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Originally posted by: aditee

You are the kindest Souma.

I am besides myself with joy!

what an awesome compliment!

How ever trivial the story might be, I will rejoice at the fact that, something about it made you write so glowingly!

Kuch to baat hogi mere narration mein jo tujhe itna pasanad aaya hoga😳

Thanks so much!😳

I am hoping to unravel the puzzle of Shaan and Khanak, like Sys once said "They are like a jigsaw puzzle they fit perfectly"

In more ways than one! Ahem!

I am hoping to bring out all the emotions, subtly and discreetly.

The journey is just like any other arranged marriage is, usually.

Its long, unknown, arduous, yet the most rewarding romantically and emotionally!

PART 50 B

1 PM, Shivneri Nagar, Chembur

April 30^th

Shaan: The jaw? (grins, deepening the crease)

Khanak: Hmmm!

Shaan: shaven or unshaven?

Khanak: Bo... actually the first, I don't know the second well enough...

Shaan: I don't shave on weekends, until I am ready to go out to see friends in the evening.

Khanak: Oh! (feels his thumb on her ring, hand still on his cheek)

Shaan: But I promise to change all that,... twice a day... whether we go out or not.

Sends a ripple of color through her body, scorching her...

They just look at each other...in what seems like their most favorite pursuit these days.

Khanak finishes off with " And those eyes" (unsteady) Shantanu!"

His response is a kiss, glorious, melting the insides, charging every pore, lighting up every sense. Clive Christian mates with Indian Rose... and for the first time ever, his right hand is in her hair, behind her ear, his elbow on her damp shoulder.

His head is back being cupped by his left hand, her eyes are shut, a lock of hair lays over her left eye...her left hand lays on her ribs, he can see her body tremble. Sees the sparkle of the ring, smiles "she is wearing something he gave her! She hasn't taken it off, she wears it all the time. She wants to wear it" a smug smile forms on lips like a child that got his parents to agree to his plan.

He pushes the lock behind her ear, she opens her eyes and watches his hand again...

Khanak: Aap late to nahi ho rahey? (softly, worried)

Shaan: No Khanak!

He notices her refusing to meet his eyes. She pulls her blouse primly, getting up. "We should eat!"

There is a damp patch on the oblong cushion where her head was. It has her scent.

He sits up, and picks up the laptop.

She does something in the kitchen,

Its like he is there every day. Its like this is how life should be. Its like he always belonged there. Its like the minutes after a tremendous rain shower.

Originally posted by: Souma.N

Isse chota nahin ho sakta??!!!😆

Loved the lines in blue/ pink...the level of comfort is just so endearing...so is the mention of the ring in almost evry part since their engagement...

Thats how it is na...keep staring at the new entity on your body!!!!

Originally posted by: aditee

Arey

yeh to bus is baat ko celebrate karne ke liye likha ki you are online.

Nahi to main soney jaa rahi thi

See you love, in the morning!

My overactive imagination will come up with a spicy back and forth over Shaan and khanak's lunch... may be!😉

Bingo! on the ring... it just reminds her of what is in store😳 it reminds her of the man😳 it reminds her of where life is taking her😳

At this time in almost every girl's life (again there are exceptions) its all about teh wedding and the man.

Poverty and world peace can wait...