The truth of love- my first FF part 17 Page87 - Page 64

Originally posted by: shonai

awesome update👏

Brilliant writting Shilli👍🏼

they slept in the car. the morning scene was cute, she kept asking what happened last night nd he kept ignoring, teasing her. her one sentence " Why do u make me feel so weak?" 😭& he told her everything... awesome.

" adaat choot gayi Khanak, now I have no1 to give me bed coffee." & her eyes became teary...he cursed himself. they love each other so much😭

" arey tumhari..(She glares at him), I mean Aan ki..(The glare continues)..ohho! meri kasam yaar!"cute😛 yet, so meaningful👏

loved the part where he was watching the two most important people in his life- his wife Khanak nd his son Ahaan, wanting to be a part of the picture😭...superb.👍🏼

oh toh he is now the new neighbor of them. nd he helped Meghna too. 😃

Anay was cold & rude to Shan.😔 cant blame him actually.after all he is brother to Khanak, but thanks to Meghna, she came & saved Shaan from her hubby's further taunt.😆

loved the part where he saw their pic in her diary & became emotional. very nicely written.👏

aahh... finally he got sometime to spend with his lil son.😃 that was so wonderfully penned down.

" btw Meghna, kya Khanak bhi aise hi Ahaan ko sambhal leti hai?" simple yet so touching line. he have never seen his wife feeding his child, taking care or doing usual things what a mother does. his longing, his pain was clear in that particular question😭. only a father knows how it feels.

see, I cant help quoting from the update.

the new neighbor was invited for dinner. great. Khanak was trying hard to look indifferent, but he could understand that she was indeed affected.😊

aaha!! he made her accept to do the interior of his house. I like the way she talked over the phone loud enough for Shan to hear that, complete Jhansi ki Rani types.🤣

she left in the morning & he was watching his wife & son through the window. his msg was really sweet and her reply was equally bitter. i could so imagine his face that time.😆

haila!!! case against her???😲😲 but kis liye??? I bet its not for Ahaan.😊

btw, did i tell u?that i loved the name Ahaan...Shaan & Ahaan.😃

there were many parts where I have been reading with a heavy heart. nd that's what I wanted to tell u regarding ur note. I don't think your writting style is so simple, but it has the depth in it. you have portrayed ShaNak in such a way as they were shown in RBO. there characters, their fights, their love make them unique couple. your each & every update, each & every line reminds me of our golden RBO.

for me this is the 2nd Rang Badalti Odhani where Shantanu & Khanak r the same human beings but this time with a different love story.😃

cant thank u enough for giving us this fantabulous tale. A big bear huggg for u🤗

update when u get time

love

Priyasree😃

Originally posted by: poo_j

Wow!!! 👏Fabulous!!! 👏First part was so hilarious 😆and the second part was emotionally so touching!!!👏

Anay's angry on Shaan just keeps on accumulating!!! 😆Meghna's one sentence hit the right note and Anay became silent..👏True!!!

OMG!!! The starting court proceedings was so hilarious!!! 🤣cant stop from laughing!!!😆Awesome twist!!!👏 Didn't expect this at all!!! Anay can understand something is wrong..😆but others are acting as though everything is normal..😆

The dialogues are so funny!!!👏 Superb!!! Awww!!! how cutely Shaan defended his wife..😳 Khanak took charge of the proceeding and handle the situation very well..😆 How just like that she gave Ahaan to Shaan!!!😳

Khanak is not stupid to fall for this act..Shaan forgot she is an actress too..😆 At least he should ve got the actors playing the role properly..😆 It was Ansh you brought the actors..that's why it turned out like this..😆

She is not wasting any time in giving Shaan's son to him..😳 Anay is such an amazing brother..Loved the line "pata nahi bhaiyaa, but mera bache ke papa pe toh bharosa hai"!!!👏

Meghna always gives Khanak an apt advice..Awww!!! She always love him!!!😳 how lovely!!! Wish Shaan heard this..😉

At least Askha is there to tell Shaan what to do with baby!!! He doesn't even know Ahaan is hungry!!!How he is gonna take care of him???

Oops!!! Laptop got broken!!😆 Ahaan enjoys watching the fashion show..😆 Shaan is right!!!😆OMG!!! That was scary.. baby in the terrace..😲 Khanak saw that..and she called..👏

Awww!!! Khanak must be so happy seeing her husband holding their son like that..😃 and she cleaned the house and cooked too for him...😳so sweet of her..👏

Wow!!! 😃Nihaal is back!!!😊

Looking forward and thanks for writing a lengthy and awesome update!!!😊

Originally posted by: RB81

Thought am first..But am second..No probs..Will be back with comments..

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so cute, hilarious as well as touching update shilli...
The court scene n shaan's cute way of handling his son was hilarious..
the way Khanak wished to complete their little family but at the same time keeping herself away was so touching..
except for anay others r ready to hep for shanak reunion..
awaiting that to happen..

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

shaan n ahaans night out was sooo cute:)

kt wid a baby boy doing such scenes would have been a delight

hot update kab de rahi hai?????im hungry fr one😆

Originally posted by: maneesha28889

wohooo i loved the update ...😃

wow its amazing...

i was laughing all through while reading shaan and baby's part...

lol shaan arranged duplicate court...that was hilarious...😆🤣🤣

Aww khanak loves him but dont want to admit it...😕

Is aksha younger or elder to shaan??

I remember her as his younger sister who was about to marry that culprit...but you mentioned shaan calling her di...am confused😕

lol shaan shouts yuckk on recognizing the bad smell...🤣🤣

who is this nihaal???

cant wait more for the next part...

update soon...😃

Originally posted by: sweetsute

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thank u thank u thank u so much..

loved d detailed analysis and glad i could make u guys laugh and glad u liked d other parts too.

btw u like Karan Wahi? 😉

Shilli'wonderful writing.⭐️

How do u manage to put all kind of emotions in a single update. Loved all the dialogues. Sometimes I laughed like hell, sometimes felt so sorry & sometimes cried in happiness & ShaNak's grief as well. I have no words to express my feelings. I just loved the way u switch the atmosphere from the sad to happy nd then again happy to sad. Just supeb.👏👏👍🏼

Anay was again cursing Shaan, but loved how his wife Meghna zapped him " U can't stay away from your child for a month, how do you expect Shan to stay away from his child, for an year"

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The first part at the court was damn hilarious.🤣🤣 Akbar ka darbar. The judge, Shaan lawyer & their dialogues cracked me up. nd also Ayan's comment. Right after reading this line," toh barkhuddar, kya ilzam lage hai tumpe" I though that kuch toh garbar hai.😕😆

It was so sweet ' that Shaan suddenly spoke for his Khanak that she is innocent.👏

Omg!! How easily she got agree to give Ahaan to his father'😲

Oh toh yeh baat hai, she already knew what he was trying to do. Smiles a little, looks down , goes near him. He just stares at him, as she tiptoes, whispers something to his ears, while adjusting his shirt button ...just loved this gesture.😃

Khanak is always so ishmart nd Shaan is 1 numbr ka burthal.😆

Chalo, I can say , my prediction is partially true, it was all plan of Shaan to get his wife nd son back in his life.😉 Tsk tsk ' I shld ve guessed that it was Ansh who hired those theater actors. Bt he is cute.😆

Khanak on one side yearned, to b with her husband, for her complete family. but on other side she still hold herself responsible for Shaan loosing his family😭. she, watching his husband nd son from the balcony, muttered "burthal"' so cute😃

Just loooved Shaan's day with his son. At least Ashka was there to help him. amazingly written👍🏼👏

Ahaan stopped crying seeing the fashion show, he prefers it than the cartoon shows, hailaa!!! baap pe gaya hai bilkul.🤣🤣

Ahaan went to the terrace'omg !!! nd she called him, he was so relieved seeing the baby save, nd so m I. nd they slept there. nd mamma came to wake them up. She kept her hand on the baby seeing him stirring in sleep nd at the same time Shaan also placed his hand on hers'so sweet 😃

He asked her to make coffee for him'hahahaha😆

Wow!!! she cleared the mess in the house nd also made coffee'nd specially the letter'.hayeee!!!!!☺️

Great!!now even Meghna ll help to reunite Shanak.

Here's some of my fav lines

" pata nahi bhaiyaa, but mere bache ke papa pe toh bharosa hai" so touching👏

" I will, till the end of my breathe" truth😊'*sigh* I wish Shaan could hear her saying this

"tera hi dinner ready kar raha hoon yaar" adorable😆

" kya hai? Papa got hurt, but teri milk safe hai" awww😛😆

" do you keep troubling your mom also?" meaningful nd sweet.😊

"Shantanu Khandelwal! Urgh!" murmers to herself holding the pic in the frame. She is not angry nor frustrated, just smiles. awesome!!👏

Shaan had to miss his wife, b/w Happy B'day to Ansh.😃

Ooo eeemmm geee!!! Nihaal is here🥳'.nd what a dhamakedar welcum he received.

Looking forward to read the next.

Update when u r free😊

I wish I could watch this wonderful tale on the tv, KT & Yashu would ve rocked it. well, I ve a long list of stories which I want to watch on tv with our Yashran in it.

Love❤️

Priyasree

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