-SS- EK HI KHWAB -Uptd Epi Pg 32 - Page 4

loved the prologue saaz..........

And the next saga begins...

what can I say.. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT...

Even though you changed Suraj's character into a city ka buzzzzy man.. you left the brat Shaan and ziddi kiddish Khanak as it is... good work...

A small thing like Rum and Raisens Ice-cream can bring two people together... and it is such things that make people instantly connect... not diamonds and money...

waiting for the next part.... jahan bhi Shaan jaega usse Khanak hi dikhaii degi!

Thanks to everyone especially…

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@Shal: masterpiece ka tho pata nahin..i really hope ki I don't lose interest for lack of time

@Ammu: yes, the smile is what shall be Shaan;s death…

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@Anu: Aisa ho sakta hai ki tumhare comments mujhe khush na kare…I really hope the first part is upto your expectations…

For those who pressed like: Me likeee….

Update coming up…

Part I

It was a joyous morning in the Khandelwal home. It was a day to celebrate; this was the third year in a row that the Khandelwal group of companies had announced a large profit. The previous week was spent in announcing bonuses and promotions for the staff in their companies and at home. In fact, a grand success party was to be held that evening. Sunil and Akshay are on the phone discussing last minute arrangements and Mad and Boo are planning their trip to the parlor that afternoon. Harilal and Dharam are scampering around dealing with the arrangements. Shaan is on standby duty which he is dutifully undertaking by sitting at the breakfast table, eating toast and skimming through a bike magazine.

He smiles watching the rest of the family join at the breakfast table..

Akki: (patting him): Kya haal hai chottey? So all set to become an executive..

Shaan: I am great, bhaiya. I guess agle hafte se mera apna office hoga..

Sunil: Of course, Shaan, I am proud of you, woh music company ka deal handle karne mei tumne jo leadership dikhayee hai.. I think you deserve more than an office (winking at Akki), kya kehte ho Akshay?

Shaan: (rubbing his hands): You mean my own secretary..

Mad: Shaantanu..

Boo: Please..don't tell me..

Akki: Uff oh..Shaan, its better than that..

Shaan and Akshay drive into the parking lot of a BMW showroom. Shaan is all grins and Akshay is happy to see his brother finally joining the family group and yet emerging on his own. The whole family is extremely proud of him.

Akshay: Any car..all your's!

Shaan: Come on, Bhaiya, what car?? Agar aa hi gaye hai.. to lets live a little..come on..lets check out a Motorrad or even a Husqvarna. Kya kehte ho? (with a huge grin)

Akshay: Go..Aish kar..

While Shaan walks towards the bikes, Akshay's phone rings, he leaves him to attend it, and seats himself on one of the displayed motorbike on the floor of the sprawling BMW showroom.

And..

There through the mirror of the bike, he watches her running around a car, with a bunch of keys in her hand..laughing away..he immediately gets off the bike and turns his head..to see the same guy following her..around the car..he can hear her laughter and the guy's incoherent words..and the jingling of the keys in her hand mixed with the clinking of her bangles..He wants to walk towards his dream..it has come back and is so close..he thinks..but is stopped by the ringing of his phone..

Nat: hello, Shaan..aaj shaam ko kitne bajje pick up karoge?

Shaan: Actually, Natasha, main Dad aur Bhaiya ke saath jaana chahta tha.. I know Dad wanted to introduce me to some investors.. if you don't mind,.. tum bhabhee aur Mom ke saath kyun nahin chalee aati,

Nat: Oh, okay (with a little bit of disappointment)

A disappointment Shaan does not detect because his ears, eyes and mind are strained elsewhere..he watches her while he hangs up the phone with Natasha.. yes, he can still walk down.. but this time..Akshay returns..

Akki: Arrey Chotey, aaj ke raat ke preparations mein there is a problem, hamein wapas jaana chahiye. Lets come back on Sunday..chalega?

Shaan: Of course, bhaiya, chalo chalte hain

Shaan turns back to see her one final time to imprint her again..she is holding her waist with her fists..the guy she is with is..who cares what he is doing!...Shaan smiles and puts his DGs (dark glasses) back on, she's imprinted now.. a new vision is born..of the same dream.

Khanak: Oh ho..rai ka pahad mat banao..nahin tho main tumharee nayee gaadi mein nahin baithne waali..

Suraj: Tum kabhi baaz nahin aaogee..tum and tumhari pachkani harkatein..chalo abhi..

Khanak: Main nahi baithoongee..hmph!

Suraj: Acha baba, sorry..ab tho baith jao..

Khanak: Baithoongee..lekin baat bilkul nahin karne waali tumse..

Suraj: Pehle baith tho jao..phir dekhte hai..

Khanak: Haan..dekhna hi padega..kyunki sunne ke liye main baat jo nahin karne waali..

Suraj: Hmm..chalo Khanak..

The gardens at Catholic Gymkhana are beautifully lit, soft music plays, sprawling banquet seating is being taken care of several attendents serving and at a far end is the dinner buffet arrangement with an open bar attached. Champagne is flowing at the Khandelwal Group of companies' celebratory party. After being introduced to ten rounds of people, Shaan stands at a corner sipping champagne. There are quite a few cocktail dresses here, he thinks. It is a mixed bag. And there through the reams of black cocktail dresses, aunty sarees, uncle suits and black bow attendents milling around enters his dream in a white saree with sequins..with hair flowing like silk and that smile..please nobody wake him..while she moves towards the buffet laid out and makes her way straight to the ice-cream counter.

Shaan: (with his flirty smile) : Hi, sweetheart,... I am Shaan

Khanak: (looks confused)..Jee?? Yeh sweet nahin, ice-cream hai.. (and walks away)

Shaan: What the hell?? Yeh kya ho gaya ...(and follows her).. Jee, maine kahan mera naam Shaan hai..

Khanak: (seated at one of the tables eating her ice-cream): Acha!?.. bathiye na..

Shaan: (grins, shakes his head and takes a chair next to her): Thank you..

Khanak: (shrugs her shoulder): No problem.. aap bhi Khandelwal group mein kaam karte ho?

Shaan: (smiles adoringly): Haan, aisa hi kuch, tumhe yeh ice cream bahut pasand hai?

Khanak: Haan, yeh mera shehereela pyaar hai..

Shaan: (with a confused look): Kya? Shehreela?!

Khanak: (animatedly) ..Haan, jab se main sheher aayee hoon, yeh waali ice cream pata nahin..ek tarah ka nasha ho gaya hai..mujhe pata hai, door rehna chahiye..lekin mujhse raha hi nahi jaata..(puts another spoonful in her mouth and then hand gestures to him)..aap khayenge?

Shaan: Nahin Nahin all your's.. aap Bombay mei nayee haan..

Khanak: Haan, kuch hi mahine huye hain..main (looks around)... aap kyun nahin khate? Phir dekh leejeye, ice-cream khatam ho jayegee..

Shaan: Don't worry, mujhe pata hain kahan se aayee hai and waise bhi there's lots more..main kabhi bhi khaa sakta hoon..

Khanak: Kya? Ice cream aapki dukaan se aayee hai..?

Shaan: (laughs): Dukaan?!..nahin I meant, I have lot of it in my fridge, ghar pe.

Khanak: Acha..

Shaan: (small flirty smile): Tum chaho tho ghar aa saktee ho, ice cream khane..

Khanak: Main kyun aaoon? Aap ice-cream leke mere ghar aa jayeeye..

Shaan: OH hello? Main tumhare ghar kaise aaon..mujhe tho tumne apna naam bhi nahin batayaa..(bending forward towards her and grinning flirtatiously)

Khanak: Haan so tho hai..(grinning back)..

Suraj: Khanak..kya kar rahee ho..ghar chale..tumne khana khaa liya..

Khanak: (turns to Suraj): Khanne ki kisko paddi hai..do cup rum and raisin jab kha liya..

(Shaan cannot take his eyes off her, regrettably does so, stands up and puts his hand forward)

Shaan: Hi, I am Shantanu Khandelwal ..

Suraj: (shakes his hand): Of course Sir, I am Sooraj Mehta and this is Khanak.

Shaan: (lets go and waits for her to take his hand): Hi, Khanak (with the best smile he can wear)

Khanak: (his best is nothing to compared to her's): Jee, Namaste.. (with folded hands)..

Shaan: Sure! Namaste..

Shaan fists and smiles. Suraj and Khanak take his leave..and walk away..

Suraj: Tum bhi na, kissi ke saath bhi..shuru ho jaate ho..

Khanak: Khana kaisa tha?

Suraj: (rolls eyes): Tum sun bhi rahee ho..Woh mere boss ka bhai hai..

Khanak: Acha? Tumhe pata hain tumhare boss ke bhai ice-cream ki dukaan chalate hain..

Suraj: Khanak!!!!.

And they both burst out laughing..

On the drive back home, Shaan is looking outside the window in the back seat..oblivious to all the discussions Sunil and Akki are having..until he hears..

Akki: Sooraj Mehta?

Sunil: Haan, excellent chap..bahut hi competent..

Akki: Ek saal se hain.. maine uskee team bhi badha dee hain..

Sunil: That's good..aaj woh apni biwi ke saath aaya tha kya?

Akki: Acha woh uskee biwi thi?? Mujhe tho pata bhi nahin tha ki woh shaadi shudda hain..

Shaan stills..his stomach does a plop, he is sure everyone has heard it..except his heart..because his dream prolongs..

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Tum ne sari mei uras lee hai

chaviyaan mere ghar ki aur

chali aayee hai bus yoohi

mera haath pakadkar

Ek hi khwab dekha hai maine....

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Review Mandatory

What a beautiful dream it was ! ! !

sazzy will be comes shortly

Originally posted by: saaaz

Thanks to everyone especially'

@Deepali: Jab taare zameen par chalte hain'aakash zameen ho jaata hain'us raat naheen phir ghar jaata'who chaand yaheen so jaata hain'For those who pressed like: Me likeee'.

Update coming up'

Omg sazzy my fav songs dear ..loved it and thanks for remambering me that awesome song
My fav Gulzar wrote the songs and that song was excilient🤗
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lovely saaz i loved khanak shes sooo funny n shaan d maha flirt
loved it pls continue soon:)