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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

Arey, yeh kya kiya?

I am immensely skilled at getting myself into trouble, wilfully, I dont need external assistance.
I will update today, more than once.
For sure!
Thanks for reading it, loving it and pining for it.
I am immensely touched!



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~Cheers,
Dish


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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 49 C

Shivneri Nagar, April 30th Saturday

Noon

Shaan: I should probably warn you, your quick wit is a complete turn on to me! (flicking her earring with his thumb)

Khanak: I should employ it more often then? (smiles disarmingly)

He approaches her.

Ritu yells from inside, "Mystery, have you seen my brown bag?"

He steps back politely, letting her pass.

Khanak: Living room mein hai!, (she sifts thru the tens of things lying on the sofa and finds the bag)

Shaan: People address me as Gujral, do they call you Mistry? (smiles)

She hands the bag to Ritu and is back.

Khanak: Nahi, sirf Ritu, she calls my m-y-s-t-e'r-y, coz I am such a enigma!

Blushes when he looks at her deeply!

Shaan: You mean even Ritu does not know many things about you?

She looks down at his socks, the Nike swoosh''.. "Not really!" (softly)

They both are doing their favorite activity, just quietly looking at each other, when Ritu walks out "Abhi radio ka volume zyaada nahi hai?" (unaware of the crackle) Ritu turns it down

Khanak walks into the kitchen, gets plates and spoons out and sets it on the coffee table, he picks up the things on it and sets it gently on the divan. She nods in a "thanks".

Khanak: Breakfast to khayegi na?

Ritu: Kyon mera hissa toone Shaan ko khila diya kya?

Khanak is mortified, "Nahi to!, main to apna hissa unke liye bacha rahi thi" (laughs)

Shaan scoffs " Right!"

There is a very comfortable dynamic in the room, Khanak serves, Ritu brings the pickle out, Shaan pours water.

They talk about work, weather, commute to and from Chembur. Ritu whines about locals and how all her cotton suits look like crap when she gets into work.

Khanak: Aap driver ko laaye?

Shaan(confused) Kyon?

Khanak: Would he like to eat? (sincere)

Shaan is amazed at her simplicity, he has not had one of his girlfriends ever ask him if his driver ate.

Shaan: He usually eats outside while waiting Khanak (gratified)

Khanak: Oh!

Ritu is sitting on the sofa with Shaan, Khanak is on the divan on his side. She signals asking him for second helping, he extends his plate, Ritu notices the unspoken cues, smiles to herself, the bowl is still a lil warm, Shaan places his hand underneath hers, without touching hers, in case she accidentally lets go.

She wants more water, there is none in the bottle.

Ritu: Shaan paani lekar aaogey?

Shaan: Sure!

Khanak rolls her eyes. "Nahi I can get it"

Shaan stops her and brings a bottle, pours some out for her, for some strange reason watches her drink it.

Ritu: Chalo, I will give you a 7/10 for that (setting her plate down and grinning smugly)

Khanak: Abhi kaam par lag ja, main tujhe 10/10 doongi

Ritu: Mere hottie se kaun milega? No! (walking into the back room to grab her bag and phone). Ghar ka kaam tu kar, tujhe to mil chuka jeevan saathi, ab meri baari😆

Khanak: Main mil leti hoon! (casually grinning)

Shaan: I believe you are engaged now? (softly)

She noisily picks up the silverware from the table, accidentally knocking down a half empty glass of water.

Khanak: It would be all pure and unblemished.

Shaan: Don't push it Khanak.😳

Ritu is out. "Wish me luck Shaan! Then all four of us can go out together!" (claps her hand and gushes)😆

Shaan: that would be fun! (laughs)😊

Ritu: My Mom gave me three years to find myself a guy. I feel in love with you at first sight, but Mystery stole you. I gave up and told my Mom to find a guy (open, uninhibited)

Khanak stares at her in shock.

Shaan leans back on the sofa, smiles "You should have told me you were in love with me!"

Ritu: I didn't because I thought I had the time. I was sure you were not her type (smiling at Khanak) Saare din mein who 5 sentences bol le to bahut badi baat hai. She likes to be unobtrusive and sorrounds herself with unassuming people, except me ofcourse!

Ritu: I am making chai, so shut up if you want some (from the kitchen)

Shaan: You are funny, Ritu!

Ritu: I am serious Shaan, yeh tumse kitni baat karti hai mujhe batao?

Shaan looks at her standing in the kitchen, on cue she turns from facing the stove to meet his eyes.

Shaan: Not much! (still looking at her)

Ritu is going through her bag, so misses that exchange.

Ritu: I found it extremely romantic the way you pursued her, what ever little she told me of it (truns to Khanak, who by now is no longer facing the living room) Mystery who story abhi baaki hai, ek mahiney mein poori ho jaani chahiye.

Khanak: What ever!

Ritu: Do you guys have plans?

Their eyes meet again across the house "Don't know!" 😳

Ritu: Good if you do, great if you don't. If you are still around when I return, we can go out to dinner, aur tab main tumhe iski saari embarrassing baatein bataoongi (Khanak brings the chai out)

Khanak: Do that! And all these things will go out the door. All your favorite things go to Ritwik so he can gut it.

They laugh and tease each other some more.

Khanak: Good luck (hugs her warmly)

Ritu: Thanks! Pray he is atleast half as good looking as Shaan. Warna we'll have to exchange!

Khanak: You can have him now! (looking at Shaan)😳

Shaan gives her a "Oh really?" look😳

Shaan makes a call, hangs up, " Ritu, Pradeep is downastairs, he can give you a ride to Juhu"

Ritu: Really? (Hugs him) Thanks! You are the best (walks by the door and picks out a matching pair of sandals)

Looks at Khanak "Isko yahin rakhte hai na?" (winks)😉

Khanak: We can't... he would be too demanding! (for his ears only, tho spoken aloud).😳😳

Shaan: I promise to price myself competitively! 😳(as Ritu lets herself out)

Edited by aditee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi,

ahem ahem ...

Am thinking what to write about it ... their silent exchanges are too good yaar ... all details put in here of a casual weekend are so good, I cannot tell you ... am searching for some seriously hard hitting words .. (but alas ... my vocabulary is not that good)

Now that they are alone and the steaming should start, you stop the update ... I am expecting if I stay up another 2 hours I will get one more. If there are any chances then I will stay up dear ... pls confirm!


~Cheers,
Dish
Edited by dishbhan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Aditi, Thanks for the update! Very nice but what happened to the cooker??? LOL. waiting for your next update. Cheers Chook!! 👍🏼
Edited by Aussiegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey Aditee...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

thanks for the update...

wonderful update...

loved their quite & unnoticeable gestures ...amazing description...

Ritu ...she spokes what she want to & khanak speaks only 5 sentences a day ...love this contrast & wonderful description...

their convo...awesome description...

&

ur lines in blue...amazing...as always...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Souma.N

Aditi di dekho mujhe gaali padh rahi hai aapke obsessed fans se...( mein family hoon😳)






I forbid you to say anything about Souma, Dish!
She is the sweetest, not to mention as honest as I am
Ginti ke chaar hain honest log, I will not allow you to silence their voice😃
Souma, I am here for you!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

I forbid you to say anything about Souma, Dish!

She is the sweetest, not to mention as honest as I am
Ginti ke chaar hain honest log, I will not allow you to silence their voice😃
Souma, I am here for you!


😭

Aur main???

(Honestly boli tho itni galiyan khayi maine ke puch mat 😉)

~Dish



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Aussiegal

Hi Aditi, Thanks for the update! Very nice but what happened to the cooker??? LOL. waiting for your next update. Cheers Chook!! 👍🏼

Cooker, abhi set kiya hai gas par, seeti mein der hai😆
Taz, this is not a run of the mill story yaar.
They wont get into a clinch or paw or hug at the drop of a hat😃
It will happen rarely but hopefully very satisfyingly😳
Love stories can be told without getting physical, yeh baat main apne aap ko prove karna chahti hoon
The ideal/idol I look up to for that is Golden RBO!
The weekly SRs of today dont cut it for me, unfortunately!
He can be topless, in a tub, she can be coy, it just does not cut it for me!
I am still floating in the crackle of April-October!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Haila Aditee!! Can I use Ritu's line?? Thoda modify karke, 'isko main rakh leti hoon?'!! 😆😆😆
So a domestic side of Shaan! He helping her out in putting the stuff from the table to the divan, pouring the water out, holding the bowl!! Wow, another score from my side!! 😃
Its so real & spontaneous, that is ur forte, I could see it all right before me without seeing the curtains flow, or music in the background or flowers & candles to bring the romance out! Romance or Love can be felt in a kitchen table sitting around & having regular home cooked food, it just had to be put correctly!! Bravo, u r am amazing writer!! I seriously wish the CV's read this & get some pointers.
Yet the possessiveness could be felt in all that camaraderie! His looking at her almost saying don't push too hard & her 'u can have him now' & his quizzical look at her, those small eye interactions at the right moment & right pauses everything makes it romantic for me!! 😃 I am a hopeless romantic fool! This is what keeps me going.
Again love Ritu, she gives a wonderful picture of Khanak without even knowing herself that she is giving some information about her nature. This is all good for Shaan to understand Khanak better, how reserve & quiet she is, almost secretive!! I loved the name 'MYSTERY', suits Khanak so well. I like Khanak in ur story too, seriously!!
Now the million dollar question is they r left alone, how r they going to busy themselves up?? 😃 And next update will be a golden jubilee! Pressure cooker bhi khana bana liya ab steam kahan se aayega?? 😆 Kuch toh banta hai boss, after that they can fight & squabble away to glory! Again me & my romantic mind! 😉
And did I tell u I simply loved the casual way he came on a Saturday unannounced, it looks so normal for other couple but with these 2 where things r not normal it does makes a highlighting point for me!! He is besotted with her I tell ya! And she is no less though she doesn't show it!!
And this one is Khanak for sure not Ritu!
Ritu: I am making chai, so shut up if you want some (from the kitchen)
If Khanak talk 5 sentences Shaan does 10 or 15 but I don't see him yapping away, so they r so made for each other!!
I can't tell u how much I love ur Shaan, Khanak & their story! Its turning out to be an obsession for me!! Will eagerly wait for the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

Cooker, abhi set kiya hai gas par, seeti mein der hai😆

Taz, this is not a run of the mill story yaar.
They wont get into a clinch or paw or hug at the drop of a hat😃
It will happen rarely but hopefully very satisfyingly😳
Love stories can be told without getting physical, yeh baat main apne aap ko prove karna chahti hoon
The ideal/idol I look up to for that is Golden RBO!
The weekly SRs of today dont cut it for me, unfortunately!
He can be topless, in a tub, she can be coy, it just does not cut it for me!
I am still floating in the crackle of April-October!

Teri iss post ke liye ek bada sa jadi ki jhappi!!! I ditto eac & every single word! Till date whenever I watch Apr-Oct it gives me goosebumps!! Which today's show doesn't! Tells u a lot actually!

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