FF- Katra Katra- Part 25-141, Pt 26-145, Pt 27-148

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1101

that is the second thing he took of hers...

glad he realized his folly/why she was upset.

the balcony scene was...😍

and the house helps were super sweet! and that dadi2...

ab agla part...jaldi se:)

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1102

Saazy bahoot jaldi tera yeh thread bhi khatam hone wale hai!! We will need a new home then!! Yipppeee!!

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SachDJ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1103

Originally posted by: lghosh
Saazy bahoot jaldi tera yeh thread bhi khatam hone wale hai!! We will need a new home then!! Yipppeee!!

Kaal tak naya thread shuru...😊

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jyothi1989

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1104

god was off for tow days and here u are with 5 updates caught up with all of them hmmm .loved them all the best part was part 22 where she sings and they remember the night in the hospital goshhh👏 what a way to unfold the mystery of the night with the song splendid hatts of saaz loved it was totally swept by it ..there comfort level has been increasing with each passing day and i am loving it. there kisses there hugs evry is so bliss .i hope nothing serious happened btwn the friends
the visit to shaans house khanak being angry on him and all .shaan taking her to his room the balcony view the fear of heights and the assurance from him followed by the kiss is just bliss .her interaction with mads .every thing was so well etched loved it so much .i am going mad with this ff saaz cant wait for the next update fast.

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Pooja

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1105

" There's a piece of you that's here with me, It's everywhere I go, it's everything I see, Wwhen I sleep, I dream and it gets me by, I can make believe that you're here tonight "...

pehle dupatta n now payal...hmmm!!!

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destinylove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1106

saaz ladki hira hain.ur writing isf hira too 😊.loved the full episode 😊

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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1107

hei saaz,
lovely lovely update..
now he is able to understand y is she angry at him..(wat is this shaan?pahli baar bahu ghar aa rahi hai aur tum aise hi le aaya..she is already worried r anxious abt meeting ur family...she may be simple n elegant..however wont she wish to be presentable before them..may be in a saree..thats y she is angry with u..)
(now i have a doubt saaz..she knows abt shaan's financial status right?)
St.Anne's gang is having a party tonight n does shaan know abt this..may be sidhant called him to say abt that..but he didnt call him back na as he got distracted when khanak started to sing..doesn't nikita know that shaan is married now..she didnt mind khanak as a person even..ok let it be..
but shaan's daadi no.2 is happy for him..n he introduced khanak to her..khanak's namaste touched her..so shaan is starting to realise.."he realizes that she is special..he knew it all along..but right there he realizes that what he has known is true.." i loved it..
harilal is all set to welcome new bhabhi..shaan must have been ladla to them too..they r all happy to see her..they r so sweet to welcome the new bahu with arti..(khanak should be looking gr8 with the kumkum on her forehead..*sigh*)..they all dispersed to make food for them..
n shaan took her to his to room..to show the view of the sea which he thought she would love..she saying "Mujhe oonchayee se dar lagta hai..(holds his sleeve)" n he caringly putting his hand over her shoulder..loved those gestures and again she said his name.."Shaantanu..I think I can get used to it.." n there u go..another kiss..they kissed deeply..😳😳😍😍😍😍😍..i loved the way u narrated the kiss..n she hiding her face in the nook between his neck n shoulder..*sigh* i loved it..that would be a heavenly place for her n for him to hold her caressing her hair..again he wants to put their schedule back..(1st tripathi's dinner) now the poona trip..he is a absolute goner..
oh my god..u r jealous r wat..as khanak is getting all the attention n she is not minding u..wat an idea sirji.."He wishes his mom comes by..thats it all this junta shall disappear and his wife shall clutch to him..that would serve her right..for ignoring him.." (wat should i say here for madz..devil r god..i dont think she is bad..so let she be god..so now for shaan watever he thought GOD answered his prayers..)
khanak fidgeting seeing madz..wat did she actually felt seeing madz..shaan's worry abt the present situation written very well..but enlighten me..y did shaan think she is abt to cry..when khanak handled madz very well..she had initial nervousness of seeing her saasu ma in her home..but somehow i felt madz is trying to socialise with her..that is a huge step from her side na?
so she asked them to start soon if they r going by bike..thats sweet of her..i still have a feel its the plan of the friends to keep them close..
so sweet od shaan to drop by daadi no.2 when she was lost in her thoughts..loved these lines.."P Daadi: Ladki hira hai..

Shaan: (stares at Khanak): Janta hoon.."

wonderful update saaz..👏👏👏👏👏👏

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priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1108

Hey Saaz !

Sorry for being MIA !

Love the way they are giving eachother space ! Just because she is new in town he doesn chauffeur her around nor does she expect him to !

He doesn even accompany her to the mess ! And she doesn expect him !

She forms a good camaderie with the group on her own will not just because they are his friends !

Though the relationship was a forced one... rather the situation forced them to it .. they don complain " Why me : "

They have accepted the relationship though have no idea abt how to go abt it ! Yet they are ready to sail !

They really havent explored eachother yet but quite pleased with each other s company !

They don try to impress the other or try to show concern or empathy ! they are being just themselves which is more than enough to draw the other one close !

I m just stating what I like abt ur story and ur shanak !

The updates are rocking ! Makes me want for more !

I want more and more of the Katra !

Love
Priya

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PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1109

Hey Saaaz,

This is Annie here. I really appreciate the way you are weaving the story. Your Fan-Fiction is really a wonderful one. The characters, the atmosphere, the landscape, the suspense is really beautiful and encapsulating. In this :

Shaan: is somewhat different from the original character in the serial Rang Badalti Odhani, and I like it. This Shaan of yours is amazing, funny, cute, stupid, friendly...woah! Responsible...(which is a long story away for the present character in the serial, no offence), who wants to be something on his own efforts, n hardwork!! And most of all, supportive...even after marrying Khanak, he did not waver away from anything, instead he came along the same path as she and started supporting her unknowingly, but with his whole heart.

Khanak: is almost the same, as in the serial. She is coy, beautiful, decent, dignified, responsible, big-hearted, supportive, and a lovely, mind-blowing singer. This is nice to know that she'll be there too to support her married life with her husband, Shaan, by she, herself, earning too.

Khandelwals: They're being surprisingly supprotive too, after all that happened (the marriage of Shaan-Khanak, instead of, Suraj-Khanak). Love the way Akshay made Shaan realize (not actually, but told him) about his feelings for Khanak. Hope that Khanak too actually realises her love for Shaan.

Shaan's Gang: Whoa!! that one's really good!! I love all of 'em. Karthik, Murli, Harshad...etc., etc...all of 'em. Their just like today's boys - hogging on food, friendly all the time, actors, highly stupid, somewhat pervert...and lots more!!

Will be waiting for your next Update.😊