FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 107

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Manita-

"Why did you drag a chair, you can sit here." He signaled towards the arm of the chair where he sat.

"Mr. Shantanu Khandelwal, this is not a place or time for romance….." she said tilting her head.
"Ms. Khanak Sharma, I have a very simple philosophy……a die-hard romantic can romance anywhere, anytime………..others simply can't……it's not their forte….."
"But we are 'not' here for romancing…" she narrowed her eyes with a typical frown hiding a little smile.
"Really? Aren't we?...okay, let's get to working." He said rubbing his hands and opened her laptop...

As I sigh and write each word let me tell you states the present condition of my heart... To start with this little cute and sweet conversation hit me where I am the most vulnerable...
Aaayyy haaayyy... Shantanu aap ke kya kehne.. In this time of utmost seriousness and presence of mind, you can be a die hard romantic!!! Mwaa... Awww Khanak you are one along with Shantanu now.. Nothing less will do.. share you will everything with him...😳 This banter that I quote stole what little sanity was left... 😳

Originally posted by: -Manita-

"No…………tell me the password." He said with an authority, after which it was impossible to refuse him. No one dared to say 'no' to him if he decided what he wanted and demanded with authority. Khanak was no immune to it.

"Okay……….Shantanu……..." she said giving up and went and sat in her chair.

"I am asking the 'password'…….." he looked at her slightly irritated.

"The password is – 'Shantanu'……..S.H.A.N.T.A.N.U…………….." she answered back in the same tone.

A chuckle left his lips when he heard this and he tried to hide it by looking at the other side for a moment and then he placed the back of his left hand on his lips and used right hand for pressing the keys for his name.

It irked her a little, "I knew that you will laugh……"

As i sigh even more I flutter my eyes and hold my heart... He is a cheeky cute adorable jerk as for her she is the sweetest. Of course Shantanu, could you not guess her password dammit!! Bade aaye.. aankhein dikhaane waale.. this one is for you my doll Khanakdi.. mwaaa... I am so so happy that she put that egoistic hi sahi that silly and happy grin on his face... password.. S.H.A.N.T.A.N.U Brilliant Khanak.. sigh but he is right.. password should be something the most difficult to figure!!! But another little leaf etched in my golden memoires... so beautiful simple yet touches your heart... with the deep and serene and loving relationship that they share.. making me extremely jealous... Especially when she tells him that he is difficult!! 😳 That cracked me up lol.. Khanak I love you!!! Yes I love your Khanak Mani, then shantanu for sure is a gonner...😳

Originally posted by: -Manita-

She bent down as she was sitting on the arm of the chair, looking carefully on the screen of her laptop, while her loose silky hair swayed in the air from the AC and brushed his cheek. He felt several fluttering butterflies all over his face, making his lips go dry and moving down to make his heart beat in tandem. He pressed his lips lightly for a moment and released them while slowly inhaling the intoxicating scent of her perfume. Her scent, her proximity and her silky hair touching his face, sent jitters across him. One end of her lace stole lay leisurely on his knee and her hand brushed against his. He closed his eyes for a moment and opened again trying to sneak a glance at her. Turning subtly to look at her from the side, he sighed a heavy breath. She felt his sigh and turned her face to look at him while sitting in the same position.

She was stunned to see him looking at her with his breath held still and their eyes held each other's. She realized that their faces were too close and she felt the same flutters rushing through her in and out and she kept looking at him without blinking. For a while, everything around them, came to a standstill……

My heart is still racing as I read these lines again... This feeling that is called love, why does it make you feel this.. how can one describe this so beautifully... Yes it is like a compulsion like it is in your very blood... as one can't stop feeling this need... this urge to be near your beloved.. Sigh Shantanu, your dilemma is undoubtedly a test... and yet you always prove that you are through in flying colours... Love need not be physical.. it need not show that you have to voice it... but love definitely can be felt and experienced better if you say it out loud. I would feel no shame what so ever in expressing love.. and why should not one do so...
Shantanu's eyes were telling Khanak something that she already knew... his dilemma yes, but also was assuring her that he loves her... Even if he said it a thousand times raised to inifnity and over he would continue to do so... And that is what I love most about your updates.. you touch people's heart.. you know their hurting veins.. and sigh I am one condemned for ever... I shall be enslaved by your FF and ShaNak...😳 that one look said it all... and I express it from my heart...
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This reply was for the emotional part of yopur update. Which I will always love and be entranced by...as I enjoy again these moments though short lived they were, they will last me for a long time...😳😳😳
Such a beautiful... and enchanting update...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Flawless and Brilliant... Comments for the technical part of the update shall come later in another detailed reply. You deserve nothing less than that...
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Posted: 14 years ago
kya baat hai mani...awesum hai yaar...luvving it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey hi..
u knw after reading this i was so relived..
n yaar what to shanak r the best in every manner...
loved ur writing..
god bless u😛
do update soon..😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was amazing Manita! just loved it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was really wonderful,, i was imagining the story seriously,,, superb dear,,,,, loved it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
They're such a perfect made for each other couple and awe shaan is so cute doing romance while work and ooh it's kavya well that was unexpected. Loved the teamwork from Samir and akshay that helped them find evidence and akshays experience has helped a log and awe shaan trying to justify his relationship with namrata how cute and phew shaans confidence in stating that khanak is his fiance was really sweet but also saved her from getting nervous and also samir came in the right time and ooh shaan not going to get let go easily of the zarine case lol and yay they're resigning and joining khandewal group anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
manita first of all big thank u for ur long updates...superb dear..
The entire scene around the lap top conspiracy is well written and clearly good enough to be made into a onscreen story 😊 shanak what should I say ..are very lovable.😊kavya is the one I did not expect it either good suspense dear.😊
loved the whole update and guess now it is time for ur finer masage..Hugs fo taking so much pains 😊awesome in fact a300th epi special by u😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Mani please take a bow first!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

An update fitting the 5 star category or even more... Truly outstanding techinicality portrayed witha simple yet brilliance that speaks alone!! The magnitude of the situation, such seriousness and depth and also importance is swiftly conveyed with an ease in each character..
Samir - He is always there like a strong pillar helping Shanatanu.. silently like a friend should be.
Akshay - Family bonding shows through strongly here.. Mwaa to you for getting him here.. Right decision!! Brilliant portrayal again of Akshay!! strong and even if his presence is short... he leaves behind a mark of his own... like a wafting fragrance that incence sticks leaves behind... Sweet and dependable... Spreading a warmth too and assurance to the ones he loves...
Sigh not to forget Ramesh and Gopal.. hugs to them...
And last but not the least.. my Shantanu \khandelwal.. (Okay vatty and Priya fikar not I am not into the contention.. You can keep him, I just love him and happen to call him my SK... 😆) Sigh he is definitely an super avtaar!! Gosh he has my heart!!!😳
Technically this update is flawless!! Each moment youhave woven so beautifully with the lighter ones... that it never felt like it was a tense moment as it really was for ShaNak!!! So brilliantly you had the solution and I too doubted Zarine!! Gosh.. you have a brilliant mind Holmes!!!
It sure is elementary here Watson!!
And once again with this update you have me complete heart and mind as my other weakness is Detective stories.. comes second to romance!!! Sigh as much as I love ShaNak.. I totally adore James Bond!!!😳😳😳 And you my girl... are after my very peace of mind!! As in Shantanu Khandelwal, I now see JB!!!😃
Simply stupendous part!!! Mwaaa... loveeeddd it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mannu di,


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and lots of love

Thank you 😊

Love
Neha
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Posted: 14 years ago
This IS a love story.

Even in so much of drama wala update, you filled it with so much of love! *swoon*
I really like Akshay-Khanak relationship :D
"SK" sounds so sexy!!
I want this Shaan. Bas bahot hua.

That one dialogue of his "she is my fiance" in that situation in that moment did it for me. It was sooo cool!!
I had this hugeee grin while reading it!!


this was such a good update!! Eee!! Now update soon!!
This was really awesome!!!
i dont even have words to describe how good it is!!
Edited by vatsalya - 14 years ago

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