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Just.Shanak

@Just.Shanak

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#261

Awesome is the word

Each sentence is written beautifully

I loved the detailing and the description

loved them telling Megha that it is a game

Loved Shaan thinking of her as Khadoos and she turns to be a stunner

continue soon

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-Unknown-22

@-Unknown-22

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#262

Simii...i love your updates..you just have this special way of writing and capturing all your readers in making us feel as if we are there....really can't wait for the next update...please could you PM me too ..thankyou xx

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Simi

@simikr

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#263

@ Nishi: Thanks dear for reading and I loved yr comments!! Will keep me going!! 🤗

@ Heena: wow, thanks so much dear!! It means a lot to me! Will surely pm when I update!!😃

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deepali

@-Deepali-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#264

Omg..simi..another Super Duper Hit Update👏
All Update was Just amazing
NurseDsuza and her comments of shaan wonderful and ambrassed to shaan
Excellent poem as usel ..heart tauching..loved your poem
Romia and JUliat theam Just amazing..very beautiful
waiting for next update

The sound of your step

The laughter in your eyes

The scent of your skin

You slowly reel me in

You invaded my dreams

You encroached my senses

Now I am happily helpless

Having lost all my defenses

👏👏👏

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#265

😍 **sigh**.....Loved it Simi👏⭐️.....Can't wait for the next update😃

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ZARA ALI

@AzaraA

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#266

hey simi dear again a rocking part very well going really enjoyed it .....

update soon and thx for the pm .. :)

luv zara

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#267

Hey Doc 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

loved the update.................

awesome, amazing.................loved megha's convo'

shan thinking doctor agarwal as tough & heartless...............

loved nurse D'suza...........

khanak pinched him..............lovely

finally shanak met.................

i want to know more

update soon..................

thanks 4 the PM.................

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#268

Hi,

Real good ya ... his imagining her as a strict disciplinary and his interaction with nurse and that weirdo doc .. sahi tha ~!~!~!~!

The end where she PINCHES him and he shouts "OUCH" is just hilarious !!!!!
And of course the description of her eyes ... haaye!!!! That will be Ouch movement, her eyes piercing through his heart....

Please update the next part ... yaar tum log aise tangake rakhtey ho ... my breath is caught ... I can't hold it for 2 days I'll die.

Pls jaldi update karo na....

~Cheers,
Dish