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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#1081

Lovely !!!

But soo short...!

Awesome Blossom tha !!

Just the way he easily merged into her dialy routine...and how she carried on with her daily chores inspite of him being present there...No pretences that...Ok...he is here so I shud sit with him and make small talk...She went about her cleaning,cooking as if he werent there...OR as if he'z always there...I loved it !!

Fresh and Crisp like the early morning dew !! And fragrant as a newly bloomed Mogra flower !!

Thats the flavour your FF gives me...!!

*Inhales the part deeply and sighs with satisfaction*

Continue soon !!

Luv,

Vandu

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-Ray-

@-Ray-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1082

Lovely update !!!

thanks aditee😊

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1083

hey Aditi...

loved it...

short & cute update...

amazing lines in pink & blue...loved it...

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#1084

Originally posted by: Souma.N
Aditi...most importantly congratulations for the 50!!

I really hope and wish from the bottom of my heart that you publish this one day...

And yes...I had saved this compliment for the very end but I will pass it now...It does not get bigger than this.

The reason why I love the works of Tagore is that he ends his tales on a note which leaves things and emotions to the imagination of the reader...more than meets the eye...he does not conclude it for them...allows them to put their conclusion...wonder and wander about the story and spead hours in speculation...thats what great stories are about...they supplty endless food for thought...

You and Casa make me feel the same way...just like I feel when I read his works...

They say that there is not one emotion in the world that He has not captured...and I hope by the end ( hope the end never comes but still) I can say that you have covered all emotions that passes between two people who begin as strangers and end as something else.

Congratulations again!

You are absolutely right about her writing skills Souma, we are left to think of other aspects on our own giving food for our thoughts and wings to our dreams 😳

So true ...

Aditee ... Love your writing Dear!!!!

~Cheers,
Dish

Edited by dishbhan - 14 years ago

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#1085

Read a lovely poem for the ShaNak of this story...

As I sit here and daydream

Of the first day we met

I can still see your eyes gleam

And I feel as if I won a bet

You're mine to keep

For now and forever.

I love you with all my heart,

Our love is so deep

It's as if we are a piece of art

So I'm yours and you are mine.

~Luv is in the air,
Dish

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Aditi S

@aditee

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1086

Originally posted by: angel_9
hey Aditi...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

congrats for 50 parts...

ur updates r always amazing...leave us craving for more...

u can see that in ur thread & that causes spamming of ur thread ...i don't believe in spamming so i never say that i want u to update even when i want it...well everyone here waits for ur update & i too wait for it...

i believe i never express myself...

so i agree with Souma...

ur story is something which attracts me immensely...i don't know but when i login see if u updated or not...

loved ur update...

shanak in ur story r really something...

the way u express their gestures, feelings,& their convo amazing...wonderful...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

loved the bai's part where she thinks to call watchman ...awesome description...

loved the lines in pink...

continue soon...