering where he went. Just as they got back to the villa Khanak noticed Shaan talking to someone. He wore shorts and no shirt and just like last time she couldn't help but stare. He looked incredibly hot and so did the female he was laughing with. OH Khanak thought who was that. The girl was very attractive and she was wearing a bikini. My swimsuit needed to be covered up but look at Mr.Singhania flirting with bikini models Khanak thought angerily Then Khanak saw the girl write something on a piece of paper and put it in Shaan's hand and then reach over and give him a kiss on the cheek. Shaan gave her this boyish crooked half smile before he walked away from her. Khanak saw red, he was such a hypocrite. Everything was okay for him, but no one was even allowed to look at her. Oh she was going to give him a piece of her mind alright. Shaan had already gone into his room and was getting ready to take a shower when he head banging on his door. He opened his door to find Khanak looking fit to be tied. She pushed her way into his room. Shaan shook his head. Now what, he thought. He closed the door knowing that there would probably be shouting and there was no need for everyone else to hear. "Yes Khanak what can I do for you" he said. "What you can do for me is stay the hell away from me" she practically screamed. " I thought I already did that this afternoon" he reponded. "Yes, but not before you came over and almost embarrased yourself and me!" "If that guy was checking me out that's my problem." "I want him to check me out." "And you're such a hypocrite." "The way you were flirting with that scantily clad bikini model." "It was disgusting." Now Shaan was mad, Khanak was always just running her mouth and half the time she didn't know what she was saying. "Khanak I wasn't flirting with that girl, we were talking." "Talking my foot" Khanak snapped. "If you two were any closer you'd need to get a room." At this point Khanak and Shaan were standing so close and both were very angry. "Except if you two did get a room, you'd probably not know what to do in it" Khanak taunted. Shaan saw red and at the moment he reached over and grabbed Khanak's hair and brought her face close to his. "Khanak I'll show you what I know and don't know" and with that he pressed his lips against hers. The kiss was supposed to be a hard punishing lesson but the second their lips touched everything changed. Khanak melted into his arms and Shaan deepened the kiss. Shaan pulled Khanak tighter against his chest and before Khanak could think about it she was kissing him back. A warm shiver ran up her spine. The kiss could have lasted seconds or minutes of even hours Khanak didn't know, what she did know was that she didn't want it to stop. Shaan could feel Khanak's hands in his hair. Even if he wanted to he couldn't pull away, infact he pulled her even closer applying even more pressure making him want her even more. When at last they pulled away they were both panting and staring at eachother not saying anything. The ringing of a cell phone is what brought them back to reality. Khanak quickly grabbed her phone and ran out of the room. She couldn't believe what just happened between her and the monster and worse she couldn't believe what she wanted to happen. She needed to clear her head and fast. This would not do, not do at all. If she started any type of relationship with Shaan she knew her dad would have her married to him before she knew what hit her.

ok part 8 coming up again sorry !!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
Good one !

The Kiss was hot !
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
wow tia,
awesome..
a hottt kiss..
atarted with her n ended up passionately..
bring it on..we r here for the next part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
hey tia!
was making the siggy ! gonna read the update now ...
hows this?


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Posted: 14 years ago
#99

they'll come around..might be giving u time to update..but we r crazy so we r here..
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Posted: 14 years ago
another one!

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