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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: saaaz

AUTHOR"S NOTE:



Okay I guess this is queschen time..

I had initially planned for the next part to be the final part. However, I have received several PMs since the time I have posted the last part to make it longer or convert it into an FF..

THe reason I had started this story was because I had some time before I travel on work..and by the time I come back, I suspect that the forum shall loose some of its regulars (which it already has)..a lot of my readers PM me their comments becos they don't want to be on the forum any longer..and of course a lot of my readers who comment here get specially thanked for the same..

I guess what I am asking is- what would you prefer?..

a. I end it with the next part

b. or I come back end of the month and continue it..

worst case scenario..if the forum is dead by the time I am back, I shall post the final part..if not, I shall continue..let me know your thoughts..I need to have at least 30 responses saying what they want.. for me comments are my only inspiration..so the more people comment..the more inspired I shall be to continue..

lots of love
S

I'm little biased towards the puntar gang and Katra.. so my suggestion would be to end this.. come back after a month and start Katra season 2..
guys.. pls no tomatoes,eggs... etc..
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Posted: 14 years ago

b. or I come back end of the month and continue it..

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 14 years ago
Shalini... Hi5...

Even im biased towards katra katra...

If u'l start katra part 2 when u return then end dis one otherwise continue... Coz dis one is also really good... *Ducks from all shoes flying towards me*

@update... Awesome... Loved it...

Male ego ...

Awww i feel bad fr khanak..

Continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Saaz,

Sorrry for the late reply as I was super busy. But the update was Awesome fantastic. I am felling like I am reading story based on "Abhimaan" film. The pride……his male ego……… it truly reminds me of this film.

Poor Shaan is facing do much he really need to talk to her. I know its just a passing pharse he will recover from it. Actually ur update indicates a real life persons. & their emotions. But I always love The way they understands each other. Sometimes really felt bad for khanak but I know Shaan is there for her. I have no doubts abt his capabilities.

Khanak is ready to have Baby Wow. The best part of the update was when both were discussing abt the baby. Loved Khanak's dialogue. Loved their chat.

Truly justifies the tittle for this SS " O Saathi Re"

Please continue soon

Love

Pranjal.

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Posted: 14 years ago
I was listening to O saathi re today...brought a smile to my face...Jaldi vapaas aa aur update kar...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fab sazy👏👏

u've penned it perefctly each and vern part

his frustration anger... his behavior was kinda expected

sunil is alwayz after him... krodh to hoga na


trying to speak shudh hindi em impressed wid my self😛

maintaining hi pride being aloof around her
😒

the feind or frnd... em confused as well as sad😕😒

but he alwayz make up to her in the bedroom na... em happy😊

even when he is frustrated restless ... he cant remain angry wid her forgets everything coz of her smile listens to her patiently ... all dis is to die for😍

dere conv was shweet


She: Kitna chotha..kitna rolu polu..main tho dekhte hi..(hugs herself): pagal ho gayee..Kya aapko bhi bache ache lagte hain?

He: (stares at her innocent face, smiles): Hmm..ache lagte hain..lekin (pulls her nose): tumse zyaada nahin... super cute😉



their little bit of romance is hot as alwayz☺️ ... shanak hain to intense and passionate hona to obvious hai😉

He: tumhare language mein bol doon?!..(his lips on her neck): Shubh kaam mein dairee kyun?? ... hayeela

hmm... nastaha kahan se aagai yaar😲

P.S sazy plz continue when u cum back... em in luv wid ur writing

continue soon


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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey,

For the last 2 parts ... loved the part where Shantanu just accepts the fact that she has the ideas and encourages her to give it... but once accepted feels humiliated that clients are asking for her and he is not getting the due importance.

Child and pregnancy track coming up ... waiting for it ... wanna know how Shaan will handle the stress of work and a pregnant wife!

Waiting ... where's today's update?

~Cheers,
Dish
Edited by dishbhan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i know i knoww. i havent commented at all!! I am sorry.. but how can you end it?? please do continue and make it an FF i promise to comment every day i swear!!! sorry was really busy but i promise to comment for every update as soon as i get timee.. but dont end it i just read al of them and i love ittt please continuee!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks to every one of you who commented..

I am posting what I call an INTERVAL part of this story..

The reason I am calling it an INTERVAL is because your responses shall help me decide on whether I continue this to the next level..or not..

I return from my travels (work related..not a holiday) by August 2nd..Look out for this space then..

PLEASE PM ME if yu would like to be notified on where and when I shall continue this story..

I propose to also start an amnesia related story (request by Simple) on shanak..but I have not decided whether it shall be here or another platform..

in the meantime enjoy the INTERVAL PART OF O saathi Re..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Saaz! please continue this...take as much time as you want but please don't stop it here...

also please add me in your PM list :)

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