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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

This is CRIMINAL !!!

You CANNOT stop here yarrr !!
OMG...U will update next part tomorrow???
*Does bhook hartaal* LOL !!



*joins her in the bhook hartaal*

Come on..ajj tho two updates banta hai...Pleej!!!


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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 56 B

Ajmera Corp HQ

7:20 PM, Friday May 13th.

He doesn't get up from his chair swivels it, slouching further on it, stretches his legs first then draws one up and places the ankle on a knee. Rotates his Timberland suede heel on the carpet.

Khanak: Its been 10 days since I saw (stretches it) my file! (smiles). I am possessive about my things. (smiles sweetly)

Shaan: For once you remember the date!

Khanak: looks like it.

Shaan: its in my trunk.

Khanak: Oh! Do you want to go get it? (cool unfazed)

Shaan: You might have to wait! (no "come on in""why don't you sit down")

Khanak: Or you can send it through inter-office mail?(readies to leave)

He knows if he pushes further, she will leave. Making her say why she is here would not get him anywhere. Grabbing the opportunity to spend the evening together would be the wisest thing a guy in his place would do.

Arches his brow in response as if asking her "So you will just leave now?"

Khanak:Ive had a long day! I have to go home now (lies)

Shaan: If you wait a minute, I can go grab it from the trunk. (hides a smile as he turns around towards the monitor). You can come in and sit if you like.

Khanak: Thanks! (He can hear her bangles vibrate softly as she walks, there is a L shaped corner, with two chairs for meeting guests, she seats herself in one, and looks at his wall. There are a few more pictures.

Khanak: You don't get a corner office? Arent you a Director?

Shaan: "Rahat is not big on hierarchical protocol Khanak (staring at his screen) His cube is also not by the window. Infact if you look around, there are conference rooms lining up the walls by the window. He treats his people well, pays them great. Excellent perks but none of that babugiri here." (sounds happy)

Khanak: That's nice!

Shaan: Did you come to see me? (not looking sideways at her)

Khanak: I thought being Friday nite, you might have checked out.

Shaan: So you were hoping not to see me? (amused)

Bites her lower lip, not sure how to respond. Chooses her fave activity staying quiet.

The airconditioner's blower resets itself and there is a full blast of cool breeze, her saree around her feet billows, along with her pallu, she elegantly pulls it all back together. He can't help but notice how she does that.

Shaan: You love wearing sarees? (instinctively)

Khanak: Aapko kaise maloom?

Smiles for her!

Khanak: I wont wear it if you don't like it (somber) (looking down @ her ring)

Turns toward her " You should wear what ever you like Khanak. I always do what I like. You should too" (simple, understated)

Khanak: Oh!

Shaan: Have you ever counted the number of "Oh!s" and "Umms" you say ina day.

Blushing shakes her head.😳😳

Khanak: I talk at work.

Shaan: Of course! (gently mocking)

She can hear the sign off music from Windows, her heart races, wondering if he will go with her or just come back and log back on.

She wont ask. He wont divulge. They tread the delicate rope in between. When they walk up to each other, they will turn around and walk away, only to do it all over again.

He is up, she gets up as if the chair shocked her. He smiles. Bends down to grab his leather laptop case, pushing his phone on the carpet.

Khanak: Oops!, (bends down to get it)

Hands it to him with her left hand, her pallu twirled around her wrist. It fans open and wraps his arm.

Khanak: Oops!

Shaan: You should add that to the word list (soft)

For a brief minute they are a foot apart, enjoying the sight of the other.

Two co workers walk by, chatting, turn around, notice her in his cube

Guy1 :Hey Gujral, headin out?

Shaan: Well'.. we'll see.

Guy2: Happy Friday man!(grins) (points with his eyes to Khanak, who is now looking at some books lining up a cube wall, books on Critical thinking, strategy and game plan etc)

Guy 1: Looks like a happy start to me! (winks)

Shaan is busy saving data onto a USB drive, he just laughs in ack.

Her arms are folded across her chest, hands rubbing her bare fore arms.

Khanak: I am freezing! Kitna thanda hai.

Shaan: There are fewer people to suck up the cold air (matter of fact)

He tucks his phone into his pocket, opens his drawer, picks up his sun glasses,srts it back, picks up his car keys, leaves the laptop case on the chair.

Shaan (walking up to her, leafing thru a book) :Shall we?

Looks up at him pleasantly, preoccupied in some thought, he is again struck by the face and those eyes.

Shaan: Your file?

Khanak: Ya!

They walk out together.

Paula is on the phone, she gives her a smug smile. Hers is bland like saying "I don't know if he will go with me"

The male admirer is happy to be waiting at the sight of her.

Shaan: Hang on a sec, let me go grab something. BRB

Khanak: Hmm

The guy actually walks up to her, and uses a line

Khanak has no idea who she is, he wants to know if she worked at Hafeez two years ago. She shakes her head in negative. He insists he has seen her some place. Asks her if he went to some famous architecture school in Pune.

Khanak has no idea. He wants to know if she works here. She again shakes her head.

He is amused asks her "You don't talk?"

Shaan responds with a "very rarely" from behind.

She turns around, and he is almost on her, he asks her with his eyes, who the guy is.

She says "I don't know! He knows me, he says (confused)

Paula has hung up " Sir, Varun will se you now"(snaps at the guy)

The guy reluctantly leaves her side.

Paula: Jaan you want to leave your things with me? I can lock it up?

Shaan is not angry nor amused at the guy's antics, just answers his phone when it rings, nods to her to get her things Monday?

Khanak, shaken out of her daze "Nahi Paula, mujhe Monday ko apne office jaana hai. Aaj main kaam par late ho gayi so seedhe aa gayi" (lies again)

Takes her things. Checks for text and voice mails. There are none.

Paula: I don't see you any more. Ab shaadi ke baad tum kab aayegi?

Khanak is mortified, "I have no idea, but I will see you once every week. How about that? (cuts a deal)

Paula: yep, until the baby arrives, then I will come see you! (hugs her and hangs on to the hug)😳😳

Khanak: There is no baby! You are funny! (leans on her chubby shoulder)

Paula: there will be, trust me! (whispers in her ear)❤️

Shaan:Hey, I thought I was your baby (hanging up his phone)

Paula: Not any more, dude! Its Khanak!

Khanak is happy he did not hear their previous exchange.

Paula: Get out of here you two. Its almost midnite, checks the long array of gold trimmed clocks behind her of various time zones and points to one that is close to 11:49 PM. (winks)

Khanak laughs while Shaan waves and walks out of the office nodding at the guard.

The elevator is empty and inviting.

They step in, she leans on the wall of mirrors, since her much of her back and waist are exposed the center brass rod, is freezing cold. She recoils.

He is not saying a word, just watching her.

A couple more get on on the 17th. These two stand three feet away, no touching no hand holding, no suggestive grins.

He walks over to the 50 or so spots labeled "Visitor" and remotely unlocks the doors.

Khanak: Trunk mein hai!

He holds the passenger door open and waits

She walks up to him/the door.

Khanak: you should go back to work if you are busy. I can take a cab (aloof)

Shaan: (bending down to her ear, she can feel his lips on the edge) Thanks for the reminder.You show up dressed like that on a Friday evening Khanak. Work is just not an option right now"

Warm color suffuses all over her body.

Shaan: Lets get out of here!

Takes her things and dumps it in the back seat.

Shaan: Did you have a good day?

Khanak: Really busy! But good.

Shaan: Are you here from work?

Khanak: Yep!

Shaan: Have you eaten anything?

Khanak: Nahi, lunch khaaya, with a friend

Shaan: did you know the guy at the lobby was hitting on you?

Khanak turns toward him in shock

"I thought he knew me. Since I don't remember anything!"

Shaan: You need to step out of the reverie once in a while (sees a muscle clench in his jaw)

Khanak: I think you are just imagining it

Shaan: when we (guys)are interested in some one, that's the exact lines we use (barks, almost)

Khanak: Looks like you've used it quite a bit!

He ignores that jab

Shaan: You are wandering about in strange neighborhoods at night looking for "forms", you are completely clueless about the attention men are paying you. (pissed and baffled)

Khanak: I am not an idiot!

Shaan: Ofcourse not!

Pause.

Shaan: We can do the US Visa interview on June 2nd! (boom)

Khanak: Oh!

Her heart races noisly, she can hear the blood pumping, swoosh swoosh in her ear.

Shaan: when do you have to go back to work?

Khanak: Exactly a month from today. June 13th.

Shaan: Monday is it?

Khanak: haan.

Shaan:If you get the visa on 2th, can we leave on the 3rd?

Khanak: Umm''. (nods gently)

Shaan: Is that a happy nod or a "Whatever" nod!(grins)

Khanak:I ve flown only a couple times. I am terrified. (trembling voice)

Shaan: I won't be flying the plane so you have nothing to worry about (smirks)

Khanak: But''.You will be with me! (barely audible)

Shaan: Yep!(firm)

Shaan: Dad has a condo in Beacon Hill, we don't have to go into a hotel.

Khanak: (looks at him and smiles) Oh! Beacon Hill?

Shaan: Haan, do you have family? (curious)

Khanak: No! Just a friend from college, not even a friend, the same batch I shud say, she had an internship in Boston for her Masters, she had posted an update at our FB site about restoring a home in that area.

Shaan: Really? That's awesome!

Khanak: Isnt that where John Kerry owns a house too?

Shaan is shocked looks at her, distracted from the road.

Shaan: Do you follow US politics? (indulgently)

Khanak: I don't have to follow it. It stalks me where ever I go!

He laughs out loud. That wit! Abiding wit!

She is embarrassed by the obvious compliment his laughter indicates Looks out the window.

They've left the city a few miles behind. Its dark and quiet towards their approach

Khanak: Kahan ja rahe hain?

Shaan: Marve Beach!

Khanak: Oh!

Khanak: Is your brother in town?

Shaan: yep! (smiles) (taps the steering)

Shaan: Radio?

She shakes her head.

He finds a spot. Its past 9 PM. Things are quietening down in this edge of the world.

It's a beautiful nite, breezy, cool, the sea is loud and noisy, she can hear the froth from the car.

He takes off his shoes and socks.

He helps her out with a "If you want you can leave your shoes in the car"

She steps out, the breeze is strong enough to carry her.

She turns around towards the car, tucks her pallu into her waist and grabs her hair with both hands, affording a view of her waist. He is waiting, hands tucked in his pocket watching her struggle with the winds.

She takes her center clip off and looks for a place to set it, he extends his hand, she smiles and places it on it and scoops her hair and reaches for it, is unable to restrain all her hair, locks escape on the sides freely.

He walks up to her, pinning her on the car door, not touching her at all

She looks up at him in startled

Shaan: You do realize the pact you talked me into after the wedding is practically impossible to do?(husky)😳😳😳😳

She suddenly realizes what he is talking about.

Edited by aditee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow aditee,
u updated..will be back..
*off to read*
u r just killing us..i dont like it when it ends like this..feeling hyper..wish to read the next part immediately..u r a wonderful writer..
wat did she realise?wat was the pact?
the blue lines have its own after effect..me wandering in shanak land now..savouring them..
continue soon aditee..
Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hawttt n next part will totally take me sumwhere im dying to go...heaven...lol
super aditee just super:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Ads...ur writing tkes me to a distant Dreamland.😳...distant it is!!lol...ahem ahem... Besides keep writing as mre than the wedding m eagerly waiting for Boston and the adventure henceforth!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Bhagwan!! After this line in blue how am I supposed to bid good night & go to sleep!!!?? Its a big O-M-G!!! THUD!!!
I too didn't get it at 1st but read it 2 times loudly to get the drift!! No Mr. Gujral I am sure she herself will break the pact & release u from the deal! I am 1000000000000% sure of it! If some1 like u is with a girl that pact should be far far far away from one's mind. 😆 I mean Khanak made up an excuse to come & see u on a Friday night all dressed up & u think she will adhere to the pact, no way!! 😃 I am guessing, hoping, expecting & praying before she answers, her answer will be all muffled & smothered in a kiss & then they will go to dinner as if nothing happened & then will fight on some trivial issue & part their ways only to meet after a week or so & will pick up from where they left off!! 😃
Man I have never thought so much about my life the way I obsess about these 2.
Ok now let me put on the reverse gear, I started at the very end. Well can't blame myself after that line in blue! 😃
I can so picture him turning on his chair sitting like that looking up at her & then casually back at the monitor. She hesitating whether to enter his cabin or not & he beckoning her a little later. It was so perfectly portrayed to me.
Both conscious of the other to the fullest extent & yet not showing it. Talking about that 'unimportant' file when all they want is each other's company for the rest of the evening. She won't ask whether he is free & he won't offer the information. 😆 Its hilarious at times. And yet u could feel the crackling chemistry, the vibes in the air.
See how I can comprehend Shaan so well, I can see him laughing at the jokes of his colleagues about them as if its a very common thing without giving out much info or reacting in any way, he is very casual & carefree that way. Khanak obviously would be all beet root red if she faces that.
And I was happy today I found a big resemblance to Khanak, I am very forgetful like her & so many a times I have faced this situation like her & I was totally clueless as to how, where or when I met that person though I don't think I was being hit on! 😆 So went 'hmmm' when I read that was the tactics of guys.
And I could see the clenching of his jaw when he said that! I can't see him bashing a guy black & blue for hitting on his would-be wife but he will be there as a wall between them for sure! 😆 After marriage I get a feeling there will be a lot of changes in Khanak's life. She will have a personal car to start with, no locals for sure, she won't be allowed to go to unknown places to meet strangers for anything...& the personal agendas I am not venturing into 😆, but otherwise rest her work & stuff will remain unchanged I guess. 😃
Paula is the sweetest! Hahahaha she went to their baby now itself!! And he seriously didn't hear that part?? He has a hawk's eye & too sharp an ear to miss anything about her, I am sure he must have heard that. Some time later he will reveal it to her, may be on some other day & time or on their honeymoon provided Khanak remembers about it. 😆 He is famous for that with that memory of his.
And today he was CHECKING her out big time! I am surprised he could hold off till they arrived at the beach. I get a feeling he will flip everytime she wears a saree! He won't ask her to wear it everyday but whenever she does he will be...lets just say his hands will find it difficult to be in the pockets!! 😆 Saree can be very elegant, classy & sexy if u know how to wear it properly & very important, decently!! Nothing can beat this garment.
Ok a small query, weren't they supposed to go sailing for their honeymoon? Then why the apartment now?? So they will initially stay in the apartment & then sail later?
I am so floating now, can't concentrate what else happened! So will end it here! But before that a big hug to u & a big big thank u!! U made my day, rather my night! 😃 Off to sweet dreams about them.
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Posted: 14 years ago
I want a 56c right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hmph!

ye kya hain ... aise tangake rakhtey ho tum log...

Purple line was nice ...😉

Lovely part ... She is all decked up for him and he is finding it difficult to handle his feelings 😳😳

and then u cut it out!!! ufff ... 😕

Ab jaldi utho aur update do ... there will be a couple of them over the weekend na??? plllzzz dena ...

~Cheers,
Dish
Edited by dishbhan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow Aditee 😃
What an amazing part 56B just loved it 😃
After reading the blue line i didn't know what to post i am speechless u are a great writer 👏
Ur blue lines are just amazing superb 👏
Yesterday i was reading Casa from the beginning in office as it was Friday had got some free time after work
I am addicted to this FF just love ur writing and i keep reading when ever i get time
Thanks a lot for this wonderful FF Casa 😃
PS: I just wanted to say this to u before I really love this title
Casa di Sogni (House of Dreams) so much. Perfect name for the FF in the second thread
U are awesome
Thank u very much (Mikka
Nandri) 🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum dear..really want 56C now..pls...hurry...
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG !!! the best blue line ever !!
I so agree with shaan 😉

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