-SS- O Saathi Re INTERVAL part-pg 36

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Posted: 14 years ago

#281

is she preggers?...iska news?

oh i feel bad for her...yeh kaisa interval hai? you've gotten a bit too much into his character writing it...uski tarah hamein torture...lol

excellent as always...

need i even say pm me?...but in case you don't...lets just say..my people..know people...:)

enjoy the travels!!

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purvimeh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#282

Saazy

Tera lambwala update weekend pe... Saying this read 3 chaps & u have thrown me back in Golden RBO days... Those were the days.. weekend pe wapas will be back !

I think U and Ads shd shift this IF FF section as not many are able to read it else where...

come back soon n be safe!

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soni4eva

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Posted: 14 years ago

#283

luvly update relii relii sad n heartbreakin

plzz cont soon x

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Ujjwala

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Posted: 14 years ago

#284

Yet an other amazing update my dear...
Loved the way you brought in the emotions, frustration, pain, anxiety, helplessness which is common in any relationship ...
when we by mistake bump into anybody on the street we say sorry .. we are so polite to somebody unknown... But we hardly do it with our loved ones ...we expect them to understand everything by themselves.. we take them for granted... and we end up hurting them ... by the time we realize it wud be too late to take our words back... You have picturised it so well... Kudos...
will wait for you to come back and continue ...
Keep us posted...

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SachDJ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: saaaz
Thanks to every one of you who commented..

I am posting what I call an INTERVAL part of this story..

The reason I am calling it an INTERVAL is because your responses shall help me decide on whether I continue this to the next level..or not..

I return from my travels (work related..not a holiday) by August 2nd..Look out for this space then..

PLEASE PM ME if yu would like to be notified on where and when I shall continue this story..

I propose to also start an amnesia related story (request by Simple) on shanak..but I have not decided whether it shall be here or another platform..

in the meantime enjoy the INTERVAL PART OF O saathi Re..

Saaz madam...Ab PM karna padega hume aapke updates ke liye? Teeling you again...continue please, please pretty please. And yes agar kahi aur likhne gayi aur bataya nahi to main tujhe chondungi nahi...I will track you down and ufff who I am kidding...lawyer se panga kaun leta hai...

Pm karna, I will follow you where ever you decide to write...

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SachDJ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#286

Loved the update...Shaan ka torture continues...bechari khanak, it is finally dawning on her that what direction his mind is wandering in...she so wants to talk...One thing I have complain about...saari important conversation tere characters ki interrupt ho jati...most of the time...and seriously, I get maha upset. All your stories...everywhere😊, too real. And interruptions bhi good ones...kaam ke calls...nothing of the mkting kinda faltu calls...

I like it...😛

I love the way you are writing Shaan for this part...really awesome...give him a break soon...

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schaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#287

Saaz ,

I have never posted a reply to your stories but have read them faithfully ...and enjoyed them tremendously. It was a project for me though with the hindi words.. but i learned a lot from you and the show . I have to compliment you on your style of writing ..its so beautiful .. like poetry..so serene and gentle ; with characters haunting you with their presence long after you have finished reading . I always want to know how you manage all those beautiful conversations in your head,and if they ever overlap in to your personal life. I know you are taking a hiatus ...but plse do continue to write after that ...its what keeps me sane amongst all the frenchies I have to deal with .

luv

Schaz

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iluvmanar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#288

oh..thanks dear 4 this update...this is superb..

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dishbhan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#289

Great update!

Finally she is questioning him ... and he is still not opening up to whats happening between them ... his anger is not understood by her ...

She will go to Dhulwadi while he goes on some training? for which company, Sunil's or some other? Where is he going?

I dont like the distance put in by ego ... pls bring him back to normal soon... hope he understands she is not at fault.

Will wait for your next update or PM on the location where you are gonna keep updating.

~Cheers,
Dish

Edited by dishbhan - 14 years ago