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Anu80

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Posted: 14 years ago

#211

Smitha wonderful VM... Exzellent Choice of scenes that fit the Song perfectly

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purvi08

@purvi08

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Posted: 14 years ago

#212

hi saaz thanks for the wonderful ff🤗🤗🤗🤗

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adeelaanwar

@adeelahuju

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Posted: 14 years ago

#213

HI SAAZ......
MARVELOUS WORK AS ALWAYS.........
NO DOUBT U ARE A GR8 WRITER ...
KEEP IT UP👍🏼
AND THANKS A LOT FOR THE PM

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ZARA ALI

@AzaraA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#214

saaz dear awesome epilogue i just loved it plz come with ur surprise soon............

smitha's vm on saathiya it was sooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful i love the song it was awesome superbly done by her .................

luv zara

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-SYS-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#215

Back with my comments as piramised:

Okay so I shall just tell you straight off that the epilogue made me 😳 big time!

See the thing is with good writing I always end up imagining KT-YM acting out the scenes while I read it tou them doing this was a bit too much.Had to control imagination and blot out vivid images in a hurry before I could read further!

That out of the way-the epilogue was very cute, warm and fuzzy! I love epilogues because they show you that there was a happily ever after, after all.This was the perfect example.Khanak continuing with her Dhulwadi trips, the MIL-DIL and the SILs bond shone through so clearly, even thought there was no direct interaction.THAT is the mark of good writing!

Khanak and her art and painting classes-Yummy!

Shanak nok-johk still intact.Makes one happy for them.Whenever I see ShaNak being happy and at peace with each other I just fast forward through their journey since the start and feel at peace.And grateful.

Funniest part for me in the whole SS was:

The part about the make of the fan.There so matter of factly in between the blush-worthy scene.Loved it!😃

As for the VM--->SONEY PE SUHAGA!The song was so apt and the scenes totally reminded me of many parts of your SS.Tailored to fit.

Smithee, if you're reading this.You're a genius!

As always a crushing one for you:

🤗

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smitha

@SPN_JD_Addicted

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Posted: 14 years ago

#216

Yumna,this is the joint collaboration.Saaz gave me the phone convo idea and I got the letters one.Thanks for the sweet comments.This is for u

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Jessica

@jparker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#217

Sigh Saaaz.... 😍 SUch a sweet beautiful end. And I do not want it to end!!.. I dream on and on... yes Intezaar..

Such a befitting end. And true when you say, love is something that brings so much into a person's life. It also brings the pain of hurting and the soothing balm too, it brings a wealth of understanding, knowledge, happiness.

And so so apt is the song!! Yippppeeee lovely song as the befitting climax to this lovely story...

Saathiya tune kya kahaa

Yoon na karo tum intezaar

maine kiys hain tumse pyaar...

Pyaar mein sab kuch zaayiz hain!!

Uff, words escape me when it comes to penning down my feelings as I am still numb with this thrill of them being with each other. Their sweet nok jhonk has pasted this silly smile on my face... and I crack up as soon as I see the fan!!!😆😆😆😉😳 Sigh just beautiful.

Kisses and hugs for him reaching there and ending her intezaar, and sighing at their trademark way of touching their foreheads!!😍😳

Thank you for bringing daadi!! Mwaa. Loved.. loved the way Boo and Mads take on a confused daadi and aid ShaNak.. ahem.. when they are urrmm.. busy!!😆😉 Mwaa for that!!

A different platueau I am on after reading this update and for me this is not the end, but another sweet beginning!! Sigh lovely....😍

Waiting for more.....😃👏👏👏👏👏

Thanks also to Smitha for the lovely VM!! Wow.. it is so beautiful and in this update is

Sone pe Suhaaga!!😊👏⭐️

Brilliant Saaaz & Smitha!!👏👏👏👏👏

(Last but no the least, I can never take credit for this work of excellence lady!! You are brilliant and it is all your hard work Suggestions are nothing if you don't work on them!! But thank you😳)

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