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Simi

@simikr

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Saaz!!

Kya baat hai girl!!👏

Dil khush kar diya hai tumne!!

I loved the phone incident and the jostling in the mandir scene..written so well. Shaan already feels possessive towards her without wanting too!! haiii ..lovely!!

Cheers, Simi

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Manita

@-Manita-

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Wonderful............................it was too good !!
loved that you are not rushing through it. It proceeds slow and subtle, not losing it's essence, even for a second.
Loved the subtle nuances.......he noticing her anklet......she thinking he has things to remember the interaction, she doesn't have anything to take back with her........Beautiful, I had appreciated previous parts too but this part was extra- ordinary !!
loved Mala daadi as daadi's friend and their girl talk........so this daadi has a life other than being a daadi.......lovely !!!!

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deepali

@-Deepali-

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Nice Update Saazzy ..Will be back Later with My comments

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#104

oh ho saazy...awesum awesum..what can i say more..and thanks 4 the long update , hope next will be longer...i m greedy u know....

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-Ray-

@-Ray-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#105

oh sazzzzy!!!! Loved the update😃

I was really nt expecting it to come so soon ...knowing ur reputation😆 .... so big THANKU for that.

ur this ff is just like our old rbo...in a new mould😊

'baiko'........hai....another fav wrd of this forum...:)

...nd I had to quote this like...

Shaan: (steps back) rehne deejeye..(what if her hand senses his drumming heart he thinks)..chaliye yahaan se..

I can imagine his expression here😆 .... this is so shaan type dialog.

.....but I wonder how wll they come together??!!

....next update bhi jaldi de de.....pleeeeeeeeez😊

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#106

hei saaz,
that was a lovely update..so both r getting along..rum n raisin ..wow..favourite of both..wish shaan knows that she is not yet married..but still he is not able to control his feelings for her..continue soon saaz..dont make us wait for a really real long time pls..

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purvi08

@purvi08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#107

hi saaz

read the last 2 updates

excellent👍🏼

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shiksha_03

@shiksha_03

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#108

hey it ws a realy nyc part pls continue soon

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@Medusa..

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#109

Awww saazy....it ws such a cute part......!!

Their meeting.....n thn thinkng of each other...

'Dream cm true..'hope it happens wid shaan...😳

everything ws written beautifully..........!luvdd every bit of it.........

very well written.............

n d last lines..ahh...it ws beautiful......

wonderful updatee..........

do cont. soon...................!

Luv,

shama..

Edited by shamasallfav - 14 years ago

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-SYS-

@-SYS-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#110

SAAAAAZZZ!

🤗

I read this whole part with a smile on my face! Sachi!

My most favourite part in this update was the whole mandir meeting. You wrote it SO well! For me this was where the title of your SS and your writing collided head on. There was such a dream-like quality to it. You know like one of those dreams that you know are a dream but have such clarity in them.That was how it felt to me-Shaan's perspective wise.

Loving the parallels you're drawing from original RBO and incorporating the elements in your SS according to your requirements.

Want to know why Natasha was concerned when Khanak's name was mentioned.

This part really seemed like the ideas just flowed.It shows!

Once again-BEAUTIFUL piece of writing.