5th March '11-Written Update

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Shanak Bedroom
Characters: Sunil, Madhavi, Shaan and Khanak.Oh and huge pink teddy bear (Vattie-Shaan iss per practice kerta hoga😆)

SunAvi tell Shanak they want to talk to them.Shanak are intrigued.Sunil and Madhavi hand Khanak teddy bears and clothes saying they saved all this for this day and it is all Shaan's.
Madhavi shows a red T-shirt saying it was Shaan's favourite, wore it every evening.Sunil interrupts with a and if he didn't get to wear it he wouldn't wear anything else.Khanak's cute 'Abhi bhi aisay hee hain'.Shaan hairan and shocked at her bold statement.

Harilal interrupts(this guy keeps getting cooler everyday.I swear!) telling Shaan some girl is there to meet him.Sunil speculates it might be Shaan's old girlfriends mein se koi ek.Khanak looks cutely miffed.Shaan is just all 'What is happening to everyone'
Madhavi reprimands Sunil who says Daadi Daada get their jawani back before the grandchildren come.
Madhavi leaves.
Shaan's head on his hands.
*daydream*
Shaan surrounded by lots of children with one on his lap.Trying to feed the kid.Pareshan.(okay the kids were too irritating.I would've slapped them.Shaan showed remarkable restraint.Just to let you know, I LOVE kids.Ainwayi mein don't be hating on me)
*daydream ends*
Shaan says Chodo mujhe out loud.Khanak runs to him and asks him whats wrong.He excuses himself and leaves.
Khanak looking at Baby Shaan's things(okay pink teddy bear now looks like a mutant bear and mouse)
Khanak standing in front of the mirror trying to check for a bump😆
Says that Bai says that when a girl is about to become a mother she knows so I can't be peeregnant. (I begin to think this girl needs a few basic biology lectures)
Then she says but what about the ultis and chakkars.Followed by a 'Mein peeregnant nahi ho sakti ussi din dhulwadi mein hee tou...' (I heave a sigh of relief.She DOES know her basic biology.Good girl.)
She starts talking to the Pink Mutated Thing.
Says everyone is under some kind of a misapprehension. I should go tell everyone the truth.Especially to Shantanu.

Rahul-Car scene
No shiny shirt today
Rahul driving
Imagining Jenny
Crying
Smiling
Driving
Imagining Jenny
Leaving car
Monologue(I shall leave the surprise intact.DO go and listen.)
Anyway I was talking to my sister during the scene.Not my fault.She interrupted.
Oh just found out Jenny is Rinny


Shaan-RinnyJenny scene
(I hate myself for volunteering to update today)
Rinny tells Shaan she is Sam's friend
Shaan asks where and how is Shaan
Rinny tells him to relax.Asks why he is so upset.
Shaan again asks her why she is here
She says she brought a message from Sam-who is in America.
Shaan says what message vessage.We are besties.I shall call her and ask.
Rinny says faltu mein you be wasting time.Sam wants to go far away from it all.Apparently Sam wants to suffer from amnesia regarding her past.
(I seriously don't get the bestie love here)
Shaan says Sorry but aap bahut jaani pehchani lagti hain.Hamara kabhi saamna tou nahi hua
Rinny says Political Science class.Still remembers her bench.
Shaan says sorry ji.Mein college vollege zyada gaya nahi.Woh bhi Political science jaisa boring subject.
He remembers Rinny Sharma from Political Science first bench.I want to kill myself then and there.
Says you used to be so boring padhakoo types now look at you.WOW. (I gag)
He imagines pregnant Khanak coming down the stairs.
Khanak reaches him.Flat stomach.
Rinny and Khanak introduced.
Khanak whispers to Shaan that she wants to talk to him
Rinny says I should go (Smart girl I think.Now go and never ever come back)
Shaan says No no.Stay and have tea (UGH)
Shaan Rinny start talking.Khanak ignored.

Khanak wonders what she should do since Shaan is busy with his friend.Thinks I should go tell Ada and Mummy Ji.


SunAvi Room
Sunil staring at a lipstick and wondering why women do makeup.Some philosophy about make-up and women follows.
Sunil being all romantic
Call Madhavi hot(Madhavi looks as freaked out as I am)
Khanak comes in
Sees Sunavi in compromising position-Relax its just a back half hug type thing-makes to go back.Madhavi stops her.They make her sit down
Khanak tells them she is not peeregnant
They refuse to believe her
Tell her to go rest.
Apparently there is a surprise in the evening.

Rahul scene
Song sequence with RaJen FBs interspersed with Rahul wiping his tears.

Lounge scene
Begins with Shaan saying Jenny bhi badal gayi😆
Then he tells Khanak he is late because RINNY ayi thi and he had gone to drop her
Khanak trying to tell Shaan she isn't pregnant
Shaan busy with his own thoughts and dialogues.
Then Madhavi interrupts.
She says Helloooo my romantic RLBs
Shaan says RLBs?Madhavi says Romantic Love Birds😃
Khanak grins and Shaan says Oh GOD Mom.
She says come downstairs.
Shaan refuses
She says grow up father to be
Shaan again upset.
She says surprise for Khushboo.
Khanak and I both confused.

Rahul scene
Gets off of red car and stands by red gate wearing purple shirt
Dramatic music
Attempts to call-RinnyJenny I presume
FAIL

K Family scene
Khushboo returns from spa
They send her to her room
OMG!!!!!!
AKSHAY IS BACK!
BEST PART OF TODAY
Akki-Boo hug
Also get to hear Chote! (Dil bagh bagh ho gaya)
Akshay and Boo go to their room
Sunavi tell Shaan to take Khanak to her room
Shaan tells Khanak to go.Says he has to make a phone call(Me angry.I wanted cute Shanak scenes.Sigh.)
Sunavi take Khanak to room.
Shaan wonders how he will tell Khanak that he isn't ready for such a big responsibility

*episode ends*

Precap
Khushboo reveals she is preggers but doesn't want it due to Akshay's busy-ness.



Sorry
Was my first update ever
Thoda random hoga
Please forgive
And ummm I might have changed actual dialogues in there but the essence was retained.Piramise!




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Posted: 14 years ago
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I do feel sorry for you.Seems a song on RaJen!AWWW,my poor baby!

But beautiful update.Loved it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow For such a so so episode lol you updated it with such spice!! Kudos Yumna!!
Very well updated!!
Loved your () into brackets comments especially!!
👏👏👏👏👏Thanks hun!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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cute epi........shaank were maha cute n sooooooooooooo happy to c akki back.................kt was super funny n yashu was super cute wid her cute face expressions.....loved d epi n im sure khushboo wont abort d kid...............thnks fr d update dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely update!! Mann khush ho gaya..😳

it takes a hell lot of courage to update an epi like this. You need a hug.

*hugs*🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ all
Thanks

Smitha and Jess-
Are you guys kidding me
I was hating myself every second of every minute for having volunteered for today.


Vattie
Thank you hai ji
I just thought of you everytime I looked at the bear😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😆😆😆😆😆 Yumna.....what a day to update nah....😆😆😆 Loved it...not the epi dear...but your Update...especially keeping Rahuls Monologue a suprise for all of us 😉....😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
I see that you noticed how J nah Rinny was made Shaan's long lost college...what ever....😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I'm doing this while reading ur update🤣🤣🤣🤣

I loved your update...u shud do it more often and put more of ur input🤣 it makes it fun...

so Shaan is being like ur SS shaan...I loved it! that means we won't get to hear Shaan finding out bout Khanak is not preggy till after he talks to her...oh they are going to revolve this track now where Khanak would try to make him a man and he tries to avoid the whole thing...

this shud be interesting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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K Di
Rahul's monologue was kept a surprise for technical reasons.
Hope for Shanak cuteness on Monday.
Maybe Shaan thinks back to SR thinking he wont be able to do all that now he is going to become a dad😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -SYS-

@ all

Thanks

Smitha and Jess-
Are you guys kidding me
I was hating myself every second of every minute for having volunteered for today.


Vattie
Thank you hai ji
I just thought of you everytime I looked at the bear😆

hadd hoti hai! My teddy even has clothes....lol....dont ask their origin.

And its bigger no fatter though..lol...and white. not pink. I hate pink.

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