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mani is not updating here anytime soon..

Originally posted by: RB81

mani is not updating here anytime soon..

Originally posted by: Roshni_M

what? y? kyun? kaiko? kaisa?

ok i hope she updates TresPro atleast...

nope rosh..i asked her abt TresPro..at that time she said she will not be updating soon..dont know wat happened..wish she comes back here to update..

May be she is busy...

Hope she comes soon...

Excellent and Supperb Update manita
you show beautifully all emotions and expressions of khanak after she kissed to shantanu
and she said to herself !!!!!
shantanu and khanak conv. at party was amazing and wonderful
at last she relized that she is fall in love to shantanu..very interesting sitution !!!!!
waiting for next update !!!!

hi manita...i read all ur parts and i think u r simply great!!!!keep ur work up...can u add me in ur pm list pleaasseee?????

Hey Manita,

Originally posted by: preiti

Hey Manita,

I cant stop myself from appreciating you.I must say , you are a wonderful writer.Your narration made me lost somewhere in the dreamlands.I could visualize the scenes and scenarios between Shantanu and Khanak while reading everyline in the story.I feel that I am actually seeing them and the scenes between them.Everytime I read the parts of the story, they last in my mind for long and I could connect all the parts together and feel the magic that Shantanu and Khanak create.

Well to let you know, there are two songs that come into my mind and run in the background while I read your FF for different scenes.

1) -"Kitne dafe dil ne kaha, dil ki suni kitne dafe
Waise toh teri na mein bhi maine dhoondh li apni khushi
Tu jo agar haan kahe toh baat hogi aur hi"

-- When Khanak walk in the woods and Shantanu follows her and they land up in a talk walking togther for miles not realising the distance

2) "Mar jawaan, mar jawaan,
Tere ishq pe mar jawaan,

Bheege bheege sapno ka jaise khat hai,
Geeli geeli chahat ki jaise lat hai,
Soche dil ki aisa kaash ho,
Tujhko ek nazar meri talash ho,"

--- When Khanak thinks about Shantanu thogh she doesn't want to and unknowingly she keeps searching for him and feeling for him.

Keep up the good work!!

I am honoured Preiti...truly !!

I listen to music, almost always !!
and especially while writing I keep music on...the above two are beautiful songs and I love the feeling that you could connect to my story with music...

this is what prose should be...each individual reading it having his own interpretation and should relate to it in his own way...if at all he does !!😊

It's a huge compliment !!

mani aaweome updates khanak is such a lovely character in ur FF as she is in our show 😊

Manita diii