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Posted: 14 years ago
aila ye kya tha ice cream muuha pe rak kar cheen le mummyyy 😭😭😭 simi make it fast or else i will die and faint hundred time before ur update trailor he itna hot ha picture aur kitna hot hoga hayeee maar jawa
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Simi, excellent scene in Khanak's surgery. Can't wait to see this couple get married. But the courtship leading up to it is just as good. Hai I love Shantanu ❤️ and I love the way you've given us his POV thoughout the FF.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Aussiegal

Hi Simi, excellent scene in Khanak's surgery. Can't wait to see this couple get married. But the courtship leading up to it is just as good. Hai I love Shantanu ❤️ and I love the way you've given us his POV thoughout the FF.

Wow thanks for bringing this forward and yr comments make me feel really good!!
Am going to update now!;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Guys, here is the much awaited update..hope you like it! If possible I'll squeeze another one in a couple of days!😃

Human part 19 A: Vampires and Encounters with Dr D!

OMG! I am going to marry a Vampire...

Khanak turned around on her heels...

Surprise! Surprise! She also wears cute glasses! Soon she will change into a Bat and make me her latest meal! I'm loving it!

You!! Khanak removed her glasses in haste...

No don't do that! You look like a pretty nerdy teacher! And ridiculously sexy...

As she looked at him in nervous confusion, he came up, took the glasses from her hand and put them back on her face, flicking the tip of her nose in the process. As she tried to back away, he moved closer so she was hedged into a corner and couldn't move without brushing against him. She looked around, and not finding an escape route leaned back against the wall, closed her eyes, knowing that looking at him would make her thoughts run wild.

Get away from me! She croaked.

Why so?

You are too distracting! I can't think!

I don't want you to think. I just want you to concentrate on me. Just like at this moment I can't think of anything but you. His voice like melting honey.

Khanak felt dizzy, holding her breath, wanting to touch him, wanting him to burnher skin with his fingertips.

But what about Nurse D'Souza? she sighed..

She's in my pocket like thousands of other women. Aren't you jealous? He caressed her with his breath.

Her eyes popped open and her lips parted, as she looked in to his eyes to searching for the truth behind those words.

My God! You kill me... He whispered in her ear, his breath lifting her curls, This school boy cries for his teacher...!

Young teacher, the subject of school boy fantasy

He wants her so badly, knows what he wants to be

Temptation, frustration, so bad it makes him cry

Wet bus stop, he's waiting, her car is warm and dry...

She blushed and turned her face away as his mouth came too close for comfort causing her cheeks to be at the receiving end.

Damn you! Damn you Khanak! Damn this world! He closed his eyes and banged the wall with his clenched fist in frustration.

Seeing her opportunity she pushed him away and ran to her desk.

Not so fast He shouted as he tried to make a grab for her, but he couldn't do so before she reached the intercom.

Nurse D'souza, could you please come in right now!

Are you sure, Dr Agarwal?! There was a trace of hesitation in rs. D'Souza's voice.

Of course I am, have I ever been unsure in your experience? She asked desperate as he put his arms around her waist.

Sure I will be right there!

Khanak threw a triumphant look at Shaan as he hastily withdrew his hands, an admixture of anger and frustration on his face.

Then something made him change his mind and smile cryptically at her, making her nervous once again.

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Khanak stood outside the clinic waiting for Shaan to bring his bike up front. He had somehow persuaded her to go out to lunch with him, threatening dire consequences if she didn't.

This is the first day of the rest of our lives together. And no matter what happens I want to make it a ritual that we spend some time with each other exclusively every day from now on. If I forget, you remind me and if you forget, I will. So what better way to start than a date, a lunch date!

She smiled thinking that Shaan really didn't have to try that hard, her hesitation was related more to keep up with societal obligations and norms rather than something she herself wanted. Once he realized that she wished to be close to him as much as he did all hell would break lose. So it was better to keep him guessing.

Oh Hello!

She turned around surprised to see Deepak who had materialized out of nowhere.

Hello. She smiled. She felt like smiling at everyone today.

You look WOW! He said looking her over, Hair down, a new glow about you! Did you miss me that much?

She laughed out loud amused and shook her head.

Great! A smile and now a laugh too, the Gods are generous! Maybe I should go away more often.

Yes, that would make life much easier for the rest of us!

He didn't get her sarcasm or rather didn't want to. Don't you want to know why I went away?

She shrugged, looking away.

Couple of things, one I hate playing second fiddle and my Dad thought that I was good enough to be on my own. So, guess what? I've got an offer to head the CT surgery dept., at the Midtown hospital!

Impressive! So when are you planning on leaving? (Good riddance!)

Well, I said a couple of reasons. The second one involves you!

This made her jerk in to attention and look at him suspiciously.

His smile was smug, I wanted to see how much I really felt about you and I figured that I am quite a bit attracted to you. So, I'm asking you to come away with me!( dramatically.)

Are you kidding? She said with ill concealed disgust. Besides I don't feel a thing for you.

Aww! C'mon! Your smiling and laughing when you saw me is a clear indicator of your feelings!

What rubbish! (Her irritation on the increase.) How can you assume stuff? Besides I am very happy here!

Oh Okay! If that's the reason, I can accommodate you for some time just because I like you and so does Dad! He was really pleased when I told him about us.

What? You've been filling your father's ears? I do respect Dr Mishra, but where did you get this

Idea about me? (She was at her limit but thought it was better to clarify things now for once and for all!)

I know your kind of girls, very Chaloo types. Maybe you are the worse among them, but all women are the same. They give in ultimately, you included. He said with a leer.

Don't you dare pool me with your other conquests! When I say no, I MEAN NO!(Looking around for Shaan.) Besides I am..

(But Deepak was persistent) Are you giving me a hint? Do you want something? Yes, you simple girls harbor expensive tastes. A gift of some sort, like say Diamonds? Tell me, I can afford it.

Aw SHUT UP! (She had had it!) You make me feel dirty! She said and started to walk away.

Deepak grabbed her wrist; you are back to your old ways, what's wrong with you?

Nothing's wrong with her! Everything's wrong with you! Khanak come and sit, sorry I got late getting this bloody thing out.

Shaan stopped his sleek bike in front of her; he had his helmet on which completely hid his face.

Dr D. came to stand before him, Oh so who is this? Brother, or a cousin, haven't seen you before. Anyway, nice to meet you...he said extending his hand.

I don't shake hands with ruffians, especially those who mess around with my woman. (His voice was low and controlled.) I only play rough with such guys, but I won't because you are too much at a disadvantage. He said lifting his muscular arm, and threatening Deepak with his closed fist.

(Khanak felt a thrill when she heard these words, though she had never wanted to be called somebody's woman. She didn't mind being called Shaan's, it almost felt as if he was talking about his trophy, his prized possession. The feeling was primitive.)

It was clear that Deepak didn't like this, what gall do you possess to talk to ME like that! Who are you anyway?

Who am I? Shaan removed his helmet and gave Deepak his most charming smile.

You!?? What are you doing here?!!

Are you deaf as well as a bumbling idiot? Shaan said this as casually as possible. Can't you take a hint? He said winking at Khanak who smiled back and put her hand on his shoulder.

Shall I tell him Khanak and break his poor heart? He asked taking her hand in his and kissing it lovingly, while gazing in to her eyes, she acquiesced blushing.

Well, I am Khanak's new body guard, and our contract extends indefinitely. She has agreed to be my wife! So there you go Dr. D! I never did like you! (Challenging.)

Khanak!! Deepak's face was a sight worth beholding, You and this, this guy!? You are making a big mistake!!

Khanak's smile was beguiling, Not any bigger than if I'd been with you! Besides Shaan's a lot more handsome and a nearly perfect gentleman (the emphasis on nearly was clearly audible to Shaan who grinned back at her suggestively.)

I'll send you the wedding invite, do attend! Let's go!

Khanak smiled and waved at Deepak whose face was turning all the shades of the rainbow as he stood helpless watching them ride away.

Khanak giggled with relief, her hand holding Shaan's shoulder tightly. She whispered into his broad back,

I love you!

He came to sudden stop making her body fall on to his.

Say that again?! Did I hear an epiphany?

I Love You! She repeated slowly, enunciating each word clearly.

Three words

Make things clear
So simple
Yet so dear❤️
Edited by simiv - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simiv

Wow thanks for bringing this forward and yr comments make me feel really good!!
Am going to update now!;)

really simi..r u updating now.. kya timing yaar immediately after replying i see the update.. will comment aaram se tomoro now off to read..
Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: RB81

really simi..r u updating now.. kya timing yaar immediately after replying i see the update.. will comment aaram se tomoro now off to read..

I hope you will really like it!!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Tra la la la la !!!

In his face!!

Shaan on bike? *thud*

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Posted: 14 years ago
ahhh simi darling..
I LOVE U...mmmwwaaa..🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
this IF doesnt have enough emos to say wat we feel..
s s s s..i really loved it..u gave watever i asked for in this update..but y r u writing A,B,Cs..ok as u gave me the thing i asked for i'm super happy..i'm laughing..hahahaha..look at Dr.D's face..he is so 😔😔😔😔😔🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢..i'm loving that..
ok coming to the update..part of it was already a teaser..however i'll comment for that too..
khanak is very much out of control in his presence..i would so love to see her initiating things later on as i said u..well said khanak..u r too distracting..i cant think..i appreciate for accepting the fact to shaan..(simi y dont they have some spl name for each other when they r all alone..it would be lovely na..like jess has doc & jingles)..
as far school teacher n school boy LOL!!! wat is this comparison shaan..(u r not a school boy yaar..)
nautanki khanak she asked nurse d'souza to come to escape from shaan..but he is maah nautanki n he got wat he wanted..going for lunch date..(a bike ride..my wish fulfilled)
Dr.D u came at the wrong time..simi u should have made either shaan r khanak slap him tight..is this the way he talks to khanak..(ye lo thapad..who dhonon tumhe chod ke chale gaye..mein tumhe deti hoon...hmphhh*fumes in anger for talking to my sweethearts like that)
idiot cant u pick up the sarcasm she show whenever she talks to u..wat do u think of urself haan..GOD hai kya..do u think all girls think of being with u..dont think of girlls like that..n u included khanak in that list..n silly loser..u suggested her diamonds as gift..she doesnt want even a single penny from u..n who r u to decide abt her life..u didnt even have the courtesy to ask to her..no one wishes to live with u..n u informed ur father..hmmm..kya socha tune khanak ko..tum kahoge n who maan jayegi kya..
u grab her wrist..how dare..(shaan u could have removed the helmet n give him a punch with that..ahhh..u make me sound as a saddist Dr.D...)
ha..LOL!!!y cant khanak have a boyfriend..u r asking whether he is a bro r cousin..silly..
love u shaan for saying "especially those who mess around with my woman" this..khanak too loved that..and this too.."She has agreed to be my wife! So there you go Dr. D! I never did like you! "..
yayyy!!!!they drive away in the bike..n khanak said I LOVE U..(simi is it the 1st time she is saying it to him in words..) expected this reaction from him n after all wat is there in a bike ride without having a fall like this😳😳😳😳😳..
so this is the reason for my I LOVE U simi..🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 loads of hugs..
Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: RB81

ahhh simi darling..

I LOVE U...mmmwwaaa..

???????😕😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
arre wait karo yaar..editing my comments..i'm typing it actually..

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