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Posted: 14 years ago
wow aditee...
the blue line at the ending is just killing..really i too started worrying where did shaan go?but he called her na..how come she didnt think he might search for her..really u write in a way that we dont want to stop reading..next update jaldhi yaar.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Adits ...
I am not gonna be relieved till the engagement actually takes place !!!!
I am still worried abt the reaction to actions ... LOL !!
Next part Jaldi Update Karo Na..Pleej !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Aditee 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

superb updates...

at first dulhan is gayab...

when dulhan comes & now dulha is gayab...😆...loved it...amazing
description...


shaan comes with his hands in pockets & khanak panics where is shaan...

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the line in blue...awesome

want to know more & what happens in their engagement...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Aditee, the suspense is killing me!! Plus bit my nails to the bone ... I must be logging on very hour at least during the day to check for updates. Please post an update soon. Thanks so much for writing suchc a beautiful FF. One of the best I've read ina while..xx
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 45

The engagement
April 23rd
Mangal Kunj
She turns around in total shock, her eyes are filled with tears, makes him feel like a heel, but somethings have to be done if battles have to be won.

He approaches her after sliding his shoes off, checking her out while he walks. She looks stunningly beautiful. His heart races at the thought that she dressed up "for his sake". Every minute spent away from her was sheer torture. Seeing her look so beautiful and to think about the fact that she had spent time readying herself for his benefit was good compensation. She has henna on both her arms, almost upto her elbow, just like the day of Dhruv-Trishna's mehandi nite. Today both her wrists and are covered in in blue bangles, and he notices something, for the first time in 4 or so months, he sees a little blue round bindi between her brows. His heart skips multiple beats. The bare forehead was a thing of the past, the blue sparkled and shone, she looked more beautiful than ever.

She is unable to meet his eyes, he walks up to her, her eyes are moist, her face is flushed, and she seems distraught

Shaan ( bends down) "Rebellion Khanak?"

Khanak: Mujhe kaam tha (cagey)

Shaan: On the day of your engagement?

She is sure he can hear her heart, she can hear it pumping, in her ears. He smells like him! It's a different white dress shirt today, but no traditional clothes.

Khanak: you are not wearing Indian clothes. (stares at his dressy shirt)

Shaan: Running away on the day of your engagement? (persistent)

Khanak: Ask Ritu I was working (bends down)

Shaan: I don't have to ask I know'''.. kis se bhaag rahi thi tum Khanak?

Khanak: Aapse! (spontaneous)

Their eyes meet and lock until eternity.

Shaan breaks the trance

Shaan: Did you know how worried Dadi was? (angry)

Khanak: Even you went away!

Dadi walks in, is mighty pleased to see her fave grandson back by her fave bahu.

The couple is quiet.

Dadi: Where were you Shaan? Where did you go?

Khanak is curious, so waits for him to respond, bends down and pretends to re-arrange the things in front of the shrine.

Shaan: Oh! Not too far (is all that will come out of him)

Dadi: Dekho Khanak kitna pareshaan ho gayi

Shaan: Who to dekh raha hoon Dadi.

Dadi: Ab tum dono Bhagwan ka ashirwad lo, every one must be waiting, lets get started.

They stand side by side heads bent hands joined in prayer, stand for a minute, as if it was choreographed both bend down to the floor to pay obeisance. Dadi is stunned by that act of coincidence.

She hands Khanak the thali, Khanak offers prashad to Shaan. He accepts. Dadi urges her to have some, she takes a small sliver. She looks up at him, his eyes concur and both in unison touch Dadi's feet.

Dadi is moved, blesses them, and hugs both together saying "You two need each other, learn to acknowledge it"

From that moment on, he did not leave her side one minute that evening''

They speak less than five sentences to each other the whole evening but stay together.

Dadi does a theatrical introduction of her fave couple, people clap, laugh, crack jokes.

Things happen with clockwork precision. The ring is presented in a huge silver tray nestled in a bed of flowers, family gathers, Shaan's friends want to know why there is only one box

Shamim: Gujral, teri engagement kab hai?

Shaan: Funny!

Nachiket: He has made the contract binding for her, while he gets to be foot loose and fancy free. (laughs)

Dadi: Knock it off guys, without the ring, my grandson is way more committed than you will all ever be (gives Shaan a squishy sideways hug)

Sunil is happy, her parents are overjoyed, Dadi picks up the ring box and hands it to Shaan, he opens it with eyes focused on her bent head.

Ritu: Shaan, I had asked her to take a picture of the ring on the phone, but isne kiya nahi (complaining)

Shaan: Oh! Really?

He extends his left hand out, after placing the box on the tray, she hesitates, people tease and cheer, she looks up at him and places her left hand gently on his, his fingers close around her palm, and slowly slides the diamond and topaz rock on her finger.

There are collective "oohs" and "Aahs!" everywhere.

Clapping, loud music, "Congratulations Gujral" "Welcome to the dark side"

"Khanak get ready to become a Gujral soon". Hugs are freely passed around.

Shaan leans forward and whispers in her ear "Congratulations on the engagement Khanak Mistry"😳😳😳

It's a while before she realizes her heart has stopped beating.

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Posted: 14 years ago
hei aditee, u r an awesome writer..really i dont want the update to get over..finally they got engaged..eagerly waiting for the wedding more than shaan waiting for it..this was superb...

Nachiket: He has made the contract binding for her, while he gets to be foot loose and fancy free. (laughs)

Dadi: Knock it off guys, without the ring, my grandson is way more committed than you will all ever be (gives Shaan a squishy sideways hug)

do continue soon..
Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aditee, where is it? I can't see it 😭
Ignore..just seen it 😳
Edited by Aussiegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Now I Get it !!!!!
Alll this while ... There was something pricking at the Back of My mind ... tat Something is Amisss !!!!!

Shaaan;s Engagement Ring is Misssing !!!!!!!!!
There was no mention of shoppping for his ring !!!!!!
Adits ... Your writing makes me dream droool... Inspite of something amiss...I wasnt able to reallly understand what was it ... You write so welll ... My thinking abilities go for a tosss !!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
*Sigh* I just died ! LOL...
What an exceptionally beautiful part...Loved it...I hope she has got a ring for him...which she slips onto his finger in private and says she didnt do so in front of all coz it wasnt as extravagant as the ring he got her...!! Maybe sum family heirloom ring...(ohh...I guess only guys have that...lol...did she get late coz she went to buy a ring?)
I want her to give him a ring...Even if its a simple platinum band !!
Edited by togepe30 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aditee
Wonderful update again !!!
Ur writing seriously is haunting me !!!
I get up in the morning.. and first thing i do is to check if u ve updated...
same thing in the afternoon or evening !!!
I become so restless if i don see an update !!!
U have magic man !!!
PS. abt the ring .. I don want a ring.. just for the simple reason that my hand obsession thingy doesn make me want a ring on his finger !!!

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