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-YasharanArshi- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Update Update Update ...

Kitne Baar Maaangu !!!
Hmmmppph !!!!
-Manita- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
I have written a small part of MRM...shall I post it ???

Edited by -Manita- - 14 years ago
shanakyasharan thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
yea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! do u even need to aask tht mani??????????????
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Manita-

I have written a small part of MRM...shall I post it ???

wat sort of ques is that mani..v r dieing to read urs..post it already..
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Posted: 14 years ago
POST KARO!!!!

I have to tell you sthing also...lol...Pehle post karo lekin :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
I was not planning to update but this update is the result of numerous pm's that I received from people asking for updates !!!

Each n every response, comment, like and pm is precious to me !!!

I love you all !!!

Thanks for liking last 4 parts of MRM ...I have written this in very less time...mainly due to the pressure of readers asking for updating...tell me if it is not upto the mark !!

Important - I am taking back all previous parts with each update and posting a gist of story there !!
All those of you who want to read older parts can pm me and i'll send you the link from where you can read all the older parts of Mere Rang Mein and Trespassers Prohibited !!!


Mere Rang Mein
Part 5




Edited by -Manita- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Manita-

I have written a small part of MRM...shall I post it ???

Ofcourse... U knw im so desperate to read d update dat im ready for a para lenght update also... Lol

Hey bhagwan this is Wat you call small update... Mani Di ur mad... And very sweet... Ok lemme read... Comment tomorrow...

*Edited*

mani di...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

LOVED the update very very much...

Finalyy khanak is realizing dat she is in love wid shaan...

der aaye durust aaye...😉

tsk tsk... bechaara shaan got a slap from shelly also...😆

bt this shelly also na she is mad... she thot of marrying shaan... hahahaha... and shaan got 24000 volts jaisa jhatka when shelly told dis to shaan...😆

khanak is listening to all dis... naughty girl... listening to other ppl talk... and having fun...😆

khanak hoping dat shaan doesnt see her was sooo cute...
whenevr i think i shud nt get caught that tym only sumthing happens n i get caught... i tell u that tym my bad also becomes kharab...

shanak talk was cuteness... loved it...

shaan suddenly realizes dat he is nt supposed to talk to her, nt to trouble her and think abt her, and his self respect... good he remembered... i was just thinking dat only...

shaan helping khanak to remove the insect was soo sweet of him...

when u said insect i almst screamed...i hate insects... im scared of them more than tiger and lions...

update the next part sooon di pleaj...
Edited by Roshni_M - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hei,
really mani..
thanks for updating..now i'll sleep happily..
*editing my comments as i read*
ahhh..khanak's present state of mind..she is tormenting herself for wat she feels now for SK n wat she decided previously regarding her marriage..
this said a lot.."she had dreamt of a Prince Charming…. who loved none other than her……to whom, she was the most special person on this planet !!"..may be for SK she may not be the 1st but she is special for him i think..(did he really loved others..)..her thought about "how can she fall for someone?……..how on earth can she fell for a bad boy !!"
so in a very short duration of just 6 days SK analysed abt her very well saying she never acknowledged the real feelings in her..
portrayal of khanak's mind 👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ mani..now the more tried to free herself out of his hold on her mind.. the more she was trapped..well said mani...
khanak never lifted her eyes off SK n he didnt give her a damn..there is really something abt this SK..
khanak couldn't even stand the thought of shelly n SK together..but she assumes..well this time lets see..she called shikha to give her company to return to the resort..
there she goes for another walk in the mean time while waiting for shikha..she heard whispers n thought it was shelly n SK..n she had all sort of emotions flowing thru..
wow!!!out of her behaviour she did hear wat was going on there..1st she confirmed it is shelly n SK..from their talk khanak should feel happy to some extent that he is not interested in shelly anymore..shelly wants SK to be a perfect boy friend..poor shelly..(look for someone else shelly as SK is now for only one person..his K)
marriage?really i'm also dumbfounded like shaan..
wow!!!shaan..he'll marry only he is in love with someone n shelly thought they r in love..really???now shelly got stumped with his answer..
shelly blamed shaan that he used her..wohh wohh wohh..wat was that girl?really u r impossible shelly..i feel she is over confident abt her..
wat?..shelly slapped him..😲😲😲😲😲😲 is she that perfect to do that to shaan..(i want to use all abusive words on her..)
khanak really felt happy..ahhh..ur prayers didnt help u from SK noticing u..
SK is giving her back wat she said him..he said her that he'll assume that she followed him..
really shaan didnt feel bad when she laughed at him..n he didnt even react to shelly for the slap..i feel SK is a gentleman..he reminded himself abt the promise n moved away from her..(kudos to u shaan for ur self control..)
hearing her scream he was near her at the spur of a moment..really he cares for her..(i'm loving this shaan mani...) something bit her..n she dont want him to see it n touch her..y did u think its abt u SK..its abt her SK..she cant control her anymore if u go too near..dont get her wrong yaar..see my thoughts "I trust you SK………but not myself…… I want to tell you how much I love you……but can't!!" u gave it in apt words..that is a wonderful writer..
*sigh* both of them didnt speak anything after this short encounter..
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 the part was no so short mani..thanks again for updating..mmmwwwaaa...
Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😍😍😍🤗 thnk u sooo much mani fr updating:)

it was simply superb...do u even frealise tht yr a master at ffs...not kidding u r n i love everything u write ...it was perfect n i cant stop thinking wat will follow next here:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ohk the first half of the story totally gave a way to smethng else ahem ahem..the typewala part was Hilarious...the bug bite i thought she was faking it but noo...it is as realistic as Tres Pro!update jaldi

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